Twilight had been dating Rainbow for some time now, but didn't have the opportunity to spend as much time as she wanted with her. Now was the perfect moment! Her schedule was free, and she was going to spend the whole day with her!
Unless she somehow always get interrupted by her other friends... Why does it feel like she is the third wheel in her own relationship?
(Short story)
Entertaining start, I look forward to seeing where this goes.
I've read many TwiDash tales over the years, and I can already tell this one is going to be the most relatable.
Applejack was rude considering your friend is on date at the same place you happening to be going to as well. Now good manners say give the couple as much space as possible but instead she and those with her sit right next to the couple who are on a date. And pinkie should have just stuck with her job and not spent the time talking with them because she is supposed to be working not hanging out. At this rate twilight is going to lose it. She is already pretty close.
Okay, I’m with Twilight here. She MUST be doing this on purpose.
sometimes i feel like pinkie is the best character and sometimes i feel like she's the worst character, you know what i mean
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I know what you mean
Okay. Once is just bad luck. Now the girls are deliberately doing this. It's one thing if they didn't know Twilight and Rainbow are a couple. But they do know.
This is how Equestria dies. Twilight finally snaps, and good luck trying to stop her.
It's because she just wants time to go out and be just you and her but your friends keep butting in and taking that away from her. She trying to put up with them because she knows they don't mean any harm but this is the third time. I wondering how long it takes to lose it considering they don't get when a couple is on a date you give them as much privacy as possible.
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I am thinking Rainbow set this all up. Like Twilight said, Rainbow does not like being seen doing romantic things. So being seen alone with Twilight makes her feel nerves. Maybe she asked the others to hang around them while on dates.
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There's a risk of releasing hellfire on earth right now
Ah, we don't get to hear it?
Ok so we are waiting to see who will be the one to make Twilight finally snap and what will be the last straw. Personally i think it won't be Flutters, but some other party like Starlight. Let's see how bad the fallout will be .
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Almost wrote it, but then thought it would make Twilight's day a bit sweeter haha
Oh dear...
She's about to blow!
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How they be so clueless as to keep interrupting her date? And a party is not the way to make someone feel better if they aren't feeling well.
Can't wait until they realize how much they butted into her date and took time that was meant for the couple away from them.
the weather forecast in the crystal kingdom is: raining charred corpses
A solemn prayer for the nation of Equestria and all its inhabitants, you had a good run.
Something tells me Dash has been spending to much time with Ruffnut lately:
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She's learning from the best
Finally they realized what they were doing. Fluttershy really needs to stop bringing animals out of their environment so she care for them.
Rainbow just needs to learn to be herself and stop worrying about the rest. The only thing in her way is herself. Twilight wants you just be yourself and the rest will fall into place.
Here I was, expecting a finale full of over-the-top shenanigans when you actually ended it on a surprisingly serious note. Well done, this is definitely going to be one of my favorite shipfics. Have a Derpy
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Thank you, I was almost tempted to do something crazy, but thought against it :)
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Perfectly stated. Having Twilight playing the straight man (or straight mane?) and call out all the crazy antics really put a great finish to an already great buildup. The following resolution rounded the story up nicely.
Also loved it, when Chrysalis actually appeared, after been called out, only to be a small outlet to Twilight's wrath .
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Or perhaps she was the straightMARE? Raises hand expecting a high-five. Huh, huh. Anyone?
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Slaps raised hand enthusiastically. Now these are my kind of ponified wordplays.
yeah, I'm usually not interested in shipping but this was fantastic
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Thank you
Wait what did spike do?
Nice story.
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Thank you
I could feel twilight's anger myself while reading. Definitely a nice reading, good work!
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Thank you
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Fluttershy and Rainbow both stop being themselves if they ever do that though.
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Rainbow will be herself though because she afraid that because she doesn't get romance that she won't be good enough for twilight but love sees you for all you are and doesn't care. Fluttershy just needs to do it right when taking animals out like animal rehabilitation people do. They have to temporarily take animals out of their environment and care for them but certainly don't let run around town if they can help it .
Y'know, maybe Celestia and Luna were right to give more prep to a rogue Twilight than Equestria's latest villain.