This story is a sequel to Kung-Fu Equestria
A year has past and Twilight Sparkle, now known as the Celestial Warrior protects Ponyville alongside her friends and fellow Kung-Fu masters, the Furious Five. However, a dangerous villain returns and threatens Twilight's new life with plans to use a secret weapon to wipe out the martial art and conquer all of Equestria. In order to defeat the new enemy, Twilight finds she must recall her past and unlock secrets of her mysterious origins; only then will he find the strength to vanquish his foe.
Chapters (9)
Splendid chapter my friend!
Very nice. This has my attention, just like the last one. I'll be watching.
So will this be a Twidash or Flashlight story?
TAI LUNG MY BOY!!!!!!!!
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Nice to see the story deviating from the movie whith Applejack having to stay back and Tai Lung joining the group. I wonder... He made a pretty direct threat to Fluttershy in your last story, so it might be an interesting side challenge for him if she's still nervous around him. (Not to say Fluttershy would hold a grudge, but maybe just a little skidish.) Just an idea.
On a side note, Zecora should still rhyme. The trick with parodies is that your putting a new set of characters in place of the story's intended characters, but the mlp characters have to still be in character. So far, your done a really good job of this! But Zecora's rhyming is a pretty big trademark of her character, so I personally think you shouldn't forgo it. Not that its essential or anything.
Best of luck with writing!
KO awesome chapter, nice sequel as we will see how Twilight handle the truth of what happened to her pony family while she along with her friends try to save the empire from a mad unicorn.
KO awesome chapter, Twilight and the gang have made their way to the castle of the Crystal Empire but couldn’t get the Kung-Fu masters out and now they are captured to be taken to Sombra.
I think you may need to fix that
KO awesome chapter, something tells me that Twilight isn’t going to sit around at the prison and may bargain more than she can of what she is seeking.
Top quality, I would expect nothing less given that you are such a talented writer.
My only critique come in the form of did Big mac really have to die? You pardoned the snow leopard but big mac gets blasted to bits I hope sombrero gets his just due cause I see no other way to justify it.
But really nice story it certainly has me hooked.
Another thing in mind is that no one has brought up the fact that Sombrero is using Cannons and well ....*cough* Party cannon *cough* or is it just the be of a technique and I'm just a bad reader.
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Yes we are, we are just taking a short break from it. It's a little thing that tend to happen when I spend too much time on a single fanfiction it eventually turns to rubbish and I lose interest, so by leaving it alone to breathe I can get the proper flavors from it
Will this story be shorter or longer than the previous one?
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No idea, I just write until it feels right to stop
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I'm going to continue but right now I'm working on The Shadow of Equestria
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Happy Hearth's Warming
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Yes I'm going to continue the story, just not at this moment
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Happy new year bud, I promise once I finish the next chapter of The Shadow of Equestria I will continue Kung-Fu Equestria 2 and I will try to write Kung-Fu Equestria 3 this year give or take a few months in between to let it breath
I simply love how trollish Zecora is.
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Okay first you misspelled my name, 2nd I've already uploaded the next chapter a few days ago, and 3rd I'm already 1400+ words into writing the next chapter of Kung-Fu Equestria 2.
And I swear to Celestia you ask me again I'm deleting the entire series. I've got no problem you leaving a comment saying to enjoy the writing but you asking when I will continue is getting on my nerves, I write on my own time and will get done when it gets done
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Thank you
KO awesome chapter, damn now Twilight has been literally blown away by Sombra’s evil and hope Zecora can help her heal through the pain as Twilight will need to stronger for the final battle!
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You good dude, and I'm sorry for the threat. It just bothered me cause it was like every other day you were asking for an update. I really am sorry my guy. I just don't do very well with people pressuring me to hurry cause if I hurry something goes wrong or the Fanfiction looks rushed and I don't want any of you guys to read a bad or half-assed fanfiction. You all choose to read my Fanfiction so the only option I have is to give you all the very best
-With Love❤
The Queen of Darkness
Lady Umbra
A lot of um... Sexual themes here. But a great chapter nonetheless.
