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Twilight and her friends decide that they wanna go on another adventure, this time they decide to choose a film at random and go in it, they meet up with a whole bunch of people there, especially Toons like them! But what they don't know is that deep in this joyful world, lies a sinister evil willing to kill any cartoon to make it worthwhile. Will they be able to stop the evil, or will every Toon in Hollywood along with ToonTown be erased from existence forever?

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Well, I have to say, this IS one of my favorite movies, so I'll definitely be looking forward to seeing how the Mane Six and Spike help out around here.

Well, I certainly liked the Mane Six and Spike's reaction to the situation (as well as Spike's frustration with being called a lizard and the stuff with the Mane Six refusing Maroon's offer) . And I will be looking forward to seeing their reactions to the rest of the deal.

Definitely looking forward to more of this.

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It might not be in a way you would expect……..

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Chapters finished you can read the rest now.

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Thanks very much. Did like the effort Twilight went to in order to give herself and her friends human disguises and I DO feel bad for Rainbow about literally laughing herself to death (though there ARE far worse ways to go).

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Well how did you feel about the rest of the deal? And I can’t help but agree with ya on the worse way to die part. She could’ve been dipped or shot by a weasel.

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New chapter released, check it out now… I don’t even know what I’m doing at this point.

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Also expect the CMC to show up at some point. I might even throw in 3 special guests.

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Thanks very much for letting me know. Though I think Scoots would probably take Rainbow's death even harder than the rest of the Mane Six and Spike took it.

Anyway, really good work on the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Especially liked the groups' reactions to the world they were currently in as well as the note of the girls having geodes like their counterparts in another human world that allowed them to still have their powers in this world (something Twilight put to good use helping that kid).

VERY much looking forward to more of this.

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New unfinished chapter out now. Check it out.

Hey there. Thus far, it looks like a pretty good chapter. Definitely liked the dialogue as well as the characterizations. And, yeah, appreciated Twilight making an effort to find out more about "Cloverleaf", even if it's in vain for the time being. And, yeah, the Crusaders ended up going through that television as well. Definitely appreciated Scootaloo's reaction to Rainbow's death. Of course, we're going to see just how much chaos the Crusaders are going to cause on the set.

Twilight: (after Eddie orders "Scotch on the rocks") What was the part about "'And I mean ice'"?

Eddie: I briefly forgot how literal minded toons tend to get.

Twilight: Well, I'll have a tea with a cream and two sugars.

Applejack: And I'll have an Apple Cider

Pinkie: Chocolate milkshake for me.

Fluttershy: Tea for me as well. Cream but no sugar.

Rarity: Hot chocolate, but no marshmallows. I get enough "Marshmallow" jokes as it is.

Ooops. Sorry about that. Just let my imagination run away with me for a bit. I will more than respect your right to not like the idea.

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No I like it, in fact I’ll use it for the ink and paint club part. Thanks for the idea! Also the chapter isn’t quite finished yet, I still have to get the entire scene of The Bar done and maybe a few parts where the crusaders try to act out their scenes with Roger Rabbit and Baby Herman

Will Rainbow Dash ever come back to life?

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That’s the plan I have. In a later chapter a cartoon will bring her back. Sorry I just spoiled it for ya but at least you don’t know the cartoon’s name.

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Chapters finished, you can read the rest now.

Thanks very much. And, yeah, I have to say, once again, you did a wonderful job on the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Particularly enjoyed seeing Roger finally get the scene right just as the Crusaders got into the picture and ALSO appreciated (most of) the main group's reactions to how a toon killed Eddie's brother.

REALLY looking forward to more of this.

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I didn’t wanna get them all in until Eddie told them. It would ruin the story

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New chapter out now, check it out.

I would think Judge Doom would show them what happens when you betray him, you get dipped

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Well The Dazzlings won’t betray him.

Well, the Dazzlings dropped in for a "visit" from the Human World, and got sucked into the movie too. This time meeting Judge Doom and his weasels.

