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Inspired by the fanart Dashie and Smoulder caught at the SPA!
Artist: Rutkotka
Fluttershy and Rarity were expecting a nice get-together at Ponyville's local spa. It was a chance to get away from their busy lives to just be in the company of two good friends. What they didn't expect to find is some others having a similar idea. What in all of Equestria are they doing in the spa together?
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I just read this, and must say, it is GREAT!
FOREVER
A ghostly voice belonging to a certain pink, party pony echoed around the room of the spa, causing the three ponies and dragon to look around with surprised looks.
“Wait,” Smolder put up a claw, “Was that-“
“It was,” Rarity confirmed.
“But how-“
“You get used to it,” Rainbow added
Trust me smolder I asked about that as well but it's Pinkie Pie you can't question to her
Do you mean complicated
“Turns out I like cute stuff and tea parties,” Smolder said before being pounced upon by the yellow pegasus.
“You like tea parties?!” Fluttershy announced loudly, “Why didn’t you say so? I could have invited you along with Discord!” To say Smolder was surprised by the usually timid pegasus’ behaviour was an understatement. She turned slowly to the other two ponies, who were just as surprised at Fluttershy’s sudden outburst.
Oh yeah that's right Fluttershy and Discord have one of those tea afternoon and seen her reaction change is pretty adorable funny at the same time
Wow okay this was a very interesting one and it's always nice to see smolder hanging with Rainbow Dash they both have a little in common with each other which it's cool to see and smolder admitted to Rarity Fluttershy and Rainbow about her fear about she likes cute stuff which its nothing to be embarrassing about I had that same problem as well but it is nice to see they're hanging out and showing smolder around this was a pretty good story keep up the good work
Although it would be very interesting if the tree of Harmony kinda observe what's going on around either being with the young 6 or the main 6
This was a fun read, especially for my 2nd fave dragon! Course we can't forget this part!
LOL can't escape the pink one!
Great work!
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Thank you once again ^^
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Thank you and glad you like the story ^^
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You're welcome. :D
Very cute! Super flattered that a pic I commissioned was the basis for a story! It's true what they say, a picture is worth a thousand words!
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It sure can ^^ Continue the great artwork on DA ^^
Didn't realize Smolder had hooves.
Since I'm already pointing out typos, here's one more--"roughing" is the actual word you'd meant.
Oh, so that's why that happened--she jinxed herself.
"I'd love spending time with the Terrorist who nearly murdered me and my friends!"
"What a spa was." I believe would make more sense? Technically that's not grammatically correct either, but it at least conveys the general meaning and idea.
To quote the wolf: "Smart Girl."
Nice story. Simply written, but delightfully sweet. I especially like the usage of Rarity and Fluttershy as friends. It takes me back to the good old days.