Twilight keeps getting weird packages in the mail from a secret admirer. Who is sending them? What do they want?! And why is the latest one buzzing?!
This is an anthology about a unique pair that I wanted to watch develop together over multiple stories. I was tired of reading a ship and wondering “but what happened after.” So I’ll try my best to post on a biweekly (once every two weeks) basis and follow them as they grow and change.
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Derpy is just the sweetest.
This is absolutely adorable and I like how you don’t portray Derpy as stupid- just forgetful and a bit awkward! I can’t wait to read more!
Awww.
Twi ought to give herself more credit, If she can last a day of blunt-force Pinkie-induced slapstick comedy as a mere unicorn, then she can probably handle whatever Derpy could do now that she has the wings of a pegasus and the strength of an Earth pony.
There are only a few Derpy/Twilight pairings on this site. Yours is one of the best, even if there had been many more. I love your portrayal of both Derpy's innocence as well as Twilight's (she still doesn't understand the real reason why nopony has asked to date her).
I'm very interested to see where this goes. Derpy hasn't explained to Twilight yet why she likes her and wanted to date her, but, based on what you've written so far, I think Twilight will be pleased with whatever answer she gives.
Fantastic! I love this potrayal of Derpy. This story is exceptionally well-written. Derpy, especially, has great characterization. She's let's say simple, but she's also mature in her own way, kind, and brave. I love how Twilight responded to the idea of dating her with 'Is that even okay?' despite just saying she shouldn't be underestimated, which Spike points out. It makes me wonder how her friends will react, especially Rainbow Dash who has little patience for Derpy.
Super looking forward to reading more! I'd legit give this a favorite if it was
Only a jerk wouldn't go out with Derpy. She's such a sweet and wonderful girl! 🥰
Wonderful.
This story is adorable! At times, there's abit of drama as Twilight kinda has to battle with societal dictations of how she or Derpy should behave, but once she gets past her hesitancy, both of them really start having fun! Looking forward to more of this!
Man, it seems like everyone's putting pressure on Twilight. Give the poor girl some room, she's only been dating Derpy for, what? A week or two?
Idk why Twilight didn't yell at them. She had every right....
Cute. None of them could date until their leader did.
Huh, quite different. But wonderfully cute. I like how Derpy and Twilight are opposites, but they compliment each other. It's sweet.
Introducing so many ships in a single chapter is kind of weird.
Love Derpy pov.
Huh, was expecting Spitfire/Rarity from the butterfly incident, not the best first impression but she would definitely find the fashionista a real knockout!
Not that I'm complaining, interesting choices all around, and I like to think that a few of them only got the courage to ask after Twi's relationship went public.
Aww, that's a sweet chapter. But that ending sentiment is worrying. Is she anticipating that they won't be together?