A possible dialogue for later:

Pinkie: Judge Doom, huh? Where's your high tech armor, green hooded cape and iron mask." (everybody else looks at her in a confused manner) Oh, never mind. I was thinking of DOCTOR Doom.

and

Lieutenant Santino: Shut your yap, Eddie. The man's a judge.

PInkie: Not to mention the ruler of an entire small nation - oh, right. I'm thinking of DOCTOR Doom again. Sorry.

Judge Doom: It's all right, Lieutenant. From the smell of him, I would say it was the booze talking. As for the pink-haired female, I would say it was more of a mental disability worsened by too much caffeine. (Pinkie gives him the "stink-eye" while gritting and grinding her teeth)

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and just after the first meeting with Judge Doom and his weasels.

Applejack: What was wrong, Twi? I saw you looking at those three females with Judge Doom as if you recognized them. And NOT fondly, either.

Twilight: Sorry, Applejack. I forgot that you and the others haven't met the Sirens aka the Dazzlings like Spike and I have.

And, again, got a little too caught up. Sorry again.

Anyway, the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up are, again, well done and I'm definitely looking forward to more of this.

Will rainbow dash come back because I’m pretty sure scootaloo misses her a lot

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A cartoon will bring her back. But you don’t know the cartoon.

“You’re dropping it! Watch it!” The man said dropping the box which flew out chairs playing with instruments. The girls laughed their heads off but Rainbow Dash laughed so hard she literally died laughing. She fell to the floor and the girls heard, they were shocked by the sight.

... why?

Seriously, of all the things I could say about this story: Why do a trivial kill of a main character? And, as the followup, why did the others completely ignore this?

No attempt to do an emergency "take her back through the portal and work some magic"?
Heck, just sitting there, on the ground, for another call-out two chapters later?

Not for me.

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Plus the idea I have is that in a later chapter a cartoon will bring her back.

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You'll have the character fish Rainbow's spirit back into her body? I mean one of the weasels did try to prevent his soul from leaving his body

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Uhhh no. They will master the drawing skills and draw her again.

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Hello there, I made a new story if you wanna check it out. It’s not Who Framed Roger Rabbit, but it’s fun all around.

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Thanks. I'll look it over before the night's over. Thanks again.

Did Spike get a human disguise too?
Its hard to tell since he basically just vanished

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No he went into his dog counterpart. Sorry for not adding him

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Why can't he be human like the others?
Doesn't seem really fair

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Look back to Equestria Girls m8, Dragon becomes Dog in the series so that’s what I’m doing here and YOU CAN’T STOP ME!!!!!!!

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Just because he's stuck as a dog doesn't mean he HAS to be a dog in situations like this though..
It just really not fair for him

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Either way it’s my story and what I put goes.

Comment posted by nightshroud96 deleted Jul 29th, 2023

Shouldn’t you finish this story before you start the other ones?

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I like to do things differently if you don’t like it idc

"Well, it's not easy losing someone you care about. At least you got 4 other friends who care about you. And, well, me too. I may not like cartoons anymore but you all are a pretty nice group." Eddie said. Everyone simply smiled. Twilight felt a little better.

So Spike doesn't count as a friend then?

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He doesn’t really count as a “friend” at least to Twilight since Twilight is more like a mother towards Spike, but he’s a friend to the others.

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True, but Eddie probably doesn't know that.

Thanks very much for getting the chapter started. Really appreciate the stuff from the movie as well as the other exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up And, yeah, Spike is more "family" than a "friend" to Twilight (friend is strong, but family is even stronger than that), but yeah, Eddie wouldn't know about that yet.

Definitely appreciated Eddie showing more appreciation for Twilight and her friends than he does for most toons at this time as well as Eddie at least trying to comfort Twilight when she was reminded about Rainbow.

Definitely looking forward to the rest of the chapter after it's done. As well as more of the story in general.

Can rainbow dash please come back to life soon in this story

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