Eternal Despair
Dark clouds hung over the normally peaceful and carefree town of Ponyville. The town had been flipped upside-down with the return of a certain azure unicorn. After making her grand return, she challenged the mare whom she blamed for her recent string of bad luck to a magic contest, Twilight Sparkle. The agreement was that the loser had to leave Ponyville forever. Thanks to the Alicorn Amulet, a mystical treasure that grants whoever possesses it enormous amounts of magical power, Trixie was successfully able to defeat her rival with little to no effort.
However, all great things come at a cost. In the end, some must learn the hard way that the price for greatness can sometimes be more than anypony can bear. The individual must then ask themselves, was it worth it?
In exchange for the almighty dark power that is granted, the current owner of the amulet will progressively become more and more power hungry. The owner of the amulet will quickly develop an addiction to their newly attained strength. If the amulet remains in the owner’s possession for too long, the host will eventually lose themselves to the artifact’s dark power.
Trixie ruled over Ponyville with an iron hoof. Those that didn’t follow her every command, to the letter, would find themselves on the receiving end of her amplified power.
The town’s folk were forced to build a private building specifically for their new ruler. Applejack had to give Trixie applesauce facials, Pinkie Pie, who had her mouth magically removed, was ordered to dance around for the unicorn’s amusement, and Flutter Shy, Rainbow Dash, and Rarity were forced to design and hang flags, which held Trixie’s face, all over the town. In a word, Trixie’s cruel magic was ruining Ponyville. She was holding the entire town captive, and there was nothing that could be done.
The miserable cries of Ponyville’s citizens were finally answered after Twilight made a triumphant return. Apparently, she had gotten her hooves on a magical amulet of her own. Twilight claimed that her amulet was far more powerful than Trixie’s could ever hope to be.
“An artifact stronger than the Alicorn Amulet? Horse apples!” The tyrannical ruler Ponyville thought to herself. “Ha! Nothing’s more powerful than the Alicorn Amulet and noponys more powerful than the GREAT-AND-POWERFUL-TRIXIE!” The arrogant mare was taken aback by Twilight’s retort.
“Care to put your amulet where your mouth is? How about another duel?”
There was no need to go another round against Twilight. She had her chance, and she failed. Another duel would only prove to be a waste of her time. It wouldn’t matter if Trixie gave her a second, third, fourth, or even a millionth chance. In the end, trash will always remain trash. “Why should I? I already beat you.”
“That’s up to you … but I guess you’ll never see the totally awesome magic from beyond the Everfree Forest. C’mon Zecora.” And with that, Twilight turned her back to Trixie and began her trot, back into the forest.
If it wasn’t for all of the corruption that had taken a firm grip on her mind, Trixie probably would have figured out that Twilight was up to something suspicious. The smart thing to do would have been to ignore Twilight and walk away, but the abnormal increase in her pride, thanks to the Alicorn Amulet, wouldn’t allow it. She wouldn’t pass up the opportunity to prove, yet again, who the superior magician was. Much to Twilight’s joy, Trixie fell for the bait like a ton of bricks.
“Wait!” Twilight stopped in her tracks as her “great and powerful” rival called after her. Trixie then called off the force-field that she had conjured around Ponyville. “Okay okay, you’re on! A second duel!”
Twilight grinned maliciously to Zecroa. Everything was going according to plan. She had Trixie hook, line, and sinker.
Beneath the dark skies of Ponyville, the stage for the final showdown had been set. All of its citizens were in attendance. Trixie would embarrass Twilight, in front of the whole town, for the second time that week. Perhaps the lavender mare would finally learn her lesson; all other unicorns are nothing but mere insects before the great and powerful one.
Since Trixie was the victor of the previous contest, it was only common courtesy for the winner to go first. “Let’s start with a simple aging spell, shall we?”
“Let’s!” barked Twilight.
“Snips! Snails!” The only two unicorns that ever believed in Trixie, even after Twilight exposed her as a fraud, rushed to the malevolent mare’s side.
With a single ruby red beam of magic that had been fired from her horn, the two idiotic school ponies were transformed into foals. “An oldie, but a goodie. Now, let’s see what your little charm can do!”
The time to cast down judgment had arrived.
