After the last movie, Twilight and her friends all decide they wanna go on another adventure, but instead of all of them, it's Twilight who goes through the TV and not the others. Twilight meets a tall cat, 2 kids, and a fish who can talk. Will she get used to this world, or will she be seduced of her mind and just throw logic out the window?
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VERY little I can say other than good job on the recap of things to come in your story (albeit not much more than anybody who has already seen the movie could figure out anyway) as well as set up for the later chapters. Well, Twilight is going to find out just how weird Dr. Seuss can get (even for somebody who is used to both Pinkie Pie AND Discord).
Anyway, the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up were well done and I'm on to the next chapter.
Another well done chapter Twilight's observations concerning the narrator as well as how the DVD is similar to the book, but not identical were very well done.
On to the next chapter.
Again, this stuff from the special was well done, though I agree with Twilight feeling sorry for Crinklebein as well as understood her frustrations concerning her introductions getting initially interrupted. And, even though it hasn't been said, I could see where the Cat in the Hat would remind Twilight just a little too much of Trixie.
And on to the next chapter.
Good start on this chapter. As with the earlier chapters, appreciate the work going into the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Indeed, I could see where Twilight would get that confused by this Cat and I continue to feel sorry for Crinklebein.
Really looking forward to the rest of the chapter as well as more of the story in general.
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Hah still got it!
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Also I plan on adding the other main characters into more of Seuss’s stories like The Sneetches and Green Eggs and Ham, even The Zax. So after this is done I might work on those.
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Thanks for letting me know about that. As for the Sneetches, well, I could see where the group would be frustrated with the classism and also be reminded by that one salesman of the Flim Flam Brothers.
And, just out of curiosity, would "Green Eggs and Ham" include elements of the animated series that was released in relatively recent years for expansion purposes? If not, well, I can understand. As I said, I was just curious.
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Everything will be related to the specials but not too much. So idk if I will expand upon Green Eggs and Ham. Idk if I’ll make that one because, idk if the ponies have a place in that story.
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Gotcha. Thanks for the answer. To be honest, it's pretty much what I expected anyway.
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Hey wassup, I have come up with a new fanfic. Sorry I haven't gotten to Who Framed Roger Rabbit yet, but I will soon. In the meantime, enjoy this new story I put out.
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Thanks very much. Admittedly, I haven't watched the Goosebumps movie, but I still appreciate the heads-up. I promise to look it over before the night's over.
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hey wassup, got a new unfinished chapter for Roger Rabbit. Yep, working on that story again.
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Thanks. I'll get to that chapter very soon.