Tangled Roots

by Bad_Seed_72

Closing Credits And Notes

Thank you to all who read, commented, favorited, or voted on this story. It has definitely been an emotional journey for me writing this story--no, this novel, really. I never intended for this story to be this long, detailed, or deep, but such is the writer's journey. Sometimes we author our stories, and sometimes we are authored by them.

A Note On OC's and Canon Characters

The following characters in this story are original characters drummed up by my imagination:

-Greyhoof, Allspice, the maid, and the stallion servants of the Orange Family Mansion;
-Turner the bartender/barber;
-Card Slinger, Lucky Toss, Fencer, Boone, and Switch;
-Rustler, Flora, Turn Key, and Quick Step;
-the unnamed, slightly insane instructor of Babs Seed's classroom;
-Babs Seed's unnamed, deceased aunt;
-both of Bernie Madhoof's "lackeys" (the account manipulator and insurance agents).

The following characters in this story are referenced in the canon, but their appearances, personalities, backstories and experiences have been created by me:

-Citrus Blossom (in the canon as the nameless older sister of Babs Seed);
-Aunt Orange/Libra Scales (in the canon as Aunt Orange, with a different appearance that I assign to her):
-Uncle Orange/Bernie Madhoof (in the canon as Uncle Orange, with a different appearance than I assign to him).

The following characters are canon characters that I have used in this work of fanfiction, altering/using their backstories, personalities, actions, and experiences for the purpose of this story:

-Babs Seed
-Apple Bloom
-Applejack
-Big Macintosh
-Granny Smith
-Princess Luna
-Sweetie Belle
-Scootaloo

Thanks again for all of the support and Happy Holidays!

Comments

[Bad_Seed_72]

Merry Christmas everypony, our story has come full circle.

Tidings of comfort and joy to you all!

[Dusty Sage]

And thank you for finishing it off so beautifully.

[temerarii pulsat]

well done another great story to be checked off and saved.

[SirClopsAlot]

sequel? by any chance?

[CloudTwister]

If I may be so bold... I may just be in love.
I would make a poem but damnit I am unworthy to do that. You have something more than a work of art here. This stands to rival the gods in heaven. My soul is yours ma'am and you may do whatever you like with it.

[frenchfriegy]

Thanks for the story. Great ending there

[kriss123]

Congratulations on finishing this wonderful story

[AXl711]

Will there be a sequel?

[CaptRicoSakara]

For some reason, I read the last three chapters listening to this:

Somehow, this song feels right for the story.

[BBJBS]

1850756 That version of that song is my absolute most favorite Christmas song. This was a wonderful story, and you're a fantastic author. I intend to watch you, since this was, quite frankly fantastic. And I'll admit, part of me wants to do it in the hope of a sequel. *hint hint*

A tip of the hat to you, good sir, and happy holidays to you and yours

[Larger Seagull]

Just finished reading this.

I wish you:
Merry Christmas
Cracking Kwanzaa
Happy Hanukkah
Heavenly Hearth's Warming

This story was a wondrous adventure which I enjoyed overall.

I'll be following you so I don't miss your next story.
Despite what your name implies, you are a very good seed.

CHEERS!!!!!!

[Bad_Seed_72]

1851175

The Orange is Babs' deceased aunt.

[Drizzle]

Wow.... seriously what more can I say bout all this? How everything fell into place was just perfect. All I can say now; thank you for writing this. It was a glorious journey to follow.

Oh, and Happy Holidays

[Bad_Seed_72]

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I'm glad you all enjoyed it. Thanks to everypony for all of your wonderful comments.

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To everypony asking for a sequel, I will confirm at this time that there is one in the works. Expeditious Retreat, we have not heard the last of Slinger, if that comforts you.

1851169

This song fits so well!! Thanks for sharing it!

1851142

You are exactly right. The purple represents her wealthy background contrasted against her the humble, new roots she has planted for herself (the apple), and the fact that it is an apple slice represents sacrifice, giving up a part of oneself (literally, in this case), for another.