“No problem. Applejack, Rarity, could you help me please?” Twilight’s two best friends had puzzled looks on their faces as they emerged from the crowd. Trixie didn’t look worried in the least. Whatever Twilight was about to do, it wouldn’t be anywhere near the quality of Trixie’s enhanced abilities. Actually, Trixie was expecting the clueless buffoon to screw up the spell just like the other day.
Twilight aimed at her two friends and fired a pink beam of magic. When the smoke cleared, just like Snips and Snails, they had been transformed into foals. Trixie’s jaw nearly fell to the ground. How could Twilight have improved her skills in such a short amount of time? Could she have been telling the truth about her amulet? No … This proved nothing. She needed to see more in order to come to a solid conclusion. “Oh, ho hum, so you can do an age spell, big deal.”
Twilight smiled and fired again, returning AJ and Rarity back to normal. After the smoke cleared from shot number three, child Rarity stood happily on top of AJ’s shoulders. After shot four, Rarity was her normal self, but AJ had been turned into an old mare. A final shot restored AJ’s youth.
“That … that’s impossible!” How was she doing this? Even with the help of the Alicorn Amulet, Trixie still needed to put some form of concentration into her spells, yet Twilight, with the aid of her mysterious new amulet, was executing such advanced leveled spells one after another, with barely any effort whatsoever. She wasn’t even breaking a sweat. Twilight wasn’t finished yet. She still had plenty of magic left in her reserves.
Trixie watched in horror as Twilight turned her attention to Rainbow Dash, and worked her magic yet again. When the smoke cleared there wasn’t one, but two Rainbow Dash’s. Duplication? Trixie didn’t even know that such a spell even existed!
The horror show didn’t end there … Twilight unleashed her magic for the umpteenth time, and fired at Pinkie pie. Trixie felt her blood run cold as the hyperactive earth-pony pranced around the area while playing ten instruments at once.
“Ooh, one more. I can turn a mare into a stallion!” said Twilight while staring at Applejack.
One flash of magic later and AJ had been turned into a towering, and well built, stallion. Seconds later, AJ’s gender had been corrected.
Time slowed to a standstill for Trixie, and the on looking crowd faded from existence. For what felt like hours, there was nothing in Ponyville except for Trixie, and her thoughts.
Even with the help of that amulet, it didn’t make sense for Twilight to be this powerful. She just couldn’t fathom how Twilight’s skills had improved so much. Trixie’s breathing became shallow as her heart started to race. Images of a proud magician turned public mockery came into her mind. She shivered from the memories of spending hours trying to wash the spray-painted insults from her show trailer, which doubled as a mobile home. Her muscles began to ache as she remembered the soreness in her body from having to spend day after day performing hard physical labor, just too barely make enough money to last through the rest of the week. There were times when she was forced to go days without eating, just so she could save up enough money to buy the very artifact that was currently failing her. How was this happening? The Alicorn Amulet was supposed to put a unicorn on par with the legendary dark unicorn, King Sombra, or so she had heard. She wouldn’t stand for this humiliation. Not again … not after her last visit to Ponyville. Trixie was shocked back into reality by her competitor, in this contest of who had the stronger amulet.
“Well Trixie, looks my amulet is more powerful than yours!”
To add insult to injury, that irritating, evil demon of a unicorn was gloating about how she currently had the upper hoof. That was the last straw. If she couldn’t outperform Twilight, then she’d simply make the lavender mare’s power her own.
“Hey! Give that back!” Shouted Twilight, as Trixie used telekinesis to steal Twilight’s emerald amulet.
Trixie started to laugh. At last, order was about to be restored! “With this amulet I shall now rule all of Equestria!”
Of course, Trixie didn’t really have any desire to seize control of the beautiful land. That was just the Amulet’s influence talking. Despite the dark confidence that Trixie was displaying on the outside, the magician was consumed by only one emotion. Fear. A boundless, and uncontrollable phobia of returning back to her old life. She’d do whatever was necessary if it meant that she wouldn’t have to go back to being a worthless fish in a body of water dominated by sharks and piranhas. Trixie ripped the amulet from her neck, immediately cutting off her bonus supply of magical power, and equipped Twilight’s artifact in its place.
