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TheExhaustedBrony


I wish I could just finish all the half-done stories I've got backlogged.

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Equestria has been watched over by Princess Celestia for over one thousand years. As alicorns, they have a very long lifespan, however, even though their appearance doesn't show it, they do become weaker with time. Twilight, is given one final lesson that in time, one must learn to say goodbye.



I give credit to the following songs and Toxic Mario for giving me inspiration, but my main source of inspiration was the loss of my cat eight years ago.

Sad Cello Melody - Composed by rosmanczyk
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zwxLHqBDVNs&feature=related

Rain - Brian Crain
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mxX8279Onbo&feature=plcp

"It's Hard To Say Goodbye" - Michael Ortega
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aXVlQJ8eFgE

Eternal Love - Composed by blacksheep806
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qFL2xGrtEm4

Cover art by:
http://toxic-mario.deviantart.com/

The five character limit forced me to change Cadence to Luna, for obvious reasons.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 17 )

Feeeeeeels... so many. :fluttercry:

I feel you could have branched this out a little more, Celestia's death seemd to come all too soon, but big thums up for not making her immortal like the fans often believe. :eeyup:

All in all, I'm glad that you all like the story. Make sure to check out the guys that I used for inspiration, they're so awesome:rainbowkiss:

1495724 she shall be missed...:ajsleepy: a moment of silence please for our fallen princess...

And thus we have an alternative take on how Luna becomes the ruler of Equestria, take that Lunaverse! (no offense) :eeyup:

1500552 I'll be honest I've never read any of the Lunaverse stories and I'm not sure if I should. :trixieshiftright:

Neither have I. This was never intended to be a lunaverse story, it just made the most sense to have the next in like take the throne. I mean, I could have easily turned it into a discord returns fic but I chose not to.

I just read this story on my channel! Hope you enjoy!

1759260 Have I told you that I love you man? I think I have but whatever. I love you! Derpy Hooves gives you a brohoof

:derpytongue2: \)

Damn it! I can't stop crying! :pinkiesad2:

This is one of the few stories that actually made me cry this hard...

Thus, ends the time of Celestia. She will be missed, and welcome. To the era of Luna. I would imagine that now after Celly's passing that Luna and Twi will become closer and she might take up being her new mentor. You know? Set down the finished book and start opening a new one. I would love to see a series of sequels to this on everything that happens after Luna takes the throne. Just imagine. If Luna became her new mentor, I would think that Celly taught Twi the basics and had her master all there is to casting magic and also teaching her light spells; then Luna would continue her study and teach her the untold secrets and powers of magic that Celestia never taught her and everything else about magic..

R.I.P. Celestia.... Wait couldn't we bring her back to life with the Dragon Balls from Dragonball Z ?

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