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Lady Umbra


I love writing both Original Fanfictions and Movie Xovers[Meaning I write the movie plot with MLP characters] I also love all forms of feedback

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This story is a sequel to Kung-Fu Equestria


A year has past and Twilight Sparkle, now known as the Celestial Warrior protects Ponyville alongside her friends and fellow Kung-Fu masters, the Furious Five. However, a dangerous villain returns and threatens Twilight's new life with plans to use a secret weapon to wipe out the martial art and conquer all of Equestria. In order to defeat the new enemy, Twilight finds she must recall her past and unlock secrets of her mysterious origins; only then will he find the strength to vanquish his foe.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 43 )

Splendid chapter my friend!

Very nice. This has my attention, just like the last one. I'll be watching.

So will this be a Twidash or Flashlight story?

TAI LUNG MY BOY!!!!!!!!

Nice to see the story deviating from the movie whith Applejack having to stay back and Tai Lung joining the group. I wonder... He made a pretty direct threat to Fluttershy in your last story, so it might be an interesting side challenge for him if she's still nervous around him. (Not to say Fluttershy would hold a grudge, but maybe just a little skidish.) Just an idea.

On a side note, Zecora should still rhyme. The trick with parodies is that your putting a new set of characters in place of the story's intended characters, but the mlp characters have to still be in character. So far, your done a really good job of this! But Zecora's rhyming is a pretty big trademark of her character, so I personally think you shouldn't forgo it. Not that its essential or anything.

Best of luck with writing!

KO awesome chapter, nice sequel as we will see how Twilight handle the truth of what happened to her pony family while she along with her friends try to save the empire from a mad unicorn.
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KO awesome chapter, Twilight and the gang have made their way to the castle of the Crystal Empire but couldn’t get the Kung-Fu masters out and now they are captured to be taken to Sombra.
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B-But," the mare stammered. "Y-You stole a-all my metal pots for L-King Sombra."

I think you may need to fix that

KO awesome chapter, something tells me that Twilight isn’t going to sit around at the prison and may bargain more than she can of what she is seeking.
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Top quality, I would expect nothing less given that you are such a talented writer.

My only critique come in the form of did Big mac really have to die? You pardoned the snow leopard but big mac gets blasted to bits I hope sombrero gets his just due cause I see no other way to justify it.

But really nice story it certainly has me hooked.

Another thing in mind is that no one has brought up the fact that Sombrero is using Cannons and well ....*cough* Party cannon *cough* or is it just the be of a technique and I'm just a bad reader.

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Yes we are, we are just taking a short break from it. It's a little thing that tend to happen when I spend too much time on a single fanfiction it eventually turns to rubbish and I lose interest, so by leaving it alone to breathe I can get the proper flavors from it

Will this story be shorter or longer than the previous one?

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No idea, I just write until it feels right to stop

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I'm going to continue but right now I'm working on The Shadow of Equestria

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Yes I'm going to continue the story, just not at this moment

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Happy new year bud, I promise once I finish the next chapter of The Shadow of Equestria I will continue Kung-Fu Equestria 2 and I will try to write Kung-Fu Equestria 3 this year give or take a few months in between to let it breath

I simply love how trollish Zecora is.

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Okay first you misspelled my name, 2nd I've already uploaded the next chapter a few days ago, and 3rd I'm already 1400+ words into writing the next chapter of Kung-Fu Equestria 2.

And I swear to Celestia you ask me again I'm deleting the entire series. I've got no problem you leaving a comment saying to enjoy the writing but you asking when I will continue is getting on my nerves, I write on my own time and will get done when it gets done

KO awesome chapter, damn now Twilight has been literally blown away by Sombra’s evil and hope Zecora can help her heal through the pain as Twilight will need to stronger for the final battle!
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You good dude, and I'm sorry for the threat. It just bothered me cause it was like every other day you were asking for an update. I really am sorry my guy. I just don't do very well with people pressuring me to hurry cause if I hurry something goes wrong or the Fanfiction looks rushed and I don't want any of you guys to read a bad or half-assed fanfiction. You all choose to read my Fanfiction so the only option I have is to give you all the very best

-With Love❤
The Queen of Darkness
Lady Umbra

A lot of um... Sexual themes here. But a great chapter nonetheless.

KO awesome chapter, Twilight now knows about her homeland and gained the determination to take down Sombra stopping his evil once and for all as the final battle is coming!
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No, I like. I'm just expressing my sadness at Chrysalis's life.

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KO awesome chapter, Chrysalis die by Sombra’s hands and now Twilight must be strong to avenge her and her family the final battle is about to become something no one will ever forget.
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Also, you forgot to "Complete" it

KO awesome final chapter, Twilight has defeated the evil unicorn and made peace with herself to move on to let her family Rest In Peace, but it looks like another adventure is coming to them soon.
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Agreed. I mean, do you REALLY have to blind Fluttershy, or make those Disgusting Changelings almost rape the main five??!! Kung Fu Panda is definitely not like that.

But I do hope that introducing Chi might fix Fluttershy's Eyes, or a Ancient Magic Technique? Also, I think Tirek will be the new Villain. Because of both him and Kai absorbing either Magic/Chi.

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I just wrote what felt right[to me], I do apologize if you didn't like it, and Tirek was always going to be Kai.

I personally think it was the just right amount of violence, considering the nature of the characters' job and the story's T rating. So long as its not done too frequently (so as to not numb people to it) really injuring a character can pull readers in with concern. That's my two cents anyway.

Great job on this story overall. My advice would be to slow down your pacing just a bit and add in a few more 'quiet' sceens that weren't in the movie. Let us really get to see how Tia Lung interacts with each character on an individual level.

Hold up. How is this Displaced? Unless I missed something before I start, there's nothing of the usual steaming pile of horseapples that go into that genre.

Then again, I haven't read anything of the story yet. So what do I know?

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well technically in the first one Tai stole something from the merchant and was sent to Kung-Fu Equestria as Tail Lung

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Well, that explains that at least.

So Spike was the older sibling? I've been voicing him wrong this whole time?! :pinkiegasp:

He had lived alone for a few years at that point, and though it was natural for dragon parents to not stick around, Spike still felt his chest tighten at the thought of this little one leaving him too.

They left you before you turned 10 years old. Bruh. :derpyderp1:

Oh crap! They killed Big Mac :applecry:

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No Spike's parent's died

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