Before Trixie could celebrate, one of the two Rainbowdash’s zipped from the air, and snatched the Alicorn Amulet. Oh, what did that matter? She’d moved on to bigger and better things. What need did she have for that old amulet anymore anyway?
Trixie fired a blast of lightning magic from her horn, with the intent of blasting the pegasus from the sky. It would be a beautiful display of her new power. In no time at all, her magic had successfully connected with the rainbow maned mare.
“Ahahahaha! Stop it! Hahahaha, that tickles!”
Huh? What? Did she just say … “that tickles”? She was supposed to be screaming in unbearable pain! Her blood was supposed to be splattered all over the town! That spell should have blasted her half way to Tartarus! Why was she laughing?! “This Amulet is defective! Give mine back!” shouted Trixie.
“Sorry,” Rainbow flew over to Zecora and surrendered the Alicorn Amulet. “This is going back into hiding where it belongs!”
“By the way Trixie,” said Twilight, “The amulet around your neck, it’s one of Zecora’s doorstops.”
The “all powerful amulet” that Twilight was using, fell to the ground and shattered. “No … this can’t be happening … not again … not after everything that I sacrificed just to get this far! This … this isn’t fair! How the Tartarus did she pull off those spells if that damn amulet was a good for nothing fake?!” Trixie’s body went numb, and she almost lost all feeling in her legs. She almost collapsed right then and there.
Twilight began explaining what happened to the visibly confused, failed magician. Twilight’s friends were in on it the whole time. When Rarity and AJ were transformed into foals, that was actually their younger siblings in disguise. The elder Applejack was actually her grandmother, Granny Smith. Male AJ was her older brother covered in orange paint, and the Rainbow Dash duplicate was actually another pegasus named “Fluttershy”.
“You mean to tell me that it was all smoke and mirrors the whole time?” asked a small child from within the crowd.
The extra input from the other citizens came in droves.
“Ha! Even with all that extra power, she still lost!”
“Wow, she’s pretty pathetic!”
“I can’t believe we were actually afraid of that useless unicorn!”
“Great and powerful Trixie my left flank cheek!”
“I wonder how tough she is without that amulet.”
“What a loser!”
“Five bits says she’s about to run away again!”
“Hahahahahaha!”
“Ahahaha!”
“Hahahahaha!”
That laughter … it was the same merciless laughter that she had been subjected to each time she tried to perform before an audience, ever since the Ursa Minor incident last year.
Trixie couldn’t take it anymore. The feeling in her body returned, and she ran as fast as she could from Ponyville.
“Hey look, I was right!”
“Good-bye and good riddance!”
Even as her lungs began to burn within her chest, she still pressed forward. She could have probably given Applejack a run for her money during the running of the leaves event. Even after fleeing into Ponyville’s outskirts, Trixie still continued to run. She didn’t stop until she reached her mobile home.
Trixie found herself standing in front of the mirror that hung over the sink in her bathroom. She stared at herself in the mirror silently. “How … how did this happen? For once … everything was going my way. I proved to everypony that Twilight was no match for the great and powerful Trixie. I had the whole town under my control for Celestia’s sake!” Trixie slammed her hoof down hard onto the sinks surface. How could that unicorn have sent her running away in shame for the second time in a row? “Revenge against the pony that ruined my life and get other ponies to take me seriously again … that’s all I wanted, dammit! Was that too much to ask?!”
Suddenly, Trixie’s reflection in the mirror changed. Trixie no longer saw herself; her image had been replaced by Twilight’s.
“Revenge against me? To be taken seriously? Please! You used the Alicorn Amulet to cheat the whole time, and you still lost! What a joke!”
“Shut-up …” whispered Trixie.
“Oh? Are your feelings hurt? What are you going to do next, cry like a foal?”
“I SAID SHUT-UP!” The unicorn, who was overcome with anger, slammed her hoof with all of her might, into the mirror.
Trixie’s punch had placed six large cracks in the mirror.
There were now half a dozen reflections staring back at Trixie, who was still seething with anger. One by one, each of Trixie’s six reflections turned into Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Applejack, Pinkie Pie, and then, as expected, the image of Twilight had reappeared. They were all smiling with satisfaction at their most recent victory.
