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SuperUltimateBrony


Recently got back into the show. 30 and still enjoying it. Rainbow Dash will forever be best pony.

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To those who remember my old stories, this fic is much different. Not a random shipping comedy/clop fic. This is one I'm working on for two others who wanted to see a ScootaDash story where Rainbow is submissive. It's eight years in the making and finally getting written.

I'd love some comments on this story!

So far it was only a prelude, but now Im really curious as to how Dash will descend from just longing a touch towards doing all that tagged stuff.
Will the bangle have an effect on Scootaloo as well ?

How old RD and Scoot in this fic?

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Considering Chapter 2 mentions the S3 episode "Sleepless in Ponyville" and that event being "a week ago" I think you can draw the conclusion.

And so it begins. Can't wait for the rest.

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Thanks. I will aim to please! What was your favorite portion of the fourth chapter?

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I'd say the whole part with Scoots telling Dash about being put in her true place, if only for what it implies about what's to come.

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I hope you're antsy. I'll start a new chapter later. :)

The writing is fantastic here. Scootaloo has a fun job ahead of herself and the dialogue here is naughty, so detailed, and playful. Very cute!

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Appreciate the comment! I'm making my best efforts with this story and want it to incorporate many different kinks so there's something for everyone to enjoy!

New chapter is complete! :)

Like where this is going.

I don't know how I got here (random story hopping, but still), but this has been a fun read. Will she accidentally or intentionally use the artifact on others? Is it corrupting Scootaloo? How will the main crew react when their games go public? These are the questions.

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All will be revealed in time. Thanks for commenting! 😁

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How do you feel about SubDash BTW? There's lots on Derpibooru but very very few have her paired with Scootaloo. Think it works as a dynamic?

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I find Scootaloo undeveloped as a personality, something that makes FiM so attractive - the characters are absolute, easily defined & recognizable. That means shaping her character to an unusual situation is relatively easier than the others with set in stone traits. All that being said, these rank among my favorite stories:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/441391/good-girl-rainbow ; https://www.fimfiction.net/story/434536/under-your-control ; https://www.fimfiction.net/story/356047/stripes-loyalty ; https://www.fimfiction.net/story/242072/prim-and-proper ; https://www.fimfiction.net/story/104703/yes-maam

Comment posted by SuperUltimateBrony deleted February 20th

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Thank you for these! I read the Good Girl Rainbow and sequel. Enjoyable. :)

Comment posted by SuperUltimateBrony deleted February 27th

Ooh, wonder what will be more important, scoots or the wonderbolts. Or maybe it won’t be so dramatic haha. Scoots did seem happy for her.

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Thanks for the comment! Did you like this chapter? :)

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I did yes! I like the idea of rainbow wanting to live her life but scootaloo telling her that her needs are what matters now. Haha. I wonder if it will be more firm eventually or maintain the playfulness it has now.

You've got me on edge waiting for what will happen next! God your writing is amazing!

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I really appreciate the compliment. Means a lot to see someone appreciate my style. Thanks so much! :pinkiehappy:

Opinions of this chapter? :)

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Looking forward to the next.

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This started as a way to fulfill a promise from nine years ago. But now others are enjoying this story. Makes me glad to see people wanting more of my idea of a fanfic. :)

Sounds good! your hard work is really paying off with lots of great stuff so far and I hope you enjoy a little break 😎 🫂

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Thanks very much, Alvin! Appreciate the nice comment! :pinkiehappy:

One done. Next upload within an hour! ;D

Hope ya'll enjoy the two uploaded chapters today. I'm taking a one week break starting tomorrow. Writing will continue on the 25th.

I'm very curious to see where this goes! So far they're having good, if poorly planned, kink relations - I'm wondering when things will go south, when Scootaloo stops behaving so morally...

Enjoy your break, looking forward to more when you're back!

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Thanks for commenting, but why do you feel it's poorly planned? Was it the mishap with the leash?

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I’m someone who does a lot of bdsm and kink in my daily life - my fiancé and I have a power exchange relationship and regularly do kink play. Just adding that to say that I do have experience in this regard.

It is always necessary to discuss limits before engaging in kink - plan a safeword, and hear out your partner’s hard No’s. and yes, pulling out the breathplay without discussion is a pretty big no-no, haha.

And just to make sure this isn’t a miscommunication- I mean that the characters poorly planned their play, not that you as the author did anything wrong. :)

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Well I appreciate your anecdote, even if it were a tad forward. Heh.

Glad you're enjoying the compositions so far. I'm having a wonderful time writing this. I'm pleased you weren't talking about my writing style. :)

No sweat. Honestly, your breaks aren't even that bad when compared to the months-long hiatuses some of my favorite fics have suffered.

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I'm glad you aren't angered by this news. I want to keep writing, but I'm suffering a tad burn-out coupled with crappy problems right now that need my full attention.

This fic will return with a bang though!

I am enjoying the slow burn. Like, it's easy to forget that this artifact is any way malicious, or that anything (relatively) unusual is going on between the duo. Their personalities remain recognizable & original. I'm looking forward to seeing how things go squirrelly.

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Thanks for commenting. There's loads to come between the couple and hope you'll stick around for more.

Gotta say, this is becoming downright wholesome. If there is anything dark going on, we're a long ways from it.

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It's always nice to receive a comment. Thanks for posting! You'll have to wait and find out. :)

It’s so nice to see a good Scootadash story after all this time. Still one of my favorite ships ever since I joined the fandom. Keep on keeping on!:heart:

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Hi! Thanks for the comment and I'm pleased you've liked this story so far. Can I ask where you saw this being advertised?

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