KO awesome chapter, Twilight now knows about her homeland and gained the determination to take down Sombra stopping his evil once and for all as the final battle is coming!
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You don't like it?
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No, I like. I'm just expressing my sadness at Chrysalis's life.
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KO awesome chapter, Chrysalis die by Sombra’s hands and now Twilight must be strong to avenge her and her family the final battle is about to become something no one will ever forget.
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Ohh...
Also, you forgot to "Complete" it
KO awesome final chapter, Twilight has defeated the evil unicorn and made peace with herself to move on to let her family Rest In Peace, but it looks like another adventure is coming to them soon.
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Agreed. I mean, do you REALLY have to blind Fluttershy, or make those Disgusting Changelings almost rape the main five??!! Kung Fu Panda is definitely not like that.
But I do hope that introducing Chi might fix Fluttershy's Eyes, or a Ancient Magic Technique? Also, I think Tirek will be the new Villain. Because of both him and Kai absorbing either Magic/Chi.
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I just wrote what felt right[to me], I do apologize if you didn't like it, and Tirek was always going to be Kai.
I personally think it was the just right amount of violence, considering the nature of the characters' job and the story's T rating. So long as its not done too frequently (so as to not numb people to it) really injuring a character can pull readers in with concern. That's my two cents anyway.
Great job on this story overall. My advice would be to slow down your pacing just a bit and add in a few more 'quiet' sceens that weren't in the movie. Let us really get to see how Tia Lung interacts with each character on an individual level.
Hold up. How is this Displaced? Unless I missed something before I start, there's nothing of the usual steaming pile of horseapples that go into that genre.
Then again, I haven't read anything of the story yet. So what do I know?
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well technically in the first one Tai stole something from the merchant and was sent to Kung-Fu Equestria as Tail Lung
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Well, that explains that at least.
So Spike was the older sibling? I've been voicing him wrong this whole time?!
They left you before you turned 10 years old. Bruh.
Oh crap! They killed Big Mac
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No Spike's parent's died
Credits:
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SCA-DOOSH!!!
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https://youtu.be/a_pUW2sgbzI
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HIGH VOLUME!!!
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Another day have been saved by the Twilight Sparkle the 'Celestial Warrior'!!!
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Summary of the story (SPOILERS):
Twenty years before the first story, Prince Sombra, son of the crystal ponies that ruled the Crystal Empire, decided to use the power of fireworks as a weapon to conquer Equestria.
One day, a zebra fortune-teller named Zecora predicted that if Sombra continued down that path, he would be destroyed by a warrior whose name represents both day and night (the name "Twilight"). To prevent the prophecy from coming to pass, Sombra and his private army of changelings (ruled by Sombra's mate, Queen Chrysallis) travel throughout Equestria, slaughtering all ponies bearing "Twilight" in his name.
Horrified by that heinous slaughter, Sombra's parents decided to banish his son, who before leaving swore revenge.
In the present, the unicorn Twilight Sparkle is the Celestial Warrior and protects the village of Ponyville with the help of her best friends, the Furious Five (Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Applejack, and Rarity). One day, Master Luna shows Twilight a special technique created by her late sister, Grand Master Celestia, and that only kung fu masters who achieve "inner peace" can perform it.
Just then, Chrysallis and her changelings attack a village of musicians to steal metal objects on Sombra's orders. Twilight and the Five fight them off, but is distracted when she sees, on Chrysallis's armor, a mysterious symbol that causes her to have a vision of her deceased mother, allowing Chrysallis and her minions to get away.
Later, Twilight asks her adoptive dragon brother, Spike, where she came from. He confesses that he found her inside a basket full of documents and adopted her as her sister, but Twilight still doesn't know how and why she lost her real parents and ended up in Ponyville.
The next day, Luna learns that Master Big Macintosh (leader of the kung fu masters who rule the Crystal Empire after the death of Sombra's parents and Applejack's older brother) has been killed by King Sombra, who plans to use his new weapon, a cannon of fireworks, to take down all the kung fu masters and conquer Equestria.
