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Luke Shywalker


I like My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, if you couldn't tell.

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When Fluttershy is forced to enter the Everfree Forest at night, she is followed home by a tall, thin stallion...

This fic is a challenge to make a Slendershy ship (Fluttershy and Slendermane). Without further a due, enjoy...

Chapters (6)
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Comments ( 29 )

Alright, I'll say this straight: You're not a bad writer at all, but this premise has been done nine thousand and one times since that game Slender came out. Try something a little more original.

great story, i hope there will be more. :moustache: :derpytongue2:

1049710 Yeah, once I started, I noticed person after person posting this kind of theme, but I was simply too intrigued by the idea to not do it. I appreciate your input, though.

Overall not bad, a mistake or two here or there. Tracked

Things at night are not as bad as you might they be. I think you mean, "As you think they might be"

Not a bad story at all :pinkiesmile: I am just speculating the fact that I don't think Zecora would purposefully scare Fluttershy, or might have used a tad less threatening langauge to tell her to get the hell home fast :rainbowwild: And yeah, that other guys right, I've also got a Slender story on my page, I was planning it for ages, but heaps of stories have been coming out since the indie game was released. I like stories like this because it actually makes sense for the Slenderman to act like he normally would in folklore, rather than some of crap people make up.

An imaginary, ghostly voice whispered in Fluttershy’s head: ‘Leave me alone…’


.....whuuuuu!?!?!:rainbowhuh::pinkiegasp::rainbowhuh::pinkiegasp::rainbowhuh:

ummmmm hey is that slendermare in the pic

Pia

I'm afraid. :applecry:
KEEP GOING FLUTTERSHY, YOU CAN DO IT! :pinkiesad2:

Aw damn! This is really good!

Moremoremore!

Sudden out burst of curage ............... aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand it's gone

Pia

GOGOGO FLUTTERSHY! YOU CAN DO IT! :yay:

1087177 Can she? Can she really?! Tune in next year to find out!

That would be so mean XD

Nope, this is very fun to write. Thank you for your obvious interest in my work. It should be up soonish.

Pia

1089076
You have my full support, along with my love for all ponies. :yay:
Fluttershy, this song is for you. :heart:
I know, both you and the author, can do it. :heart:

1089589 :pinkiegasp: You're a poet and you didn't know it!

Pia

Amazing ending. :heart:
Are there going to be more chapters? :fluttercry:
I WANT TO SEE FLUTTERSHY WRECK SLENDERCOLT'S MIND TRICKS! :flutterrage:

1101987 How many stages of Grief are there?

Pia

Five stages.

1102196 Correct :rainbowlaugh: There's still a gaping hole in the plot. Sorry, Fluttershy. Your tale isn't over quite yet :fluttershbad:

Zecora should have told her to look directly at it. Reverse psychology. If she says NOT to look at it, then you're gonna want to look at it.

Pia

D'AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWW :fluttercry:
That was amazing! :heart:
Such a fitting end. :pinkiesad2:

Pia

I like this. :pinkiehappy:
I like the story behind Slendermane. :pinkiesad2:
Thank you for filling up the holes! :yay:

Very interesting stuff. Didn't expect a Beauty and the Beast twist. Though I had suspected some romance considering the "Slendershy" in the summary.

One thing though: The plural of Millennium is Millenia

flutter-shy vs slender-mane round 1 fight

5600374
MOOORRRTAAAL KOOOMMMBAAAT!!!

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