The tale of companionship between the two most unlikely of ponies.
**********************************************
Just a one shot I thought of on a whim, hope yall enjoy it!
Love to right and watch MLP. Nuff said.
Page generated in 0.329 seconds
Total duration
718 users online
763,511 hits today, 2,144,272 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2025
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2025 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Hey everypony! Just had this idea so I thought I'd try it as a one shot. Tell me what yall think about and enjoy!!!
Also, if you dislike the story, please give the reason in the comments box so that I can fix it. Thanks!
The D'awww levels are so high now, it is to awesome for words
Not a dislike in sight. Btw, I've never heard of this "Rumble" character. Can anybody enlighten me?
Short but I loved it so much that it can be one hundard words for all I care. This is AMAZING! I have not read a great and vety well written Pip/Luna romance for a long time and very, very impressed by how you created it. Also, great job on adding great pairing such as SpikeBelle (my second favorite next to Spilight) Rumble/Apple Bloom, Scootaloo/Featherweight and the all powerful, always amazing FluttershyMac, seriously amazing job.
By the gods I can't wait to see what you have next or if you plan to take this story somewhere more like what Celestia would think of it or even if you plan on making another Pip/Luna story....I LOVED IT 100% You ever need any help, ideas or advice, I got your back, peace.
A few your/you're mistakes (esp. by Fluttershy's scene) but not too bad. Princesses need loving, too.
1601940
He is Thunderlane's younger brother.
1601686 Haha, why thank you my friend, I'm glad you enjoyed the D'awwws

As for continuation, I don't know if I'll continue this story or not. At this point, I could use some ideas if yall want me to add to this story or if I should write another Pip/Luna romance. Ideas please! 


1601940 I'm happy that you see no dislikes in sight
1601981 Thanks bro, your comment makes me feel special
1602122 Yes, Princess's do some need some love. Also, thanks for pointing out those errors, I'll fixs those right away.
1602200 Thanks for helping Blaze Burn Crash
As always, yall each deserve a mustache Spike for being the first to comment:




1604266 Never a problem, I got your back, I'll send you a PM with all the Pip/Luna ideas I have but your going to have to tell me which pairings you do and don't like if that's cool.
1604542 Thanks bro, can't wait for the PM.
Also, for the pairings, I'm good with all straight pairings and a select few les. pairings that I'll specify in the PM 
1604266
Always glad to help.
WHOEVER THE HELL PUT THAT DISLIKE SHOULD DISINTIGRATE IT'S VERY EXISTENCE.
She'd love him to pipsqueak?
beutiful.
1606157 isn't that a bit much?
2537499 Quite Sorry. That was my brother. If you want to diss him, go to his page, John Rigger.
2588006 nah its cool.
Aww. This is what I call a cute romance story. Nothing too mature or foul. And also what makes it okay is that Pipsqueak is all grown up.
Aww, so cute and sweet!
Also, a most excellent story.
A nice sweet story. Best of luck with your future stories.
A nice little story.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
That's actually a pretty interesting ability she has which that's awesome that she can detect something like that
Well this was a pretty cute story and I have to treat this as an alternate universe but anyway pipsqueak as a young adult Was preparing for the Nightmare Night but only one specifically to talk with Princess Luna how much he means to her but he was afraid doesn't know what to say to her so he has some advice from Fluttershy and apparently it really helped him what she said to him so when princess Luna showed up just like before he talked to her and he admitted to her that he's in love with her and for reaction she knew that a while he just needs to say it and I got to say it is pretty cute keep up the good work