Web of Song/An Evil Plan
-Twilight’s Castle-
You guys know the portal that Twilight has to get to the human world? Well I do. The portal started to spark and out came 3 girls now ponies. They then looked around a little bit confused.
“What is this place?” A cyan pony said. An orange pony, presumably the leader, had enough of her questions.
“I don’t know where we are Sonata. Don’t ask anymore questions.” The orange pony said.
“So what are we gonna do? Stir up some trouble and feed off the negative energy of the ponies here? Some plan Adagio.” A purple pony said, presumably the cocky one.
“No Aria. It won’t be the same as the times before.” Adagio said. They then walked around the room before noticing a strange device in the middle of the room. They then got another look at it from the backside and Adagio knew what this was.
“Well, I didn’t know that a TV came to Equestria, wanna watch a show girls?”
“Sure, Dagi, let’s watch one.” Aria said. Sonata then turned on the TV before a vortex came out of it. They all then got sucked into the TV screaming.
-???-
A man with a black fedora and presumably all black was walking up and down the hallway figuring out what to do. 5 toons that are his weasels, all noticed this and decided to ask what was happening.
“What’s wrong judge? Got something on your mind?” The leader said.
“No Smarty, I’m just figuring out what we should do today.” The judge said. They then noticed a portal open up spitting out 3 other toons. The Judge noticed and decided to do something about it.
“Oi, what are you 3 doing here?” The Judge said. Adagio then noticed his attire and got a bit of an interesting look on her face.
“Oh sorry about that, allow us to introduce ourselves. My name is Adagio Dazzle, and these are my two sisters: Aria Blaze and Sonata Dusk.” Adagio said introducing her and her sisters.
“My name’s Judge Doom, and these are my weasel henchmen: Psycho, Greasy, Wheezy, Stupid, and Smarty.” He said introducing himself and his henchmen. Sonata then got a bit of a remorseful look on her face.
“Why name them that? That’s just heartbreaking.” Sonata said.
“I didn’t name them that, they were already their names when I met them.” Judge Doom said. Adagio noticed a poster that said “All Toons must perish.
“Hey Mr. Doom, what’s that poster for?” Adagio asked. Judge Doom then turned around and told her.
“I don’t like Toons. They always get in the way of my financial business.” Doom said. Adagio then got interested.
“Hey Doom. We can work for you for a while. We know how to get people to come to us with the power of music. I think it works on Toons as well.” Adagio said.
“Alright, I’ll watch your progress when we catch a toon. If you do well, you’re in the crew. If you do bad, then you leave and I never see your faces again, got it?” Doom said. The Dazzlings all nodded in agreement. Eddie and the girls are still on the case about Jessica Rabbit’s cheating problem.
Find out more in Chapter 6.
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New chapter out now, check it out.
I would think Judge Doom would show them what happens when you betray him, you get dipped
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Well The Dazzlings won’t betray him.
Well, the Dazzlings dropped in for a "visit" from the Human World, and got sucked into the movie too. This time meeting Judge Doom and his weasels.
A possible dialogue for later:
Pinkie: Judge Doom, huh? Where's your high tech armor, green hooded cape and iron mask." (everybody else looks at her in a confused manner) Oh, never mind. I was thinking of DOCTOR Doom.
and
Lieutenant Santino: Shut your yap, Eddie. The man's a judge.
PInkie: Not to mention the ruler of an entire small nation - oh, right. I'm thinking of DOCTOR Doom again. Sorry.
Judge Doom: It's all right, Lieutenant. From the smell of him, I would say it was the booze talking. As for the pink-haired female, I would say it was more of a mental disability worsened by too much caffeine. (Pinkie gives him the "stink-eye" while gritting and grinding her teeth)
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and just after the first meeting with Judge Doom and his weasels.
Applejack: What was wrong, Twi? I saw you looking at those three females with Judge Doom as if you recognized them. And NOT fondly, either.
Twilight: Sorry, Applejack. I forgot that you and the others haven't met the Sirens aka the Dazzlings like Spike and I have.
And, again, got a little too caught up. Sorry again.
Anyway, the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up are, again, well done and I'm definitely looking forward to more of this.
11629076
Will add that thank you!
Will rainbow dash come back because I’m pretty sure scootaloo misses her a lot
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A cartoon will bring her back. But you don’t know the cartoon.
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When next chapter
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Soom
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You'll have the character fish Rainbow's spirit back into her body? I mean one of the weasels did try to prevent his soul from leaving his body
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Uhhh no. They will master the drawing skills and draw her again.
11629076
Hello there, I made a new story if you wanna check it out. It’s not Who Framed Roger Rabbit, but it’s fun all around.
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Thanks. I'll look it over before the night's over. Thanks again.
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Why can't he be human like the others?
Doesn't seem really fair
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Look back to Equestria Girls m8, Dragon becomes Dog in the series so that’s what I’m doing here and YOU CAN’T STOP ME!!!!!!!
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Just because he's stuck as a dog doesn't mean he HAS to be a dog in situations like this though..
It just really not fair for him
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Either way it’s my story and what I put goes.
Shouldn’t you finish this story before you start the other ones?
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I like to do things differently if you don’t like it idc