Smolder learns to feel comfortable in her own scales, by loving yourself only then will the inner beauty shine through in time.
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Awww that was a beautiful tale with cool big sister dragon, really love the way you write her here D20!
Also nice touch with Smoldy flirting with Gallus at the end there, well played!
This story is very cute, simple in execution and doesn't drag on.
Though, I am curious about that little bit of flirting with Gallus.
My only concern is how that dress is probably going to snag on anything and everything while Smolder and Gallus explore that "gnarly flight path," but who's counting anyway, right?
Cute story, nice message, implied Smolder/Gallus? What's not to like?
The title...
Reminds me of the song Dude Looks Like A Lady by Aerosmith.
Surprised there haven't been more stories about these two together, TBH. Nice execution of the concept!
Short and sweet. This interaction or something close to it could have been in the show. I think the student six never did get a chance to shine as much as they could have, and scenes like this would have helped.
Gotta love the part with Gallus at the end. I ship it
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Aww, thank you so much. I agree, the young six were really intriguing, but barely were given steam to really get going.
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I know right?
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Lol, well I did choose the name because of that song.
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, Thank you.
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, dress stylish and play rough.
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I might follow it up one day.
Ty.
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Always nice to hear from you friend, appreciated.
Lol, little bit of flirting is always fun.
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Ty, good to be back.
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Wait, what? Really? PAHAHAH! Almost the same thought, dude!
Amazing what you can paint with 1000 words.
A true Slice of Life with Smolder.
It is still keeping in character and could even be a conversation that took place.
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It's likely intended to be a mashup of that and "Man, I Feel Like a Woman" by Shania Twain.
My honest reaction: https://youtu.be/TXtWdardtYg?t=24
I guess throughout the years she never really hang out with any girls was mostly boys before she became friends with the others
Smooth Gallus lol 😆
Aww this is a very nice short story and apparently smolder really like to dress really nice and she's been feeling like that for a long time but she always felt like she will never be like that because what she is but Rarity gave her some good points about beauty and you should not be ashamed about what you like to be and everything again really nice story and I really do like how Gallus got caught off guard by how smolder looks like again good story very good lesson too keep up the good work
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Funny... this popped into my head
I only regret that I have but one like to give this fanfic.
It's nice to see Smolder exploring her fancy side in a wholesome way.
Rarity being the perfect encourager and informing Smolder what her fans already know (She is adorable damn it!) Was a perfect interaction for the two of them to have.
All in all the language is a bit simple, but it works perfectly for fans of Lady Smolder.
I'm interested to see what else you come up with in the future.
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I remember that song by Shania Twain!
What happened to her, anyway?
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Wikipedia says she released a new album and tour this year, so...
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Thank you so much,
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Much appreciated.
Beautiful and soo true you can't truly shine when your too worried about holding yourself back. I used to hate rarity as a kid since she was so frou frou but now i know how elegant and dignified she holds herself up to be and its pretty awesome
...im getting an odd vibe from this...say are you perhaps ...different in some way,