Fluttershy wakes up one morning and goes downstairs to eat something new for breakfast.
A bagel.
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twow443
I'm your friendly neighborhood riffer. Except when I'm not. I also write pony words and review them. I hope to serve.
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I like bagels, therefore I like this story.
lol
So this is a thing? Bagels are a thing now?
BAGELS
Ha ha ha ha weirdest plot ever twow445.
Still, I like it.
Favorited [/i]
Bagels.
You just had to.
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Two thumbs up.
Euhm.... Slice of life at its core I guess?
1836175 That was the plan.
This has been the most thrilling story I have ever encountered. A story of conflict, indecision, love and war. Never before has ponykind seen the epic conflict between garlic and jam, or the harmonious relationship between peanut butter and garlic. In several thousand years, this story shall be a celebrated example of everyday things turned interesting, and one pegasus' struggle to vary her breakfast diet. This is also a shining example of taking things entirely out of context. E.g.
It had a hole in the middle, as if something was supposed to fit inside or if something was left out. It gave off a pleasant aroma that permeated the room. Fluttershy had heard of this before, but was struggling to remember the name of it.
Huehuehue.
1836562 You lovable, sarcastic bastard....
1836574 In all seriousness, it was actually pretty good. It's a lot harder to make an everyday situation interesting, as opposed to writing an adventure, for example.
The plate had a plate on it? Yo dawg, we heard you like plates.
BAGEL
<3
Bagel pone approves.
At first, when I read this story I was all like
and then Fluttershy when she was that the table was made was all like 
and then I was finally like 
. Good story. You somehow turned a very short scene into a very long one with the detail. Good job. 
1894105 Thanks!
1888898 RAW BEAN
Fo shizzle my nizzle
Angel seems a little out of character here, or is that just me?
Lol, for some reason I kept expecting to run into some kind of plot twist that changed this from cute to GrimDark. I guess I've been reading too much Cupcakes/Rainbow Factory, etc.
This was very nice and enjoyed it very much indeed. Thank you for brightening my day. (I might just have bagels for breakfast now):
3450934 Heh. I'm happy that I was able to help.
Slice of
LifeBagel.