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Thank goodness this isn't dead.
Yay updates!
Update!? Huzzah!! I have been waiting for this for quite some time, i do hope that the future chapters won't take as long because i just love this fic.
Very nice to see this is still going. You may want to check your editing though. Biggest thing I noticed was not capitalizing when someone's dialog starts. I also have to say that your evilness to your characters doesn't compare to Jitterbug Jive. Once you've seen him at work you just can't take anybody being happy in any way as being "evil" to your characters.
Woot! Had to reread some past chapters to remember what was going on but got there in the end! heh heh
Great update! =)
Rainbow gets +1 from being a morally good person!
Name's Ellis and this updating in one day at 2:00 AM Eastern time.
I didn't need that sleep anyway
Since pegasi are morally superior to the other two I wonder if Fluttershy is going to go on Twilight's flank. I also wonder how you are going to get the element of kindness to be friends with a slave owner.
It made sense that if any group of ponies looked down on slavery it would be pegasi[Need break here. semicolon or period.] most of them lived in cloud cities and humans wouldn’t be able to live there, so very few pegasi, the ones that lived on the ground would even have a use for them. <=This makes no sense grammatically
There are still underground fighting rings across equestrian.
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A few other minor issues your proofreaders should get, but as a whole a a pretty good chapter. Interesting that the scene with RD was almost exactly to script, but Rarity was entirely different.
Ah, poor Chains. Being mistaken for a girl....
Awsome chapter! Loved the Rarity part,
can´twait for fluttershy!Excellent, nice to see an update. Good coverage on providing insights about what happens outside of Canterlot, and as to some of the main cast with their views.
It'll be nice to see one more who have a human companion with them, seeing that only 2 of the group six have them: Twilight Sparkle and Applejack. But who else would have a human that ties in to their lifestyle and personality, besides Rarity as the idea with her is thrown in the air for the time being?
With Pinkie Pie, she directly she wouldn't need one, but I can imagine Sugar Cube corner would most likely have one due to having more labor force. Then again, PP can use a human to help her with getting supplies and organizing her many parties. Gender: Most likely Male, for use of labor for either the Sugarcube Corner or PP Directly, female is a possibility as well.
With Fluttershy, hard to say. She is most likely neutral on the subject with humans, due to her growing up (most likely) at ground level, away from the social standards that the pegasi have in their community. However, it doesn't mean that she has no sympathy for the human who are misused as slaves. Due to her nature, one can assume that she may adopt a human who has been returned and neglected by it's previous owners, most likely a child that would be adorable to see a pony acting as a mother-figure to young human. If not owning a human, most likely work behind the scenes to help give funds to the rebels with the income she earns from her animal daycare. Anyhow, if you choose the earlier with her having a human child, please consider having it as a girl that would give diversity since all the humans slaves met so far are men.
Nice chapter, can't wait to see more. Keep up the good work man.
Fuck I lol'd.
148 days of being Chainless, Booky.
So much for having the rest of the girls in this chapter... to top it all off Fluttershy was the one I was looking forward to the most.
2434641 - but well worth the wait .
MOAR!!!
MOAR!
I was hoping that you would have the pegasi be against slavery, glad to see you do it. Not only does it makes sense it also brings forth a key plot point. I wounder what you would do with the others races. I can imagine that the diamond dogs have a great number of slaves to work in there mines.
ses chains updated happy
ses its only 3000 words.........takes out cocked gun
reads authers note uncocks gun and places it next to computer
we will see
i have an idea give fluttershy a human BUT say that she bought him/her only so she could get said person out of the slaver shop ehhh ehhh not sure just thinking
Is the last sentences foreshadowing a revolution?
Very happy to see an update for this! I've always said this had potential, and now it's updated I'm looking forward to seeing it.
Good chapter!
YES! new chapter woot!
glad to see this continuing.
Slave wagons attacked? Pegasi abolitionists? Well, then. Do continue.
So when is Chains going to become the Equestrian Moses? "Let my people go you pompous prissy pretentious ponies!"
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For me it was five stories suddenly updating today.
Chains 21w, 1d since last update
Names Ellis 28w, 1d since last update
It Must be Tuesday 26w, 5d since last update
Twilight Sparkle: History's Greatest Monster 23w, 1d since last update
Human: Shades of Grey 24w, 2d since last update
Freaking stoked and amazed. Best day in some time for me.
