I am not sure how I came to be here, but there is a creature that reminds me of home. And since it does not look like I will be returning, I shall watch after her and ensure her safety. This is the story of how that came to be.
(This will be written in a mix between narrative and journal format, and it's a bit of an experiment tell me what you think. Also inspired by this video. And since I try to be original, it isn't the TF2 Scout.)
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Seems promising
Well written, and original, please sir or Madame...
Continue.
Rather interesting. I hope to see more of this in the near future.
please more
glad to see a new chapter and great story so far.
1695051 Thank you
Update?
1695210 You knows it!
хорошо сделано. Я с нетерпением жду еще!
1695656 Спасибо, друг! Я стараюсь изо всех сил. Also do not be disappionted but I don't actually know Russian....I use Google Translate
Not bad
1697745 Thanks I try my best
love it!
1714382 I'm glad you like it.
Bearing with you here.
Very entertaining, I look forward to reading more of this story.
Good chapter, I like seeing this episode through his eyes, it's a nice touch. Keep up the good work.
1745888 Thanks. I will try.
Goddamit rainbow!
Twilight! You shouldn't blast aliens because they watched you for a while!
Oh and you seem to be missing something in this sentence.
1803189 Fixed
1803242Um, not to sound rude,but not quite. You're still missing the ending quotation mark...
1803253 lol holy crap! How the hell did I miss that? Thanks I'll get on that now.
1803278Your welcome! Happy to help!
Thank God for google translate.
1851367 I know right? It's helped me a lot
Hmm. I wonder which type of Celestia will our friendly neighborhood Spetsnaz meet? The Troll, the Rapist, the Tyrant, the Over Protective Mother, or the Show Accurate? (There are probably more types of Celestia then there are for any other character...
)
1860545
The Tyrannic B**** I hope! Don't ask me I'm just sadistic!
"You animal!"
"Well, I sure don't look like a plant, that's for sure!"
Очень понравилось. Бывали ошибочки в русском,но это мелочь. Жду продолжения этого замечательного рассказа Zeta. / Enjoyed very much. Even if there was a few mistakes in russian writing,it's nothing bad. Really looking forward to read the countinuation of this wonderful story Zeta.
1887748 Большое спасибо. Я использую Google Translate, которые могли бы быть причиной ошибки. (Thank you very much. I use Google Translate, that could be the cause of the mistakes.)
WOW even all the good he's done rainbow still doesnt think he can be good what an ass
1888101 Yeah
Since the time frame of this is between EP. 2 and 3 I tried to go with the "Over the top Rainbow Dash." Her being so mad at Viktor for hurting Applejack is also a nod to the R.D. X A.J. ship that people like to do, because she has a secret crush on her. And no I will not be elaborate on said "relationship"
1888147 i was just saying since well sure i would be mad but i would let it go
but Viktor was right i could be worse than a headache they couldve been killed
Good work.
And so the spam is back! ...yay.
On a different note, damn fine ending.
did they just meet?
Sequil?
1892478 I'm not really one on writing one sorry.
glad I found this. at first thought, my initial reaction was "dont read" but being the weirdo I am I ignored myself and read. I am glad I can easily be ignored by me
I am reading this guy in the Heavy's voice from TF2 for some weird reason
1936118 Maybe because your favorite pony is Rainbow Dash?
1936189 Lol, fine by me
is good story
1936206 Thanks
good story. gooood story
AKS-74u
2033070 I know. I figured more people would know what it was if I just said AK-74u
A good story, different perspective and interesting, very thumbs up.
2125888 Awesome thank you