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marmalado


Long-time fanfic writer, newbie ponefic writer. Lives for platonic Pinkie/Fluttershy fluff. Proud Odd Squad connoisseur for over 9 years running.

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Life isn't going so well for Rainbow Dash. First she gets into a bad crash that disables both of her wings, then she's told she's grounded and becomes forced to stay with Twilight, which in turn leaves her out of Wonderbolt practices. This, of course, doesn't leave her in the best of moods.

But when Twilight shows her the power of the lawnmower and the goodness it can bring, she comes to appreciate the little things about being on the ground.


An entry for the A Thousand Words Contest II, under the Slice of Life section.

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... Cute? Yes. But I hated mowing the lawn, and there was never a good side to it. Never got paid enough either 😑.

Comment posted by Mochas Dungeon deleted Jul 4th, 2023

Hmm, not bad for a thousand words. I liked the single point you made and how it wasn't convoluted by other thoughts or interruptions.

This is the funniest got damg thing I've ever read

Rainbow shot up and raced over to her friend as fast as her hooves would take her. "It. Was. Awesome!!"

Mowing the lawn is a euphemism for drugs.

Aww this was such a cute story. :twilightsmile:

Ugh, this day sucks...first I manage to mess up my wings, then Spitfire comes and relieves me of Wonderbolt duties until I get better, then I have to shack up with an egghead. Celestia, please, you might as well get it over with now!

hey the part about the egghead will turn out to be really good, probably!

"Yes!" Twilight used her magic to roll it along the floor. "It's completely push-powered."

aww, love Twilight’s excitement about this! and honestly i feel the same way about push mowers, they are so elegant (hate the gas-powered ones grr)

Well...I guess it wouldn't be good for me to stay in the castle all day. Gotta stay in shape, after all.

hehe can’t believe Twilight got her to mow her lawn just like that! egghead W

Was this what Twilight meant when she said "it's about the reward"? The reward is...this?

Not gonna lie, I thought it would be something bigger. I mean, mowing the lawn without using my wings isn't easy...

...But it's so worth the effort.

aww, Rainbow Dash learning about the satisfaction of a job well done!

"He wouldn't elaborate. But as it turned out, the 'something special' was the smell of the grass when I was done. It was so nice that I've been mowing the lawn ever since."

aww this does make me wish i had a lawn!

Twilight smiled and nodded. "Of course. Mowing the lawn is much more fun when it's with a friend."

ahaha i don’t think i have ever heard this sentence!


a cute little slice of life, thank you for writing!

Dash being in the Wonderbolts yet still using “egghead” as a pejorative feels temporally confused. How long has she been reading Daring Do books at this point?

It's not about the physical labor. It's about the reward.

A snack? I’ve always felt pony-made lawnmowers should have salad dressing dispensers.

Ah. That works too. Very sweet little tale aside from that opening hiccup. Thank you for it.

Push mowers may be fun, but it's hard to beat the thrill of starting a gas-powered mower by yanking the cord. (Then again, I bet starting a chain saw is much more fun!)

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I always let my grass get at least six inches tall before mowing it, so it looks that much better after I finish. One of these days, I'll get myself one of them ridin' mowers.
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Edit: More lawnmower gifs!
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And finally, the best thing about using a gas-powered mower: SMELLING LIKE LAWNMOWER EXHAUST!!
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Comment posted by Okie Brony deleted Dec 28th, 2023
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