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Written Out


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When a brony wakes up in Equestria in the body of an alicorn, his first thought is that he must be some sort of hero destined to save the land.

He's going to find out that things aren't always what they seem.

Note: Please read before disliking. It's not what you're expecting.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 22 )

The story may be good but the cover art:

Edit: xD A walking Gary Stu! xD Funny

LOL! Loving it! :pinkiehappy:

Your writing is good. Grammar, punctuation, and spelling are all fine, it's perfectly readable and made me chuckle a few times.
Honestly, the only thing I can think of is that it is too short, but other than that, excellent job! :pinkiehappy:

Tentavly tracking to see where it's heading.

Nice start, I especially liked how your character came up with a name. Also, I noticed you marked your story as complete. Does that mean you're ending it here, or do you still have more comedy up your sleeve?

I actually kinda like this concept. I knew something was up when you mentioned the door to Fluttershy's house glowing yellow.

I originally planned this as a short little comedic parody of the idea of alicorn OCs (self-inserts in particular) after reading a few stories under the TWE banner. The trick was to avoid making it too obvious.

1614412 I personally think using a bland pony from pony maker was a nice touch. Fun fact: I actually pressed randomize on pony maker several times. I put literally no effort into making it.

1614445 This was just made as a break from my other story. I don`t intend to continue it at this time.

Wings and Horns for everypony, step right up to the discord express.

Yay. Another BiE story.

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1615022 I`m sorry, but...BiE? _______ in Equestria?

1615043 DAMN IT! I meant HiM.. Stupid keyboard :twilightangry2:

Ha Self insertion fics. I actually prefer being a unicorn in my Self inserts. It allows for a more personal growth because if you just make yourself a freaking god/goddess what do you have to learn other than to never upset the balance? I normally make it so that he has to think of shortcuts in the magic so that he can do slightly more than the average unicorn. I liked it becase it made him just like everyone else. :ajsmug:

even spike is an alicorn! LOL!
I was wondering what was up with that yellow glow shutting Fluttershy's door.
You win a fav and a thumb

I have a picture of Discord on my ass.

At that point, you know that something is up. Tread carefully.

That was actually pretty funny. :scootangel:

Nice premise, but it kind of just...ended. Didn't really do anything or go anywhere with it.

1615074

Brony in Equestria would of worked.

This is it... awwwwww. I wanted more. :fluttercry:

You were wrong.
You said in this description that this wouldn't be what I was expecting.
I was expecting it to not be what I was expecting, and it was exactly as I expected.
I win.

Oh, and good job on the story or whatever, I guess.

Write on,
Legion

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