Twilight and the Furious Five (except for a vengeful Applejack, and accompanied by Luna's adopted son, Tai Lung, and his Changeling girlfriend, the Urtica), are sent to stop Sombra and destroy the cannon.
After days of travel, Twilight's group arrives at the Crystal Empire, only to discover that the city is under the control of Sombra and Chrysallis's changeling army, and that Masters Bulk Biceps and Flash Sentry (Pegasus disciples of Big Macintosh) have been incarcerated in prison.
Before proceeding through the city, Urtica confesses to the group that Chyrsallis is her mother and thus the rightful heir to the throne of the Changeling Colony. Scared, Urtica leaves the group despite Tai Lung's pleas.
At the prison, Twilight tries to convince Bulk and Flash to help them, but they think there's nothing they can do against Sombra's cannon, so they refuse. At that moment, they are discovered by Chrysallis and so that she does not warn Sombra, they chase her throughout the city, but end up at the gates of Sombra's palace and are captured.
Chrysallis leads Twilight's group to Sombra's throne room, but they break free thanks to the "switching trick" between Tai Lung and Urtica (who had returned to challenge her mother) and successfully destroy the cannon. During the fight, Twilight becomes distracted again, when she sees the symbol on Sombra's armor again, who takes advantage of the occasion to teleport with Chrysallis to a factory near the palace, revealing that it has an arsenal of cannons, which he uses to destroy the palace.
After saving herself and returning to the prison, Rainbow Dash angrily asks Twilight why she let Sombra escape when she had the chance to stop him. Faced with this pressure, Twilight confesses that she had discovered that Sombra was present the day she last saw her parents, and that she wants to capture him so that he can tell her what really happened that day.
With those words, Rainbow Dash commiserates to the astonishment of the others, but still orders Twilight to stay hidden with Urtica while she and the others try to destroy the cannon factory (due to Twilight being too distracted to fight and Urtica weak from her fight with Chrysallis).
Later, disobeying Rainbow Dash, Twilight sneaks into the factory to try to capture Sombra, but ends up causing Rainbow Dash's group to be captured, while Urtica is defeated by Chrysalis. Finally, Twilight reaches Sombra, who tricks her by saying that her parents abandoned her. Taking advantage of Twilight's doubts, Sombra shoots her with a giant cannon, throwing her into the river and leaving her unconscious and badly injured.
The next day, Twilight is found and healed by Zecora, who takes her to the ruins of the village where she was born: the Twilight Village. With the help of Zecora's advice, Twilight manages to remember how the place was destroyed by Sombra and her army and that her mother, Twilight Velvet, hid her inside the basket that Spike found to save her. At that moment, Twilight realizes that she has accomplished great things despite the tragedies of her past, and in this way she achieves "inner peace".
Later, fully recovered, Twilight returns to the Crystal Empire to stop Sombra from starting his conquest of Equestria and frees her friends, along with the sudden help of Bulk and Flash (who join in after being convinced by Luna and Applejack, who also came to help).
During the battle, Sombra inadvertently confesses that he killed Chrysallis's husband, a pony named Wild Spark. Blinded by rage, Chrysallis attacks Sombra, only to end up being violently stabbed by him. Before she dies and reunites with her lover in the afterlife, Chrysallis decides to hand over the crown of the Shifting Colony to Urtica and then arranges an impromptu wedding for her with Tai Lung.
Finally, Twilight uses Celesta's technique to deflect the cannonballs and launch them at Sombra's warships, destroying them.
Later, Twilight tries to convince Sombra to forget her past and give up, but he ignores her and attacks her, only to be violently attacked by the Changeling Army (who wish to avenge Chrysallis's death). These cause the last cannon to fall on top of Sombra, killing him.
Upon victory, Rainbow Dash tells Twilight that what she did was pretty radical, causing Twilight to hug her without thinking, much to everyone's astonishment.
A few days later, Twilight returns to Ponyville and tells Spike that she will always love him as if he were her true brother.
In the end, in a secret village populated by the survivors of Twilight Village, Twilight's real brother, Shining Armor, discovers that his sister is alive.
What do you think?
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again spot on