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Turner is Bernie Madhoof's brother, but Bernie Madhoof is Bab Seed's uncle.

[Bad_Seed_72]

1851448

Happy Holidays to you as well, my friend!
Glad you enjoyed the ride.

1851483

I'll be waiting patiently for your eloquent words.

[PrincessofDusk]

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Amazing! Bravo, bravo! (I've learned how to speak again! XD)

Excellent way to end an excellent fanfic! I expect a sequel to be up soon, yes?

[Bad_Seed_72]

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Thank you all!! I'm glad you all enjoyed it.

[Bad_Seed_72]

1851520

The sequel is in the works, along with a few side stories also.
No guarantees on when it'll be up, but if you are following me, I'll put out a blog post with more precise times.

[Bad_Seed_72]

1851533

Great catch. This is why I love having such great readers. Fixed.

Thank you very much, my friend. I loved writing this.

[Bad_Seed_72]

1851044

Oh, CloudTwister, you flatter me so. Thank you, my friend.

1851071

I told you there was a in there.

1851036

Thank you!

1851270

Glad you're enjoying it so far!

[The Unwritten Scrypt]

A 'bravo' is in order here...

I was expecting Babs to let Citrus take the ticket so she could have a career in fashion, with Rarity, possibly...
Nevertheless, a great ending, but Madhoof got off way too easily, unless Libra handed in the evidence to the (not-so-corrupt) cops. I'm still suprised he was willing to set the mansion ablaze, I guess that's why he's called 'Burnie'...
It was nice to see some of the gang to change their ways before it was too late, but at least Pinkamena has a couple of replacements at her family rock farm...

Oh, and Ch24's name...I believe I called it...

[Bad_Seed_72]

1851580

Indeed my friend, you did call the title of one of the chapters... Very good!

I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! There is a sequel in the works for this...so we will see more of our favorite antagonists. In the meantime, Clyde Pie (Pinkie's dad) will be getting some help with the rock harvest, heh heh. Interesting theory on the ticket, though, I like it.

Happy Holidays!

[RoboRed]

Wonderful, wonderful story. *claps* Well done.

[The Amazing Horse Man]

I can compare this story to My Little Dashie.
Fucking wonderful! I love it, I would love a sequel, and you have a follower!
Moustache for you

I'm MLG Biotch
~MyLittleGecko28

[CloudTwister]

Hey... I know I'm making a fool of myself but
Marry me you glorious human being.

[Rebel Brony]

Whelp I guess that's it it was a good story glad I followed it. anyway Merry Christmas. at the moment I suffer from insomnia

[Gmtecol]

I loved this story so much and I'm very very sad that it's over I hope you bring us a lovely sequel or something of similarity. please keep writing these tales of love, attrition, and self-discovery! they hit me right in the feels.

[TheTautomer]

I feel like I need to pay you or something for this happiness. I am beyond satisfied! This was...amazing. I loved every chapter.

amazing job.

[chesnutcase]

Finally, the end!
This story was absolutely perfect. I really enjoyed this story and I thank you for writing such a great fic. Also, the lyrics at the beginning of every chapter really fits in.

Merry Christmas and I hope there's a sequel!

(P.S. I kinda got confused by the epilogue so Turner is Babs' father?)

[Fresh Cookies]

Oh mah gawd

OH MAH GAWD

Now what do I read?

[Bad_Seed_72]

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Thank you very much, everypony!!! I am incredibly happy and grateful for your thanks and support. I can confirm that there is a sequel planned, along with some side stories to this. Keep your eyes peeled.

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Thank you for the mustaches!!! The Orange is Babs Seed's deceased aunt.

1851801

Wow, thanks so much for the compliment! I'm glad you found it genuine; that was my intent. I hope you continue to enjoy the story as you read!

1851906

Oh, you.

1852716

Turner is Bernie Madhoof's brother, but Bernie Madhoof is Babs Seed's uncle. So, yes.

