Once upon a time, there was a land and a legend of a magical lake, with water that can heal any aliment. However, it is said to be guarded by a fierce beast. So far, all those who enter the woods where the lake is suppose to be, none have returned.
That is, until one Octavia Melody, who’s sister is dying, tries her luck. Will she succeed, where others have failed? And what will she find when she gets there...
*Was Featured on the day of publication! Thank you all 🤩
Cover art as always by Sleepless
I know the title and cover art, as well as tags, leaves little to any ‘mystery’ of what and who the lake monster is, and I’m sorry. Really wanted to try something more adventure themed with SonTavia, and I’m bad with titles >.>
Still, hope you can enjoy, and any feedback is still welcome 💜
Potential sequel? This was really good. It'd be interesting to have Octavia introduce Vinyl to the siren that captured her heart.
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TBH, yeah, I did have more in mind, but wanted this to be a stand alone one shot in case I never got around/busy with my other projects.
However, after being featured, I just might sooner than later ...
Thank you 💜
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Oh my god! 😰
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I'll never understand that sometimes. Looking under/up skirts.
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Capitalize 'she' in the second sentence.
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I think the second sentence should be changed to this. "After all, it was a rather off thing the village would do to tourists and visitors."
Why is she in a disguise?
Capitalize 'he' in the beginning of the third sentence.
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Replace - with a period.
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Capitalize 'she' in the second sentence.
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You don't need ' at the end.
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Pretty sure wo isn't a word and your missing yet another "
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Replace - with !
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Replace the period with a comma.
Missing " yet again.
You don't need that - it should be a period or exclamation point.
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Sentence should be changed to this. "That doesn't mean..."
Missing a " at the end.
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Once again, a " is missing!
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Remove a, in the first sentence.
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The was good I'll say, but there are a lot of mistakes that need to be fixed.