Chrysalis's true plan is in motion.
Five months have passed since Discord's passing. Peace is reigning, but Celestia remains wary.
Shade, tormented by nightmares and a voice in his head, is coping with the discoveries of who he is and where he came from, but he can no longer put up a brave front.
Fluttershy watches her changeling, knowing that something is wrong, desperately wishing she were able to protect the one she loves.
As Equestria rests, a great change is coming and it may not be able to be stopped.
First book is right here: Son of the Princess
Alternate Ending to Son of Chaos: Son of Peace
Second book is right here: Son of Chaos
Alternate Ending to Son of Change: Son of Death
Fourth book is here: Son of Eternity
(Cover art is credited to yaoi)
Its good, only problem I found is the lack of backstory, I'll track for more
This is gonna be good!
You should make link to previous story and link in previous story to continuation ;p
1737766>>1737869 Sorry guys! I've updated the description with links to the other books.
Interest overload...
Oh god this is an tragedy fic well onwards
Slow. Clap. Pretty darn good, I'd say.
Few edits:
Should be changed to "Why won't you let anypony help you, not even me?" or “Why won't you let anypony—not even me—help you?”
and
You've got an extra space hanging out between those sentences.
Needs an em dash for the interruption, so it's “Out of all the ponies—no, all the creatures that live here,[...]"
I think you carried out your ideas rather well here. Looking forward to the future of it.
Alright, another great chapter
Not bad, not bad. There's a few places through where some editing wouldn't go awry, but I think you did a pretty good job with the ideas we had.
OMG!!!! CLIFFHANGERED!
SO AWESOME!
Brilliant, as always. Incredibly funny and lovely
. You deserve more views for your work. 
Probably the best fimfiction i have read 
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1769853 Thank you. That really does mean a lot.
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, are a great writer.
Anytime. Keep up the good work.
I really like your "son of" stories: More plot twists than a M Night Shyamalan and a brilliant original protagonist who you really love. I love his romance with Fluttershy and the way it develops, as well as the way Fluttershy develops with Shade too. It's amazing how much hardship he can go, yet still try to stay as himself all the way through. You, sir
You deserve a /)
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Now I have to wait for the next update!!!!! Stupid cliffhangers is stupid. (Fun when you're the one cliffhanging others, not so much when you're the one getting cliffhangered lol)
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One does not simply make a cliffhanger
1803079 Heh. But I like da cliffhangers
1803577 Ah, but you see. I am no normal person
1802809 Friend did it for me.
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I'm with ya on that one! XD Pity I think they're too fun to use. Well played by the author!
ALLLLLL RRRIIIGGHHTTT. New chapter has appeared
Time to read.
No need to apologize, a masterpiece of literature takes time.
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THIS CAN'T BE ARE YOU A..... MAGICIAN?
I like it. A small editing foible that needs to be worked out, though:
When flutters goes from talking to someone else to talking to herself, you can't have the back-and-forth inside her mind like you can when she's alone. Quotations have to be reserved for dialogue alone, otherwise things get confusing FAST. You can either try to use the paragraph separation as breaks between the sides of her mind that argue, or you should reword the argument so it's more one-sided, just being Flutters arguing against her own points. Outside of that, and maybe a few small editing glitches, it's a good chapter.
I'd be just as excited even I didn't know what was going to happen next.
I'm excited
spike seal of approval
SO...MUCH...AWESOME...WRITING!!!
Just so awesome. Keep up the great, and my favorite(OF ALL TIME), story my good man.
I'm serious. Have an cute Fluttershy image to show i am.
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In fact, have another one, on me.
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Quick question what does 'On Hiatus' Mean?
1910186 It's stopped for now, but will be picked up again later.
1910200 Ah thank you
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I'll be waiting for when you get back.
OH SNAPS! Did NOT see that coming!
Well that's not good at all!
Well balls, that aint good,
YOU'RE BACK!!!
Thank the stars! Thank Celestia! Thank Luna! Thank EVERYONE!!!!!!
Here, you deserve this song:
ahem Sorry for that. Well, that was quick. Anyway... I'm glad to know my favorite writer in AALLLLL of Equestria is back writing the greatest fimfic story ever. Glad to see you're back, Twow,
Woah, that I did not see coming. Congratulations, you managed to surprise me!
A few minor spelling mistakes here and their, but over-wise another brilliant chapter to a brilliant story.
) to read it. 
And that ending; well, I know there's going to be a confrontation with Chrysalis soon, cannot wait (but I must
Great chapter
Slowly shade is becoming less shadey O_O
Hmmmmm, saw that one coming
It's always the marefriend
1972321 Or is it...
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Exactly ;3 I think I see your plan here and, if I'm right, it's very clever! Btw, LOVE your avi!!!!!
Ooooooooooooooooooh, shit son.
Okay, so Shade's scene got a bit hammy at the end, but overall, it's not a bad chapter. I think you might just be confusing "good pacing where not much happens all at once" with "it's boring and terrible".
Knew that wasn't shade right from the knock... ooooo flutters
good chapter
1972381 I'm willing to bet that you don't know what my plan is.
1981679 lol probably not
1981878 Feel free to send me a PM with your thought. Now I'm interested.
1981931 alright, let me know how close I am
I sense an plotkicking in the near future!
So I was partially right with my first guess! XD They DID take Fluttershy!
everyone needs to to hide because shit is about to hit the fan
You know a chapter is going to be EPIC when the author is just as excited as the audience.
I love this series. 10/10.
Oh ho hoh hoh, What will the Next chaper bring us?