Did you ever wonder why, in 'Equestria Girls,' there's an entire town of 'humans' who are somehow exactly like their pony counterparts in Equestria?
On the first day of swim class, Vice Principal Luna explains the horrifying truth.
This story MIGHT BE for the NON-CONTESTANT SECTION of the "New Blood Contest."
(I can't enter as a real contestant, because I have more than a hundred fimfic followers, and anyway I'm already too involved in the group running the contest.)
Contest Topic: "A Secret Life"
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Chapters (1)
water stream of consiousness! :D
Nice speech
I really felt their fear.
... the ... what?
OK, so single sentence, 1k words, and yet:
This part doesn't seen to flow in the one sentence, even with missing commas.
The idea of the "humane" world being full of mirror clone duplicates ... well, it would answer a lot of questions, yet not all, and it becomes one of those strange "what the hay?" concepts,
and yet, people basically sacrificing cloned children to a ... "veil" like transcendence to another world, and just making it a religious view ... no, *ponies* doing that,
all while Discord is busy with his games,
makes me realize that I really don't know how to react to this.
This is haunting and just the right amount of...beautiful in a way? Her fight and their fight? I just really dig this tragedy and triumph dynamic that your rocking here.
Oh crumbs, that's dark.
Fascinating and horrifying take on the EqG world, especially the implications of having so many familiar Ponyvillians in town. Thank you for an appropriately breathless story.