YES!!! Word fail me so I let Rarity take over:
Had kind of expected that Rairty had a slave, but oh well. Nice to see an update to this lovely story.
Also nice that the plot thickens with either free slaves, aggressive abolitionists or Feral human tribes closing in on Equestria.
Keep up the good work hope for a new update very soon.
Oh, darn!
You got rid of real opportunity, you know that?
You could have made Fluttershy an angry racist!
Anyways, glad to see everything is updating.
YES and update! I'm very glad to not only see that this is not dead, but to get a good chapter as well. Looking forward to the next update.
Cool, I've been looking forward to an update.
Great chapter, as were the rest of course.
I'm really looking forward to the new view on the whole my little pony story, considering the introduction of slaves. That's bound to make for a few interesting scenes.
At any rate, eager to read the next one!
ah! the author lives!
Sweet! This story's not dead!
this looks like it could be good
SWEET MOTHER OF GOD CHAINS AND IT MUST BE TUESDAY UPDATED ON THE SAME DAY
Hooray! New chapter!
YAY! A update
Yay three of my favorite stories updated on the same day awesome
I'd say Rainbow Dash and others would not only dislike the slavery of Humans but also the Princess Celestia herself.
Rainbow Dash may show loyalty to her friends and all those who wish Humans free, but not to Celestia or any slaver drivers.
I saw the update and I was like FUCK YES!
little did i realize i nearly yelled it out during school this morning
More chapters!
I smell a civil waaaaaaar~
typo alert that and I am very ecstatic to hear this hasn't died
Scaring should be staring*
So glad that it isn't dead that I don't mind the typos.
A very nice surprise to get home to. I think I wouldn't mind switching places with Chains, since he's treated nicely and all.
I was a little confused since it's been so long that I've read the older chapters. I actually thought that Twilight and Chains had experimented with each other, or something like that... or were they just looking? Maybe someone remembers better than I.
i may have a dirty mind, but...
'it….. wasn’t that bad.’
made me smile and sort of giggle
2435439 They kissed, and Twilight teased him a little when she practiced her shape shifting magic. But they were never naked together. Her Parents wouldn't let her take him into the bath with her. After all, he's not a bath toy, the silly filly.
It's not dead! Yay!
You know for being so smart rarely does Twilight ever just sit down and actually think about issues or others opinions, usually she justs paints a black and white picture of how things are and leaves them at that.
Also I just noticed it seems the unicorns tend to smile upon slavery the most, which is extremely peculiar. Sure Applejack has slaves, but it just seemed liked she had no opinion on the matter (and we haven't met any other earth ponies, pinkie doesn't count). Then there are the Canterlot unicorns which might as well have huge labels on their foreheads that read "villains" and even other unicorns such as Twi and Rarity talk about slavery very casually. Now Ponyvillie being a southern rural area is against Slavery, while Canterlot the head of industry in the north is for Slavery.
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Thanks for the info :)
If I find myself with a couple buckets full of time, while in a reading spree, I'll re-read it :)
2435619 Honestly I didn't really do anything. Slavery in Canterlot is more of a status symbol. The Aristocrats going around saying, "oh look how exotic my slave is, beautiful, isnt it?" their mentality is about the same as how they would view owning a fancy vase or something.
A more rural place you'll see slave labor, either in mines, quarries, farms etc. To own a slave for a status symbol is a sign of wealth because they aren't working so the owner can't really make that money back, where they're more of an investment for say a mine owner or something.
Ponyville only really has one large farm, which is family owned, by a family that doesnt usually own slaves with this one exception. Which I'll add they obtained illegally.
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I assume magic does strange things to a people. Unicorns who grew up in a unicorn controlled society probably think of themselves as superior than their fellow ponies, and a strange race like humans, might be completely out of the competition. Whereas Ponyville is just a happy little community. They don't have any need for cheap labour, since they're used to doing it themselves, and they live closer to nature and animals, which includes humans in their world. Applejack here is the exception, since she really needs help on the farm, and I think, from what I remember, that she didn't get those two like your usual, snobbish unicorn would.
Twilight grew up in such a unicorn community, but she was introduced to slaves, and given power over one, as she could still see him with the innocent eyes of a foal, and Rarity didn't react snobbish at all. She was as giving as usual. However, she, as a proper lady, accepts slavery as part of the high life. A nastier version of her, would've screamed at Chains for setting one of his muddy hooves... I mean feet, into the room she'd prepared for the festivities.