1852847

Nope, it was Turner time! Good guess though.

[Bad_Seed_72]

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Yes, sire.

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Thank you both!!

1854890

Well, there is a sequel planned for later, along with some side stories...

[Bad_Seed_72]

1855019

Thank you very much! I will definitely keep writing

[NightmareBlaze]

Waitwaitwaitwait. Babs isn't related to apple bloom?

[Bad_Seed_72]

1855177

Yes she is. The relation to the Apples comes from Libra Scales, not Bernie Madhoof.
They are still cousins.

[Bad_Seed_72]

1855369

Thank you!

[Bad_Seed_72]

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Good or bad ?

[pennantpaper]

;A; -applauds-

I'm not crying because I smacked my elbow into my table, I was already crying of happiness-
All my feels. :3 It felt really nice to see the story neatly tied up, and all the ducks to get in their rows...
Nice to see it through to the end, as well!

Out of interest, do you have an idea of Turner's full name? c. I get that he's a table turner... x3

Also, YES SEEQUALS ATYREWQSSDGFHJUKI^ERWe-
:3 Can't wait! [Also, a merry, merry christmas to you~ c: Or, happy what-eva' you celebrates.]

[Metalhead623]

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Please?

[Mr. Tanokki]

Oh, I am very glad I kept track of this one! I don't often find a story where you care about the characters, and this nails it right on the head! Also want to complement you on the track list, but personally, though, I think Waiting by Norah Jones is a more suitable track for chapter 24.

[Bad_Seed_72]

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Thank you very much! Turner's full name is "Page Turner," but he isn't quite too fond of that as he didn't really end up as much of a bookworm, heh heh. And yes, there will be a sequel, so if you're watching me you'll be among the first to know when it is posted!

1855526

There will be another, and more, my friend.

1855586

Thank you very much! I'm glad that you stuck around and were happy with the outcomes. And wow, thank you so much for mentioning that song...listening to it now, and it does suit the chapter very well. I was going with JP as a theme for this story, but if I decide to use lyrics in future stories, I will have to keep Ms. Jones wonderful song in mind. Thanks!

[ManWithThePan]

Just... Wonderful. An epic story comes to a close.*frenzied applause*Bravo good sir,bravo! I hope the sequel is as long as this(or at least 12 chapters)

[Kishin]

This was one of the best stories I've read on this site!

Thank you for writing this for us! It was a pleasure reading every word of it!

[Niloss]

hoping you don't drag this out. the ending here was perfect, absolutely refuses for the sequel to be even a tenth as good as this was.

[Bad_Seed_72]

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*bows* Thanks to both of you kind gents, glad you enjoyed the ride.

1856577

Matsuo, that song ABSOLUTELY fits! I haven't Googled the lyrics yet...mind sharing what it is?

1857435

I'm happy to hear you were happy with how things turned out! All I can say for the sequel is that it is in the works, and I hope it to be as good as this fic. However, if I'm not feeling it when I write, then I'm sure you guys won't feel it, either, and I'll stick to the side-story ideas I have.

We'll just have to see how the dice fall.

[StarPaladinMilk]

Well, then. I think i can safely say this has breached my Top 5 favorit fics.

Definitely gonna recommend this to my fanfic-enjoying friends.

[Bad_Seed_72]

1859744

Wow...thank you so much, my friend! Extremely happy you enjoyed it!

[Bad_Seed_72]

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Now, you go out there and be the best writer you can be, Wayword.
I know you can do it.

[Dleifragcat]

Definately one of the greatest fics I've ever had the pleasure of following.
You've done great work and the fruits of your labor are weaved into your writing, well done.
I hope there will be more instances of writing later, you are a fonominal author and it's been a thrill.

Bonna fortuna

[Spalding]

This is the most amazing story I've read. Ever. Also, is there a chance I can PM you about some things? This story has raised a lot of questions for myself and I'm dying to see if I can get them answered. Once more, amazing story, can't wait to see more.