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Haven't read it yet, but I'd like to track it to see where it goes.
-Minty
I readed this at fanfiction.net, fav
You moved from fanfiction!!! Huzzizzle
Yay so happy it is here now
Congrats ... Good story so far... Also dont be offended from my question .. But What made you think of a story like this ? i mean slaves ??? no offensie
* claps * good story
HA! Humans being enslaved by ponies! That's hilarious!
Favored in fanfiction, now in fimfiction. Welcome!
Its an interesting concept, but the delivery isn't all that great. The unfortunately common grammar mistakes and spelling errors don't ruin the story for me, but they certainly detract from the story.
As for the story itself, while I haven't finished reading it, the idea of a slave having their mind so thoroughly broken that they can't conceive of not living solely to please their owners is quite upsetting. There have only been a few stories I've read that portrayed ponies as committing such morally reprehensible acts as the practicing of slavery, but this one at least hasn't directly mentioned the more horrifying aspects of chattel slavery and its slightly more palatable for it.
This story is very interesting to say the least. The concept is odd, but very sound but i agree with McUselessMigrant, the grammar sometimes takes away from the story and few spelling errors Ive found are very noticeable. I look forward to more chapters of this.
Overall I give you double staches
Moar.
I do believe you've misspelled Shining's name, other than that, keep up the good work!
Good god I want more!
Awesome story so far!
Glad to see this story come here. Also, am I the only one that hope that at some point the humans rebel against the ponies?
I was hoping this would come here it's one of my all time favs on Fanfiction..net and now it is here too.
Urge... To crucify...... Impudent..... Grass munchers...... Rising!
Revolution?? abolishment of the slavery of humans? will these ever happen? i hope so.
A very interesting story, however what Urist McUselessMigrant said is true.
Well, can't say I liked this story, though, to each their own.
Awesome story! Keep up the good work!
moar nao
I think I read all of it until now in one and a half hour. This story really has taken a hold on me, and I'm hoping for many different things to happen.
Some readers already commented that they disliked this cruel form of slavery in a pony setting. Well, I was a little doubtful at first as well, but the main aspect of the story is the relationship between one slave and one mistress, not the whole slavery business, though the story will probably also explain Celestia's and the human prince's background, and how it had come to this situation. Still, it would be nice to see some kind of resistance from the ponies against the enslavement of sentient beings. For example, protestors accusing Twilight of being a vile slaver, or Twilight trying to change the way humans are viewed by ponies.
It'd just be a nice addition if you find the time and a nice spot for it in your story. Have a for humans.
Also, I'm curious already how Twilight's friends are going to view him. I can imagine Fluttershy having pity on him, Applejack seeing him as some sort of tool, and Rarity commenting on him being a fabulous accessory.
Finally, Lumi is a naughty pony, and she's having naughty ideas about a certain slave licking his mistress's hooves and being whipped for her enjoyment.
<.<
>.>
Okay, this probably isn't going to happen, but the thought is stuck in my head now.
Read the whole thing and I fucking love it
Every chapter every line, well bloody done. Love the guy Chains and I'm seriously curious on whether there will be other human slaves in Ponyville, maybe Lyra would have one, that would be an interesting thing to have occur. But I have to say one thing, since the enslavement of the humans in Equestria happened about 200 years ago, how is Princess Luna going to react to this?
But lastly, these humans that are in Equestria, are they from Earth and got teleported here or have they always been there?
1358407 Zing!
1357206
of course there is an oppisite of my constant fantasies of the ponies getting enslaved by the humans and then the fire spirit rescuing them
anyway
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Really cool story bro!
Honestly, I'm very interested in how Luna will react to humankind as a whole.
And is Chains... royalty?
hey, wow, hey! That's a pretty cool description, gotta read it
Glad it's finally here. I WANT MOAR!
wonderous. the story is great, the characters believable. i just hope that it doesn't go further down the mature path and become clop, that would be a waste of such great of a story. unless it were in a side chapter, as some do.
Yay, finally got moved over here!
Hm. The human nation was represented by a blue sun... and there's a human-hating pony named Blue Star... I forsee possibilities. Though it might be as innocent as a clever historian (Celestia seems too guilty to make jokes about that sort of thing) suggesting the name for the son of a human-hating family.