“Hey, do you all wanna hear a riddle?” asked Pinkie. “What’s blue, sometimes refers to herself in third person, like a pony with autism, and couldn’t cast a decent spell if her life depended on it?”
“Oh … um … that’s an easy one! The great and powerful Trixie!” chirped Fluttershy in a mocking tone.
“I don’t know ‘bout great and powerful.” Applejack was fighting to hold back her laughter. “Did y’all see that spell she used on Rainbow?”
“Hahaha, yeah! Did she seriously think that she could hurt me with that?”
“I’m surprised that she thought that she could hurt anyone with those skills!” said Twilight. “I’ve never seen magic as pathetic as hers, and I make trips over to Canterlot’s magic kindergarten every now and then! I still can’t believe that she thought that fake amulet was the real deal!”
“Now that’s not very nice Twilight,” Rarity burst into hysterical laughter. “Even if it is true! Ha! I bet Sweetie Belle alone would have been more than enough to overpower that failed unicorn in that magic duel you just finished stomping her out in, and she doesn’t even have her cutie mark yet!”
“Great and Powerful Trixie? More like “The Weak and Retarded Trixie”!” laughed Fluttershy.
Trixie screamed like a manticore as she fired a spell at the mirror, which only reflected the spell back towards its enraged caster. Trixie was knocked onto her back by the force of her own attack. There were now black scorch marks and singed fur on her face from where she had gotten hit.
The evil reflections couldn’t stop laughing at what they had just seen. “Okay, just stop it now Trixie before you fall even lower on the pathetic list!” laughed Twilight. “Why don’t you do the world a favor and give up magic!”
That was the last straw. Trixie finally flipped her lid. She punched the mirror again and again and again. Broken glass, and blood from her cut flesh, spewed everywhere. Despite the sting in her legs, Trixie continued to attack the mirror. The imaginary reflections of Twilight and her friends had long since vanished, but she didn’t care. After awhile, Trixie calmed down enough to stop her attack. She took deep breaths as sweat dripped from her now messy and unkempt white mane. Trixie looked into what was left of the mirror once more, and what she saw disturbed her even more than Twilight’s image. Instead of Twilight and the others, she saw a failure. She saw a weak unicorn that would never be able to compete with anypony who showed signs of being even remotely decent in magic, let alone a prodigy like Twilight Sparkle herself. Due to all of the cracks in the mirror, Trixie could see her horrifying reflection from hundreds of different angles. It wasn’t just on the mirror, but she could also see her reflection in the shards that were scattered across the bathroom. Everywhere she turned, she was met with that same image. The images served as a reminder that she no longer had the right to call herself a unicorn. Her very existence was a disgrace to anything that could use magic.
That’s when Trixie heard it again, the laughter. Twilight and her friends, she could still hear them! The fuse had been relit. Trixie stomped around until she found a hammer from her tool kit. She always kept the hammer around, and a few nails handy, in case one of the wheels on her home fell off.
The unicorn slammed the tool against the remains of the mirror in the bathroom, until it fell off its hinges, but she didn’t stop there. She ran into the living room and attacked her tables, her chairs, her windows, dishes, the front door; anything that she laid her eyes on was fair game. All sorts of debris got sent flying. It looked as if her home had been hit by a tornado. Not even her book shelves were safe. She tipped them all over, and tore page after page from her spell books. She stopped her rampage after something caught her eye, the display case that held her old showmare uniform. Her famous purple cape and hat, both decorated with plastic objects that represented the mystery of the night sky.
She dropped the hammer and just stood there in silence. She reached into the case and pulled out her hat. She held it tightly in her hooves and walked outside. As she stood outside her home, still holding her cherished hat, she began to have flashbacks about how good her life had been, and how suddenly she had lost everything. She heard it again, Twilight’s voice. “Why don’t you do the world a favor and give up magic!” The hurtful message from her imagination replayed itself over and over like a broken record. A single tear fell from Trixie’s face as she made her decision.
