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I'm glad to be here and I hope we all can be great friends

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Eldorado
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Just an FYI - Fimfic's NSFW image policy includes the source link for cover art. I've removed it for you this time, so, just keep that in mind for the future. If you want to credit NSFW artwork, the best way to do it is to simply list the author's name and the website you found it on - people should have enough information then to go find the full picture on their own without a clickable link from this site.

this story has a lot of potential I hope to see more chapters over time, I would like to know if you would let me do a translation into Spanish, sorry if something is not understood I am using the google translator.

Wow amazing start, but thinking about it, Spike is the only dragon that wears clothes? (Well not anymore if Smolder catches him hehe)

And they are trapped, so no one can escape.

Seriously, even Dragons get scared!? :applejackconfused:

By the way, who's the artist? :moustache:

Nice, this looks interesting. EmberSpike never gets old and Smolder is always a nice addition to the mix. keep up the good work! :ajsmug:
BTW Is there gonna be a scene of girls watching Spike pee? That'd be hot :rainbowdetermined2:

Wow that was a great chapter, it makes me want to know what else will happen in the story.

Like, Spike finds out that Rarity lost her virginity to Flash, how would he feel? or Garble finding out that Spike had his way with his little sister, and Spike came back to Ponyville naked? cause Smolder rip off his clothes.

Wow, nice move Smolder, but when Garble finds out Spike took the virginity of his sister, gosh it would be funny, a great punishment Garble can do for Spike would be to chain him to a rock and call the other horny dragons to have her fun since he would be defenseless, to teach him no one touches his little sister.

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He will find out at the end, Garble will find out when Ember has a three-some with Spike and Smolder, and yes but he would sneak his way through town with Smolder to the castle of friendship

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Check up from Derpibooru (ID: 2974303). :duck:

So, Spike got his mini Harem with both Smolder and Ember only, or there is more? And he can compete with Flash on how many girls will be in their Harems?

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How about you send me the link to that in the PM

This seems like this is inspired from the work done by PapaDragon on Derpibooru...where Ember used the Scepter to...enhance some parts of her body, then she shows it off to Spike and we know how that went...

Cant remember the number of the image though...I can review my favorites there to provide it...I will edit this comment when I have the image number, I cant link it due to rules.

EDIT: I found the image--the number is #2908967 and it part of a series...Hope that answers any questions. Nowif I still got the number wrong, just look up PapaDragon69 and Ember together, and you will find the images.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter

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Okay but when do you think about this chapter?

I enjoyed this chapter but I honestly Expected something experimental about spike finding new ways to pleasure smolder

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That will be coming up in the next chapter

This was a really good for Smolder and Spike to meet in the form of mating season.
That last scene with Garble is very funny.

Ember WANTS Spike. Looking forward to that.

Can't wait for next chapter!!! This story becoming onw of my top 5 favs!

"What do you think you're doing with MY MATE ?!?!?!" She roared at Smolder.

Whoa, well, angry sex for Spike.

Man, this is a good story, I can't wait for more and see what else you have.

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You're welcome to help me out with it if you like

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Maybe have Twilight and/or Fluttershy come out to see how Spike is doing, like see if he is doing ok or needs help. Maybe Twilight could, at first come over to study dragon mating habits and bring Fluttershy because she is curious about that too, but they get super turned on watching Spike, Ember, and Smolder, and because they have some romantic feelings towards Spike but we're too nervous to say anything, they decided to come over, talk to Spike and the girls and talk about starting a herd/hoard with Spike.

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We can work on it and send each other private messages of our work on the next chapter.

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That's because you were hoping Ember would grow ginormous and swallow Smolder

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Or shove her head into her snatch and smolder would be unbirthed.

How about also adding Ocellus.

A changedling who isn'exactly sure which species she identifies with the most but was, at this very moment, giving being a dragon a shot. Unforunatelly, she just happened to accompany Smolder to the dragonlands during mating season.

Smolder: "Guess I sorta forgot about mating season. Oh well, since we're already here this might be a good opportunity to get you out of your shell."

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Go to the mail with the letter symbol on the author's profile

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Not so much the content, more the passive-aggressiveness towards you. 'I don't like where this is going', not revealing the subtext of them trying to get you to add specific fetishes, and apparently not being happy you didn't add them. Dunno why people seem to keep thinking that sort of aloofness is anything but cringe

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Would you like to help me write the next chapter for Less cringe?

Been enjoying this story so far, though I think chapter 4 suffers from a few pacing issues that probably could have been resolved if it had either been stretched out and gone on a bit longer than the previous chapters or split into 2 separate chapters. The resolution feels like it could have been a chapter by itself and likely something built up to, as things were it felt like everything was rushed for the sake of getting to the threesome instead of probably taking a little more time to focus on Spike & Ember as well as her initial plans for him and the consequences of him & Smolder ruining those plans and "defying" her.

That said I am really looking forward to the next chapter and seeing what comes next =3

I don’t mind it as is…if you’re looking for “material”. If as a read alone, it does suffer a bit. But overall a good story to tell and I do hole more of this comes out. But I am personally fine with anything and everything the author would put because this is their story, not mine, or any other persons. Theirs. So if they put things into the story I may hate, I’ll read it once, but then never again.

I hope anyone and everyone reading this stays safe, has fun, takes care of themselves, remembers to smile, and…has a good time reading this.:pinkiehappy:

Nice to see Gabby getting in the mix. I ship her and Spike sometimes.

This chapter turned out pretty nice. Not only was Spike emptying his bladder, but the other girls too, and there was even some plot progression and pretty innovative depictions of sexual activity. :rainbowlaugh:

This is gonna be interesting! :ajsmug:

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