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Good good sir. I shall read on!
What a distopian Equestia you have made. Guards that beat children. Good read though, Tally Ho.
Ooooh, I love that last line. This'll be a good read.
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I heard the OC's in that fan fiction are horrible!
Absolutely self inserts they are.
My interest has perked. Carry on
Need to work on your capitalization. When a speaking line starts within an existing sentence, you still have to capitalize the first word. For example:
In this, 'alright' should be capitalized.
THE FEELS!
They are starting.
Chains? Wow Twi, you know how to pick a terrible name.
I remember this now.. time to catch up from when I fell behind
I'm a sucker for a sad story
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After reading the first chapter, I have to say that I think this is going to be a fascinating read.
On another note, this song takes on quite a bit of relevance when you realized it was composed by a British slaver who later joined the clergy.
I didn't know the ancient Romans were equestrians
This is good so you should feel good!
Also, I am going to mak a seal of aprooval just for this, cuz its that awesome
If I were ever to be an enslaved human, I would train myself with any amound of energy I could muster, then kill until I felt justice. I wouldn't care of the cruelty I was bestowing to the innocent citizens browsing my cage. Even the slightest glance and I would growl at them as just any rabid animal would. Some may even fear my for my amount of self building and morale. But that only adds to the fun when the "Human Catchers" arrive to "Sedate" me. At that time, there would most likely be an active flow of adrenaline, and the tranqs would do NUZING! And so If I were ever to be captured again alive, I would do anything to either escape into a resistance, the wild, or a family, or if things came to it, death. This is how pissed I become when I even think about such a dexterous creature being treated so worthless. I would even leave the injured civilians with their lives intact, so that they may remember my face as I bored my image into their very soul. I would help lead the escaped humans as a first choice. and together, we would take down the highest power, along with the gryphon kingdom, and then enslave the previous slaver race. The end. FEEDBACK TIME!
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She named her doll "Smarty Pants." How is this surprising? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png
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Considering that "Equestrian" means "mounted warrior/knight", and is a Latin-based word, and that the lower of the two aristocratic classes in ancient Roman culture was known as "Ordo Equester," the Roman equestrian order...
LOLWORTHY INDEED.
Strange take on the world of MLP. I shall read on! And just from the first chapter you get 4/5 staches.
You know, if groups like the Terran Starship Command or the half a dozen 'enslaving humans is evil and you are to be punished' groups come to that planet and find out about this...
Lost of nasty goes their way... in my opinion.
This is very dark and sad and I love it.
Well, I'm going to enjoy this story very much. I haven't read this, and I probably wouldn't have if my friend hadn't referred me. Praise Celestia for friends who read stuff that you don't, then tell you about it. And in answer to your, 'you can't really profit from fanfics,' well... you're wrong. I know one of my the teachers at my school has a son, who started writing fanfics, and now he has a job writing reviews of games I believe. Someone found his writing on a fanfic site and gave him an awesome job.
1358509 And yet it's a best seller with two sequels. Shit sells, tis the rule.
Interesting story, but I'm afraid its not my cup of tea. Especially the whole Ponies keeping slaves part I'm afraid I can't condone that.
At first I thought it would be interesting, then that it was just horrible, but then I rather liked it. 4 stars.
9 chapters. In about 2 days.
God help us all...
Poor boy, he's been called Chains and he finds it comfortable. How sad and
ironiciconic to his situation.So they had children fighting against one another? How interesting, I can hope to see more grim-dark elements in this story. And hope to see the ultimate form of retribution .
All in all, cool story bro. Cant wait to see how this develops (Off to read more chapters)
I usually don't read stories with combination Dark/Tragedy tags unless a Comedy tag is also present, but the description of this story drew me in. I do not like this version of Equestria, and I find the ponies' enslavement of the humans to be deplorable, but this story still seems interesting and well-written, so I shall read on. Good job.
Well this is rather sobering, I'll read this
Well fuck. I usually dislike stories with "Dark" "Sad" and "Tragedy" tags but this one is definetly worth reading. It's very well written and it reminds me of the movie "Roots". Just hoping the "Dark" tag doesn't involve any form of rape or maiming.
Im pretty sure people have already said this but...
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just sayin'
Chains as a name? poor bastard.
1362438 agreed
1362372Can you make me one?
Huh. I'm interested. Continue...
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Isn´t that more porn than fanfiction?
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Dunno, i really like it. Reminds me alot of Thrall, which means Slave, the Orc lord of World Of Warcraft/Warcraft lore. A slave named after what makes him a slave aka being in chains is quite fitting. And much better than a set of numbers.
Looks like Twi really likes her new "pet" though i wonder if she does see him as pet or as a slave or as a friend. Guess the next chapter/s will make that more clear.
I wonder how Twi´s future friends see slavery/use humans as slaves. Especially Rarity and AJ and also Pinkie Pie could use the labor work of humans after all.
1370129 I think it sounds pretty cool myself, especially compared to mine.
wow... I'm hooked. o.0
1362438 Hell Yes.1362438 Break out the knives and Molotov cocktails :D
Nice idea with the Heterochromia. Yeah, I know the medical name of different colored eyes! I'm such a nerd, and I'm proud to say that. Anyway, so far, I like it.
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theres a one called 50 shades of chicken
true story tho
I'm a little disturbed at your depiction of equestria to be honest... Still gonna read it though, just hope it doesn't give nightmare's.
why are humans so weak and pathetic in this story?
1765254 you gotta admit humans cant do shit against magic. Unicorns/Alicorns are so freaking op
Good concept, only read part one so far.
I do think some Ponies may view slavery as wrong though. Even if they are very few.
1917050 TCB? i know it is a comment from a while ago but can you tell me what TCB means?
i smell a story close
I only read the first part and got this really surreal feeling. It's like they're thinking of buying groceries. I know it's not new but dang, I never actually thought about how fucked up it would sound when actually spoken about.
Love the story. Love the execution and the idea of the story. Really makes you think about how slaves were treated back in the good ol' days of the U.S.
Saw this on FanFiciton; glad you re-posted it here.
Twilight and Chains' first meeting...so heartwarming.
2435358 The conversion bureau. it's an old, shitty, misanthropic fan-fiction that inspired a shit-load of spin-offs.
read it here
I wrote a very angry and short "review" in the comments section