She walked back inside her home, through her damaged front door. She put her hat back inside the display case. She wrapped herself inside a black cloak that had been stored inside of her closet. She enchanted her body with the strongest illusion spell that she knew. Now if anypony saw her, they’d see Trixie as an earth-pony and not a unicorn. Before leaving her home for good, and living the rest of her days in silent exile, she took one last look at the outfit she wore as “the Great and Powerful Trixie”. She took a final moment to reminisce about the days when she’d travel Equestria, dazzling whoever was willing to watch with her magical talent.
“Never again …” whispered Trxie, as she disappeared into the night.
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Poor Trixie. She doesn't have nothing for herself
1817671
lol poor me, 2 likes and 4 dislikes!
Can't say I didn't see it coming though.
It happens. I mean, it never happened to me, since I never published any of my early writing, but yeah, I've heard it happens.
That was pretty weak, wasn't it?
1817935 A lil bit...
1817935
Eh ... never cared too much about down votes.
Especially if it's a thumbs down, and the person responsible doesn't give you any real reason about why they disliked it.
So Trixie swear to never use magic again and lives her life as an earth pony. Doesn't she know no matter how hard you try, you can not run from yourself. That illusion spell won't last forever. Without intervention, there is only one way this will end...with her death.
why so pessimistic, surely you would find a few die hard Trixie fans to give you a thumbs up with a decent comment. Although I'm left wondering if there will be more or a sequel to this given the open ending.
....
Continue....
1817945
It was intended as a joke.
1818081 Oh I know.
*Clears throat* Excuse me mister author would you like a review?
1818063
This was intended to be a one shot, meaning that the story ended after chapter 1.
The only way I'd consider continuing this is if (and trust me, that's a pretty big if) enough people asked for it.
And even then it'd take awhile for an update since I currently don't have any ideas on how I'd continue this without f'king up.
Sorry to disappoint you.
1818094
Sure, why not
I really like this.
This is actually more how I think Trixie should have reacted, instead of asking for forgiveness and promising to be a good pony from now on. Trixie doesn't seem like the kind of mare who would just shrug off being showed up again. Especially since she had all that power before. 
In my mind, I still think she'd react something like what you have here.
But it could have been the Amulet making her so proud up until the end, there. Trixie's first defeat was probably really humbling, so she might have been tamed a bit by that.
But what do I know?
Good job, you have my thumb up.
1818395
Finally!
Someone who understands that the ending for that episode didn't make a lot of sense!
I know, right?! I'm pretty sure the writers just got lazy and wanted a happy ending so they didn't bother to work around Trxie's character to make it happen and just ended it right there. Totally disappointing.
1818497
And that's irritating because not all stories have a happy ending.
And my whole point after I first watched the episode, and thought up Goodbye Forever, is this "Why is Trixie asking the pony that ruined her life for forgiveness?"
If anything, Twilight should have been apologizing to Trixie.
Even for a show that's all about rainbows and sunshine, that ending got on my nerves.
I do prefer your ending and I wish they could have used it but it's a kid show. They can't (or wouldn't) use the idea of Applejacks parents being dead for the same reason they couldn't use an ending like this, it's just a little to depressing for something in a kid's show. Sure it would be better and all of us bronies and older fans would love it but ultimately it's still a kids show. Seriously though I love this idea for trixie more than the one used in the show
Totally irritating. I think Trixie should apologize, but for letting power and thoughts of revenge consume her, not to mention cheating by using the Amulet.
Twilight had a lot of tricks of her sleeve as well and should have apologized for cheating. Although I think she took the correct course of action, as it could be the only way to get her to take the necklace off of Trixie, as I think she was beyond reasoning.
I'd also be all for you continuing this story and seeing what Trixie's new Earth Pony life is like. But if you can't get any good ideas for what would happen, I might be able to share some ideas...
"Flutter Shy" is one word, "Fluttershy."
That's it. That's all I really have to say. No like, but no dislike from me either. I advise you to keep writing to improve your skill. The more you write, the better you get, the better you get, the less dislikes you get. Sometimes.
Good luck.
