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I'm glad to be here and I hope we all can be great friends

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You’re gonna have to change the cover art. It’s clearly breaking the rules.

This is a pretty interesting(and hot) premise.
(And glad I got the chance to read it)

Though why didn't the Mane 6 invite Spike with them on the trip too?

You should have Flash and the other guys propose to Twilight and her friends at some point. Then Cadance removes the anti-pregnancy spell, and the girls (minus Cadance herself) get knocked up.

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I personally don’t think that should happen.

For those who want to see the full version of the cover pic, check out 1763835 on Derpi.

Great start! Hope celestia gets some more fun as it goes, she needs a good dominating!

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Normally
But he's usually aged up when written in situations like this

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So far, he's not a part of this...

P.S: BlazeSabre hasn't added this yet in the long description here but; I'm a co-author, and I came up with this... So you guys can ask me any questions too...

If you all wanna see more, and soon, we need some extra help. It'll be nice to have more people helping us write, plus we both dont have that much time to keep writing this as much, and all by ourselves; I dont have enough writing experience to write on my own. So we'd like some of you to maybe join us in writing on Docs. Just pls reach out to us!🥹:heart:

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Just stings that the Mane 6 get to go on a another fun thing but they left Spike out(like always in the show sadly)..


Wished he did get aged up in this AU

In case anyone is curious, or wants to visualise it, the story was inspired by:
https://hentai2read.com/oideyo_mizuryu_kei_land/https://hentaihaven.xxx/watch/oide-yo-mizuryuu-kei-land/]https://hentaihaven.xxx/watch/oide-yo-mizuryuu-kei-land/
I recommend reading the manga and watching the videos.
And the some of the ponies are dressed a little bit like this:
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On a side note though, for everyone who can't access either the manga or the hentai, and can't understand the imagery written in the chapters; here's how the vaginal cleaning looks like.
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Ok everyone, we made some edits to the grammar and vocabulary of the chapter...

11633516 I'd be careful with those links and images. The admins don't really like those things out in the public on this sight.

I love how you based this story off that sex land hentai, it's one of my favorites so it's fun to see the ponies in such a situation.

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Yeah, it was one of my favourite hentais too. At first I tried to find a story here on fimfic that also had a sex amusement/theme park, but since there was none, I went looking for writers who could create one.

Are mane six and three princesses are going to be turn into bimbos in next few chapters?

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You would like to see that wouldn't you? I'll talk to my co-writer about it

Comment posted by HailHydraz deleted Jul 16th, 2023

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Change of plans; an update. We plan to have him, and few other aged up characters appear as well.

I can already tell this is gonna be a favorite of mine. It's got my favorite shisp in it. Don't let this story die! I love to see where this goes next.

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Aww, thanks! I can assure you that won’t happen anytime soon, I won’t let that happen. If you want, you can take part in writing some of it too; you can add your own ideas, just reach out to us

Had the same thought of the Young Six joining in(well, 4 out of 6 so far here) after hearing Spike is coming in.
Are you two psychic? :0 Cool
(Wonder if Spike&co would bump into the Mane 6?)

Spike x Smolder is so lovely to see.
But seeing Spike x Ocellus happening too is a great surprise since I love that shipping too.
So seeing Spike will have both Smolder and Ocellus as his lovers is amazing to see

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I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter then

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What about for the other chapters?

"Don't know." Spike answered. "They were here yesterday morning, but now they're not. They didn't leave any note to tell us where they were going, or when they’d be back."

Did Twilight and the others leave any note for spike to read before they left to garden?

His cum was flooded her womb as her love juices covered his pelvis. Soon, Spike laid back on the seat before he noticed Ocellus was looking different. Ocellus was now looking like her pre-Changeling form as her body was now pitch black and her eyes were now crimson red instead of greenish blue. She soon looked up and had a goofy smile on her face. "That was the best fuck I ever had…" She said before she got off his cock and it was covered in their mixed juices while her cunt leaked out his cum. "Whoa…we came so much…"

Something tell me that something bad going to happen later on in few chapters?

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No and no, there was no note, and nothing bad happens, she just spontaneously and uncontrollably transforms during her first time

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Ok so is there some side effects from this?

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ok so what will happen now in next chapter?

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So after the young ones meet back up together: Cadance takes Twilight and Flash to a club and teaches Twilight how to do a stripper dance while she invites Tempest and Sunset to join in on a harem. Rarity will be on her own before she signs up to be in a gang bang where her arms are chained to a seat while her legs are forced out for the stallions to plow into her.

Please have Flurry fall for Spike. We don't have too many of Spike x Flurry stories. Good story so far, keep it up.

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