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Monfang

Monfang #1 · Nov 9th, 2014 · 6 · ·

Everything about this is bad.

Blackguard #2 · Nov 9th, 2014 · 2 · 1 ·

Do me a favor and never write again. That is until you learn proper grammar, spelling, structure, storytelling and above all English.

The Guardian and Friends

The Guardian and Friends #3 · Nov 9th, 2014 · 2 · ·

Truer words have never been said.

Appl3dashie #4 · Nov 11th, 2014 · 1 · 1 ·

Stupid and crap formatting, grammar and we don't do sentences like this-

Jump out of cake- Suggested Pinkie Pie

Please learn grammar PLEASE WRITE A GOOD CLOPFIC!

PLEASE STOP WRITING AND LEARN HOW TO FORMAT PROPERLY!

Stiggerzz #5 · Nov 20th, 2014 · 4 · ·

5249058
Don't listen to this guy, JBond. Keep writing, your fics are hilarious!

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