Rarity makes a dress for a new client, whom wishes to stay anonymous. Troubled by this first, but then the client doesn't even show up to pick up the dress. Rarity is saddened by this, and goes to visit Applejack, but during this visit both ponies will get more then they bargained for.
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Interesting concept, but a little rushed. Probably would have been better if it had been a bit longer.
Good, but it should have been longer. Everything felt rushed.
I like the concept, however it is MUCH too short.
Stop me if you heard this one... The idea is great but sh...
good. but once again to short.
Interesting concept, but you could've expanded it way further than that.
I agree with everypony when I say... This is simply divine, but it could've been longer.
And the same.
Yeah, I see what you guys are saying. I have a problem with rushing the ending to basically everything I write.
You really need to expand on this.
It unfolds a bit fast but all in all its a good story^^
Something something goodConcept something something butItWasRushed something something HitlerDidNothingWrong something something