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David Silver


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With a snap, a flash, and the sizzle of ozone, the scientists gaped at their creation. It had four hooves and wore goggles. "'Sup," she greeted, stepping down from her stool with a swish of her tail. "This place looks kinda cool."

This is a tale told for Charlie, one of my lovely patrons. Let's get scientific, and turn up the volume!

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Comments ( 27 )

Oh, this is *intriguing*~ Vinyl's amped up, and an absolute delight!

:pinkiecrazy: yes this pleases me, continue~

A wubbable start.

Dr. Chang raised her hand from behind their computer. "I'm still waiting on confirmation about how our research fits into the update." The deflated suddenly. "Nevermind, no. This doesn't fit anything." She leaned off to the side to look at the curious equine in the glass jar before them. "Can you hear us?

Should be
They deflated

Oh god I love this. She’s just so cute and I love the humans’ interactions with her. For now at least…everything is wholesome and they don’t want to harm her. Not everyday I read a story where they didn’t create a pony scientifically for malicious purposes. 10/10 approve. I wonder where we’re going next.

This science pony needs more details. How did they create this pony? I would like to see their research files.

The song Vinyl and Kyle are listening to...

“That is a concern.” Kyle steepled his fingers. “Ya’ll come out of this with nobel prizes. I come out with overtime pay. I assume you're recording everything, right? On camera I want to be anonymous. Blur my face, whatever, I want to be able to walk away. Tell me you didn’t already it my name?”

Do y'all see what's missing there?

Vinyl popped the headphones over Kyle's head, her eyes on his the whole time as she looked for reaction, approval, any sign this was working as intended. As the music blasted forth, she felt Kyle tense, his hands closing tight, squeezing her legs uncomfortably.

This and the following two paragraphs are repeats.

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These glitches got us ponies. We need to be careful with them.

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The new pony replicant plague shall soon be upon us all and it all started with a 1 that should have been a 0!

Alright, they got the funds to make more ponies. Will they all be Vinyl or will Octavia be next?

If the researchers really want to figure out the science behind all this, they should replicate Twilight Sparkle!

Comment posted by dlambchic deleted April 3rd

Is touching a unicorns horn like fondling a mare's private parts?

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It's like someone grabbing your shoulder while you're in the middle of focusing on your arm. It can startle you.

Are any of the antagonists from the show ever going to appear in this story?

Sounds like they got a star trek type replicator that can make ponies. Computer must be getting data files from MLP videos to download into the pony.

They could make a fortune producing real living MLP character replicas for all those MLP fans. There could be ethical issues, is a pony a person or just an animal pet?

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The story, as is, is 'scientists oops a pony into being. Science and friendship occurs!'

Would a MLP villain showing up later fit that?

beat.”

This is extra, just hanging out between paragraphs.

What an awesome idea for a story! I found it in the "Also Liked" thing after the new chapter of "Rainbow Bridges."

How very appropriate with 420 Day coming up. I fully intend to observe the holiday. 🙃 🫠 ☮

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It's a Vinyl Scratch story, random beats are to be expected!

A nice chapter, but it feels like it was posted without being proofread. One example is this said tag:

“Kyle isn’t my real name.” The man replied with a straight face.

...name," the man replied...
:facehoof:

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Fixed. That one wasn't mine(this is a collab).

Harrington turned to the two eager ones. "Are you talking about videos? I wasn't even at that point. If she wants to present herself as a virtual person, she could, but I don't know why. Let me get this published properly. When that's all done, you can just show yoursle, as you." He pointed to Vinyl. "We're not hiding things."

Should be
show yourself, as

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