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Twilight finds a strange book on her doorstep, with no idea where it came from or what it is about; she reads it. The more she read, the more she loses sight of who she is as she slowly gain an amount of knowledge she never thought possible.
While days go by, her friends try to reason with her. Can friendship defeat lust for infinite power?
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Oh yeah, this definitely needs a sequel.
Sweet merciful Buda! I can just imagine the battle between the princesses, the mane 5 at this point and the pillars all against Twilight who is just standing there unmoved shooting lasers.
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I just had an inspiration and wrote this, while I did wonder what the sequel would be like; I'm not sure if I should write it though. I think I'll wait to see if people will like this one (but to be honest, I don't think it'd have a big impact on my decision).
And that would be a fun battle to see!
meh she's no Szass Tam. That was a guy who knew what he wanted, and that was to unmake the world.
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Who is that?
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Forgotten Realms character. Basically in a kingdom of morally questionable wizards and undead, he killed everybody, rose them up to forge the kingdom into a giant ritual to unmake the world. Even magic going kablooey didn't deter him.
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Well, he sounds like a badass. Always liked villain characters.
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I am reminded of Hermaeus Mora and Miraak.
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I love the both of them! I'd say this story is a bit inspired by them, but that's just for the thirst for knowledge part.
I have so many questions and I love it!
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Thanks for the review and the fav! As for your questions, they'll be answered if I write a sequel! Who knows?
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I feel like the story is complete even if you don’t. You leave a lot to the imagination and that’s definitely something I think adds to it.
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That's actually exactly what I thought when I wrote the ending, but someone told me it doesn't end, just stops.
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I guess I can understand why. It doesn’t explain a lot and it ends on a cliffhanger where everything is up to the reader what happens next. Some people, like me, really likes stories that does that because it makes us think. Otherwise however finds the lack of answers annoying. In the end it’s all a matter of taste.
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I'm happy that people liked this story, and if I wasn't bad at writing stories with multiple chapters, I would've done more with this. Although I'm glad with the result I got nonetheless. Maybe I could write a sequel or even a prequel that would be about the book or something. I'm not sure; I just like writing "lore". I'll think about it, there'll be other stories before I make any decision anyway.
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If you ever want to discuss ideas you can always send me a note since I’m currently working on a story with cosmic horror and Lovecraftian themes. Who knows maybe we can help each other.
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That's not a bad idea! I'll contact you if I need any help, you can do the same whenever you feel like it!
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I will 😄
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What exactly happened to Spike and Starlight?
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Mind control is the main point of the spell, but it does more than that. I might explain further if I write a sequel.
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What are the ponies building out of curiosity?
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What will be used as a portal
Need to control someone else's mind then she can defeat the power of power and become self-absorbed. The book can steal her mind, and in the new series it will be done in so I plan to contribute to the making of the book
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