I wonder what Celestia did, why, and what Nightmare Moon will do to take advantage of it. If she even knows, of course - I imagine it depends on if she could observe Equestria from the moon.
And, of course, the fact that it provokes such musings says good things about the story, as does the fact that I can ignore the misspellings. Not that I wouldn't be happy to see them gone.
Well, I think I may as well answer a few common comments or questions. Or the ones that just seem worth answering anyways. So yeah.
1. There are humans in Ponyville, humans are pretty well engrained in society as the slave class.
2. There are human resistance groups, both with and without pony support. I'll explain them when they become prevalent to the story.
3. It wont be a clopfic per say, but there will be scenes of passion between Chains and Twilight. Maybe some other characters, I don't know.
4. Neither Luna nor Nightmare Moon are aware of the existance of humans yet, and I'll spoil it for you, while it will make Nightmare Moon curious, she won't think too much of them. Luna may have a more interested view of them, and I will use her presence to help explain how Celestia let them become enslaved in the first place.
okay so those were the more prevalent questions, here are the ones I find worth answering just for fun.
5. No, Chains isn't Royalty, he may or may not be descended from the human prince, but a future chapter will explain that it has nothing to do with his eyes whether he is or not.
6. as for who in Ponyville will has slaves or supports abolition of slavery, I guess you'll have to wait and see.
7. and I'm not sure if anyone asked, but yes, there will be other human main characters. In fact, one will be coming up in a chapter or two.
Also I'm glad so many people are enjoying it ^^ I promise to get new chapters out soon.
a good story, but kind of insulting. my name is Chain, you see.
Go back, and replace every instance of the word "privet" with the word "private". Man, that got on my nerves. Otherwise, AWESOME story.
I can only imagine one of the mane 6 right now with a human slave/worker; Rarity of course. Hands, very dexterous hands. Good for sewing
Moar chapters nao!
The idea of an Abraham Lincoln-like pony is stuck in my head now.
Down with the oppressors!
i wanna see more humiez in Ponyville.
Favorited, thumbs up, and most definitely keeping track. Will be awaiting more chapters patiently.
MOAR!
I normally don't like HIE type stuff, but this one is so different. I really like the history and character development you've put in so far.
My only minor complaints is there could be some fleshing out of some earlier stuff. The collar of his is never mentioned again, and maybe even some internalization or Twilight's thoughts of it would be nice. Maybe when her parents are training her in it's use. You mention the rags he originally wears and continues to wear when he and Twilight initially meet, and then he even thinks about how they are starting to smell, but then all interaction after that over his clothing is missing. No descriptions of what he is wearing now, or how generous the family is being to him.
Nothing super critical, as it looks like you were headed straight towards certain goals in the story, but a little more detail on some things to make it more complete would be great.
1358840 Did you by chance happen to get this idea from Rejected Fanfic Ideas?
Cool concept, not sure I've seen before.
I'm not sure how to feel about this, I just can't see ponies as slavers, to me that ruins the purpose of making pony fic.
Well, this is interesting. I'll be watching this, keep up the good work.
This story is BRILLIENT! I am very happy to read this hope more comes out soon. I can only imagin that Applejack is a southern plantation owner now haha pricless... and i can imagin Fluttershy and her image of humans being like animals am sorry this is to funny for me a nice smile for you KEEP ON BEING BRILLIENT!
i can only Imagin Lyra Heartstrings now HA
1359231 Well no, I did not get the idea from that. Humans are indigenous to the pony world, they are just young as far as species go. And if you looked into it, I started Chains almost a year ago on Fanfiction.net, and that post on Rejected pony fic ideas is a month old.
Good story and interesting concept as well. I wonder how Luna is going to act when she find out that ponies somehow enslaved another sentient race... she is not going to be pleased with it. I wonder why Celestia never done with it something. At least at the start both spieces was about to become allies ffs! This things is reaaaly weird for me..how the hell things bucked up so horrible for humans?
Aaaand...what the hell Chains is wearing now? I don't think that human is some clothes too small for him and full of holes was looking good with castle stuff.
The more levels are rising...
We all know where this is going.
So I won't even say it.
Instead...
I'll say this!
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when you say "privet" do you mean private or hi?
I say! I shall keep mine educated eyes upon this glorious piece of literature.