Octavia Melody is infamously known you be a stuck up, high horse, thinks she better than everyone else rich brat who wonât even accept help carrying her cello case when itâs clearly too heavy for her.
Sonata Dusk, curious as to why, finds out when she is given a chance to help the cellist. Maybe, even become a friend?
Not part of my first two SonTavia stories continuity. Takes place more in a Canterlot High where the Dazzlings are just ordinary students.
Special thanks again to the The Sleepless Beholder, both for the cover art (fully drawn version in the works. Posting now so he dosnt have to feel rushed. Seriously, give him love for his hard work) and for pre-reading.
Rated teen for some swearing, and possible heavy themes. Wrote this as a sort of vent to some irl issues with taking criticism more irl. Feedback on this story is highly appreciated. Also, reviews and dramatic readings are A-Okay, just please tell me at least after itâs been published please đ
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ur artist friend might wanna have a think about how girls sit?
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Hahahahaha that's true. I have always done people standing so never really thoguht about it
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First comment I get On any of these stories and itâs for the artist -/-
Regardless, thanks for the feedback, even if not for the literature, good or bad It is apreciated
10352877 that's a good reply. both the reason and ur attitude 2 me saying it. wishing u the best with ur next art
10352905 the simple truth is that it takes 5 seconds of looking 2 get enough of an idea of the artwork 2 leave a comment, but 5 minutes of reading 2 do the same with the story. life is short and time is precious. that's why derpibooru is like way bigger than fimfiction
This was sweet, any chance there's going to be a sequel?
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Maybe... right now I want to get some YouTube videos done, and try to focus on something Short with the third art piece Sleepless drew for Me.
However, while I wasnât sure at first, mulling it over... yeah. Not sure if it will be the big novel I want for the ship, but I have more planed. Just debating if I want it as a separate story or just to mark this as incomplete
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Honestly I'd say go with a separate story, it works really well as a One-Shot beginning but a story built around Sonata bringing Octavia out of her shell would work really well as a sequel rather than a continuation of this story.
Note: This one feels like a "baby steps" type start and while some stories do a good slow burn this one just doesn't have that feeling.
You're really on board with this ship for the long haul?
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No one else is Writting it, so sure! Iâll captain this ship đł
The first 'locker' should be removed from the sentence.
You really should add a " everytime you put this - in a sentence.
Remove 'would'
She*
she's*
bell*
And*
Your missing a period.
Sonata*
sounds*
Change the period to a comma after tone.
And add " whenever you add ...
But*
Missing another period.
Real*
Remove Sonata after shoulder.
The, not he.
This is an interesting take on Octavia, being a stuck up and arrogant rich girl, which does kinda feel implied in Rainbow Rocks in a way, and her being an uptight snob to this degree. Glad Sonata talked some sense into her and that Vinyl remained a nice girl too!