Equestria has seen some pretty powerful and evil enemies in the past. However, the day is fast approaching when an enemy as ancient as Discord, and possibly more dangerous, unexpectedly makes his return after having been thought defeated since the creation of the very world they live on. It is now up to Luna and Celestia, along with an unexpected ally, to unseal and reunite alicorns older than even themselves if they even want to hope to stand a chance of saving every living creature in existence. But even for a powerful team of alicorns, the challenges ahead will prove more difficult than any one of them could have imagined.
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Well, here's my attempt at writing something that's been on my mind for a while. It may not be perfect or the greatest or even good, but I'm glad I've written this much. I'm completely open to suggestions to improve my writing, but this, at the moment, is like nice side project. Updates will probably be slow (not like months or anything, hopefully) but I hope to be able to continue this. I'll do my best to answer questions pertaining to the story (especially the prologue) as long as it doesn't involve revealing too much information that would be considered spoiler material.
So, my aim here was to challenge (in a way) the general distaste toward OC alicorns. I looked at the evidence and concluded, almost every single one of these involves just one alicorn. I then thought, what would it be like if there were multiple alicorns (and Celestia and Luna knew about them)?
If you like this, chapter 2 is in the works. If you don't, please, tell me why, if only so I can take note of it. This was entirely self-edited, so mistakes are bound to appear and I would appreciate them being brought to my attention. Thanks for reading!
Sir, you have my interest. I'm busy now, but will read later and give my thoughts.
Sire, I don't think I've ever seen a fic this old and gone this unnoticed while still being a good read.
My condolences.
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It happens, and thanks for giving it a shot. I'm really just glad to be able to write it.
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Well unless this happens to you-
Then you should be safe man.
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I'd fix this, though:
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Thanks for going through it and catching that; it has been taken care of.