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Twilight failed--they lost to the corrupted demon. She must endure the mental torment Shimmer forces her through. Otherwise, the girls' blood may be on her hands.
CW: Saw-inspired elements.
My belated but well worth it spooky month story. Nothing is graphic, but there is one red tag as a pre-caution. It assuredly matches its rating.
Cover art drawn by r/spoopy-liz.
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That was certainly interesting. I don't know what I expected, but a Saw crossover certainly wasn't it! I think the imagery comes across pretty well for what it is, but I definitely hit a bit of sensual overload to the point that I care less about their individual plights. I think it's because each one is successive after the last in somewhat quick bursts.
I will say the second to last scenario was leagues more fucked up than the others, and if Sunset knows Spike isn't a dog, then this is really, really fucked up on her end and makes her a liar about Twilight's friends making a choice to survive. Spike has no choice, either way. He's purely and entirely a victim with no agency. Though, with the way the story is written, we don't see any of the actual "Bad things" so maybe it's got blanks, or Flash figures something out? Not looking for a good end, just trying to justify the "guaranteed death" against the other scenarios.
I am not familiar with the Seminal work, besides pony, so I can't speak too much to the discussion beyond ponies. And yes, ponies.
I liked it. I think you might need to put some kind of trigger warning, but I'm not sure what kind. I had no idea what I was getting into when I opened it. Thanks for writing it!
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Thank you for the mini-review. ^^ Saw is indeed the inspiration for this fic's fusion setting. I aspired to make each part original, minus the obviously re-used one.
The time between their plights is a bit quick, but I didn't want to spend forever and ever writing. I also feel the ducks in a row nature of it adds to the building pressure Twilight goes through. Regarding the second to last, the ambiguity of everything is very much intentional as to increase the horror element--unknowns and all that.
I'm not opposed to adding in triggers if they help explain the story's description better.