It was just a normal day and I had just gotten off of work. While driving home from work, listening to Rammstein, when a vehicle blind sides the driver's side of my car. Despite my best efforts I pass out. When I wake up, I was laying on a bed of someone's house.
Where am I? How did I get here? Why am I not in a hospital How is my car? The foot steps from the other room tell me that, my questions may be answered.
(This is another self insert. But it is not canon to the Strange Happening's story line or My Conversation With A Moon Goddess. Think of that as me in a different universe. Now, BEFORE you hit the dislike button and go to something else, this is not like my first self insert. This one will be more realistic in the way that I would act and react to magical talking ponies. Needless to say MLP doesn't exist in this story. Please give it a chance.)
Day ending XD
Luv this chapter
Zane: Alpha as fuck.
3391740 Alpha?
3392459
You know, the big boss, the alpha male.
3392697 Oh, okay. I see now lol. Well, maybe. We still need to see what the others think of his/my actions.
I like it.
Erm, is RD going to get a deadly-if-left-untreated infection in her leg now?
4467161 Naw, maybe a trip to the hospital or a healing spell from Twilight. Not a bad idea, though.
4468892 Just asking because human bites is nothing to laugh at because of bacteria, but then again, it wasn't really a "human" bite.
This whole Lyra being obsessed with humans cliche is so overused
4698065 I was going for "overly excited she was right" thing. But, yeah, it is.
4698065 <------- this
I liked your comedy.
5960960 thank you, i try.
Very rushed. Hope the rest of the story is not as rushed. Reading onward.
O.k. got about half way through the chapter and I could not continue. WAY too rushed and too many spelling errors to count. Not to mention the Human character is an utter douche. I'm out.
6257603 Thats unfortunate that my story isn't up to standard, but it would help if people actually pointed out the spelling mistakes instead of just doing what you fucking did. I don't have time to go over every chapter of a story that I'm not currently writting, for spelling mistakes. So, some help would be nice, instead of the "fuck this, I'm out." response. Thanks for calling me a douche by the way, because, you know, it's a self insert.
4698065 I know right?
Getting Bojack Horseman flashbacks on this one... kind of.
You know what comes next.
wheeeeee
!!! only comment on this chapter... kinda lonely...
5960960 we all did
4700179 in fact it is so over-used it has become classic
Not the beast story I read but not the worst nether