1820048
Thanks for pointing that out
1820063 No problem.
Looks like your upvotes/downvotes evened out and got way better. Keep in mind a lot of people don't bother even reading a story before passing judgment, especially if that subject is something that they find offensive or challenges their values. You remember what happenned to me. Anyway, I thought this story was very good. I'm surprised it only has 105 views. The only issue I had with it was that the beginning was a retelling of the show, but it did have some good insight through Trixie's perceptions. I did enjoy that. Also, sir, I apologize for missing the two word split of Flutter Shy in the second revision I did for you. I mentioned that two word names should always be capitalized, but I completely missed that you broke Fluttershy (which was one word) into two and capitalized it. My fault on that. I honestly just looked to check and see if you had fixed the errors I had found before. Sorry.
1820048
Flutter Shy was my fault. I already explained why in my previous comment. His writing is improving and he takes criticism very well, but most importantly, remembers mistakes from previous critiques. I've edited for him for a short while but he is already improving greatly from his first chapter.
1821708
Don't worry about it.
Nobodies perfect.
I still can't believe how many people liked this.
Still debating on if I'll turn this from a one shot, into an actual story.
My only concern is if i'll be able to keep the momentum going if I choose to continue.
You know just as well as I do that after awhile my ideas start to make less and less sense.
And seeing as how Goodbye Forever turned out moderately decent, I really don't wanna screw things up.
"Rainpath5466" did give me a few ideas that I could use, but still ...
1818576
Thanks, glad you liked it
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I enjoyed this story a lot it would have been a good ending to that episode
1864790
Too bad Hasbro/Lauren Faust would never create an episode that had an ending like this.
1864964
Yes sadly but it is a show aimed at younger people lol
1864968
Ha, true
This story is bitter and true, yet it's a much better ending than the show, which I know is for kids so it's soft and loving, yet kids can handle bitterness if you give them a chance.
A.G.
now we need a sequel were Trixie befriends a bunch of kids who are impressed with her magic and look up to her despite not knowing what she did the past couple of times in Ponyville. well just throwing out ideas.
2806795
That's pretty much what one of my ideas already are/were for the story after this one.
2806832 so is Trixie going to have a wreck-it-Ralph type ending? if so, think that would be a nice closer and would set up a good change, let alone show trixie what she learned.
2806890
Never saw that movie.
I heard it was pretty good though.
The ending that I have planned, I doubt that anyone will see it coming except for a friend of mine who I told the whole plot too (He doesn't mind spoilers and neither do I).
But that's assuming that by some miracle that I actually manage to finish writing the story.
2806931 well regardless, you'll have my attention
2806945
Thank you.
Oh, and I loved that story you wrote about Shining Armor where he got manipulated by Cadence
2806963 thank you... well, not my best work and i ended it way too soon in favor of its sister story, "Forbidden Fruit". who knows, maybe i'll redo it so it can be its own thing.
I will always love Trixie having hissyfits. I'd love to see what would happen down the road, when she gets tired (or drunk) and the spell falters---or runs into some racist Earth ponies who start badmouthing unicorns.
Aaaaaaand like an idiot I see there is a sequel shortly after writing my comment. We all derp sometimes
5128898
Yeah ... thinking about either deleting that, or taking it down and rewriting the whole thing.
5129062
Why's that? Did it start going in a direction you didn't like? (I haven't started reading it yet; I'm saving it for when I need to distract myself from my family's craziness tomorrow. Yay Thanksgiving!)
5129068
There're several different reasons for why.
One of the ones being that I don't really feel like working on it anymore.
*Edit*
The only reason why I wrote it in the first place was because a lot of people on here, and some of my friends in real life wanted to see "what happens next".
So I decided to be nice and put something together.
Now I sorta feel bad because its just been sitting there collecting dust.
*Double edit*
Plus I don't like the story itself.
Not anymore.
Don't really see why the few who've read it enjoyed reading it as much as they did.
5129118
Oh, I gotcha. That can be tough. Well, at least you made some people happy, right?
5129203
lol, yep.
I still get messages from time to time from other people asking if I'll ever continue.
NNNOOOOO !!!! TWILIGHT !! DO SOMETHING !!!
I think I need a sequel.
What happen with Goodbye Forever: Second Chance?
10911729
That was a loooooong time ago and my memory is pretty fuzzy at this point.
From what I remember, I didn't really like what I had written and I ended up losing interest in trying to continue.
Why is Second Chance wiped? Can anyone tell me that? Thanks.