Color of Love

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Galaxy Knight

Galaxy Knight #1 · Nov 9th, 2014 · · ·

This is a mess... like aeriously, did you even look this over? The material is okay but your spacing and wording is absolutly atrocious.

Blackguard

Blackguard #2 · Nov 9th, 2014 · 1 · ·

And here I was hoping the last story was just a trollfic. I guess not and you're just incompetent.

Learn to tell a story and actually learn to write before subjecting us to this.

Datsupachilldude

Datsupachilldude #3 · Nov 10th, 2014 · · ·

My brain hurts just reading this, please tell me English isn't your primary language.

LastAmongEquals

LastAmongEquals #4 · Nov 18th, 2014 · · ·

Tragedy

Comedy

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Please, for everyone's sake, stop writing forever. You will never get your cutie mark in writing.

Seize the day 23

Seize the day 23 #5 · Jan 10th, 2015 · · ·

I couldn't even properly Let's Read this. Congratulations.

In short: This shit has sank.

And fucking shout-out to these fucking glorious lines here; Skype quotes of the century.

but suddenly he saw the bushes had sex with Featherweight.
"And Suddenly they are vampires or zombies or dolphins!?
Do Scootaloo had no family, so she was still better.
"Let's Think logically. He's a pirate, pirates like ships, the ships go by sea, by the sea beach, beach stones, rub them on different dolphins-unicorns, dolphins - dry, dry, sometimes sand, sand sometimes sugar, sugar candy in there. We go into a confectioner's shop!"
His ass was too narrow and while she inserts a huge object member Pip was poured and took the form of the ballista.
"I Think learned from this lesson. If all stallions are gay, that means I must be a lesbian, especially Twist once said how you can use cinnamon sticks for self-gratification."

CloudRunner