Once upon a time, there were three sirens who were banished to the human world. Adagio, Aria, and Sonata, who were banished for their crimes across space and time. Separated, weakened, but not without their magic, only when all three are together can they become gods, at the expense of the human race. So, the sirens Adagio and Aria, wait centuries for their final sister to arrive. When she does so, and they are united, humanity will have no hope…
Octavia Melody is your classic example of a college student who wanted to get away from home the day she graduated. Freed from her narrowed minded homophobic parents, her three best friends as roommates and therapy, things seemed to be going great. That is, until one night, on a camping trip with her friends to view the Harmony comet, they will discover something, or rather, someone, who will shake up their lives, Octavia’s most of all, in ways they could never have imagined.
Special thanks to Sleepless for pre-reading, and for the, eventual, cover art
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*marked as adventure, although fantasy might be a better word
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Notes from the pre-readers
Atm we only have sleepless beholder, and it was more DM chats that google docs, but, enjoy;
Sleepless reading through the first chapter;
Personally I was surprised this chapter was only 6k, kind of want to work on more detailed and elaborate stories. More because I tend to have a, just get to point B, type mind, which for good stories do not make I've learned.
Now to hope all you will like it
Well that’s all I got at the moment, pointing things out like grammar is always appreciated, and feel free to message me if you would like to become an editor or pre-reader and see you next time.
Should the short description mention astronomy rather than astrology? I don’t know of any major accredited educational institutions that offer courses in astrology. . . .
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That it should! And I thank you 😓
I love your take on the sirens arrival in this. A much needed change
Notes from the pre-readers
After Second draft reading, DM note
Learning Spanish:
Well I’m still learning, so, baby steps
That’s all we got atm, DM me if you want to join the pre-readers team!
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Just wait :3 I’ve got more planed with Them, not just Sonata, in the future
Actually, Spanish is my first language
I learned to write in English for this site only
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More reason for me to hate America! We’ve truly taken over the internet then :/
-:- >.> 😡
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I'm also from America.
South America!
Loved the chapter. I could understand enough to know it was Spanish, even though I don't speak it fluently
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That was quick :/
Guess a lot more people speak Spanish than I thought ^^’
Well, no regrets as I get to learn, and just pretend this isn’t a language on this earth
Very good so far! I like the premise, and Sonata being adorable, of course.
Out of curiosity, what show was your inspiration in this chapter?
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Show?
... oh right!
Nothing in particular, although it maybe obvious what I was referencing with that disability (Scootlaoo flight to the finish) but really i left it more open for the reader to decide
although if you must have an answer from me, I’d say I was thinking sesame street while writting
Also, dang! I only have three chapters so far?! :/
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All cool, I was thinking it might be a show called Maya and Miguel. The show is in both Spanish and English, and one of the characters is an amputee.
My second guess was Sesame Street... (that's complete humbug, it was actually Dora, lol.)
A very good story... While I love OctaScratch, it's nice to give the poor girl a choice!
I'll probably check back soon... I'm not quite sure what to expect from Vinyl and Company, but I'll probably laugh at whatever they do. You've really captured the stressed-out college kid logic.
Finally I get to see more of this. I like how Octavia and Vinyl are handling the reality of the situation
Wait till the other two show up
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sorry for not telling/giving you a chance to properly proof read, just sort of happened knowing at least this much wouldn’t get out sooner 
Thanks
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Indeed
Going to be quite the show stopper moment
Interesting story. Added to my read list.
I'll be honest, besides Vinyl's characterisation in the story personally, I do like this story and the idea. Plus Sonata and Octavia make for a neat pair.