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author. what are you doin. Author. Stahp. *cries*
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TWILIGHT SPARKLE!!!
BECAUSE OF YOUR COMPASSION TO THIS HUMAN, YOU SHALL BE SPARED!!!
THE SLAVERS HOWEVER SHALL DIE!!!
1358527 Let me see...
It may be illegal to do so...
Please give me a moment.
...
Alright, so you are now authorized to kill the slavers!
Enjoy the justice sir!
Reading this makes me really want to set fire to some ponies for some reason... huh, weird.
A small spelling mistake darling, "He made that privet oath was only the other day". Private is spelled incorrectly, secondly I don't think you need the was in this sentence.
You have a fine story I can't wait to see more
Those pony slavers gonna die.
reading this makes me think
me+50.Cal=love hehehe
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"Mom, what is that?"
"I don't know..."
[giant explosion that makes mushroom cloud, obliterating a few blocks]
"Celestia! Something has happened!"
Quickly, the messenger was assassinated by a .50cal BMG HEIAP round from a coil gun just as Celestia looks out the window, seeing specks in the distance. Unfortunately for her, these are drop pods raining down on her beloved country... full of soldiers whose mission is to carry out the First Emperor of Mankind's decree on that world: Those who show compasion are to be spared, everyone else is to be put to the torch...
1359467Permission to brutally kill the slavers sir or madam?
1359998 you shall know everlasting pain you compassion starved pony!
1358527 quickly! ready the OFC
Mother of God, He would injure himself so that he won't be an outcast where he would faced a cruel fate of death and punishment.....for the fear that his master would find him "boring"....
Jolly good job sure, you deliver us a chapter where the protagonist is shown to be in constant fear and obstacles that will make this story interesting. you got me intrigued. I shall read more now.
1363355 All hail the God-Emperor
This is the darkest fic I've read, I usually stick to slice of life/comedy but this is well written and has my attention.
Ok. You got me. I'm in. CONTINUING ON!
He made that privet oath was only the other day, but he held nothing more sacred to himself.
I'm sure you meant 'private'. Awesome story by the way xD
HNNNNG! This filly Twi is so cute. So frikking cute it gives me heartaches. Gawd, i hope she grows up quickly or else she´ll be my death soon. Damn so cute, so darn frikking impossible cuuuuuteeee~ <3
Not sure why everyone goes crazy for the slavers. After all this seems to be an accepted form of society in this fic, one they probably lived hundreds of years in by now. Not all slaves gets abused and killed just for looking into their owners eyes. Twi´s best proof of that. Same for Twi´s parents who trusts Chains after a week to be alone with their daughter on a book shopping tour.
Also don´t forget that in slavery some slaves lived off much better than "free commoners". For example the worst Chains has to do is being test subject for filly Twi´s spells and i´m sure she won´t do any lethal ones to him, where commoners like AJ´s family have to buck trees, everyday, many of them, hard, to earn their food.
Yes, he´s not free but he could be free and worse off.
Though i´m glad in our world´s no slavery anymore... on the other hand given how less some jobs pay, slavery just got replaced with something else: Debts. Lots of debts and not enough payment to get rid of them. <_<
I wonder about Shining Armor and Princess Cadence. Will they show up?
When will Spike be shown or will this go a different story route?
Gonna find out next~ :D
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Just need to put it out
1359998 ...Thats a reference to the Ood in Doctor Who, isn't it?
This is incredibly messed up. But it is pretty interesting.
I like how this human has basically taken over Spike's role in this alternate universe. I always thought it was pretty messed up how Twilight basically used Spike as a child laborer in the show, and didn't extend the same kind of friendship to him as she did to the other 5 main ponies. It was like he was inferior and only meant for her servitude. So I like how this story seems to sort of touch on that theme.
Also, I am interested to know how humans came to be enslaved in this alternate universe. I hope it is explained in future chapters.
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that pic gets me everytime
if i was enslaved this is what i would say: "what drives a supposedly peaceful race to enslave another being with the capacity for sentient thought such as myself? what do you want? do you even want anything at all? or are you just so cruel as to force us to work so you don't have to? we are capable beings. as long as we stand together we will not fall. we will destroy our enemies, and rain fire and hell upon those who wrong us. you may crush our bodies, but you will not win against our spirit. we have crushed our foes before, and the same fate will befall you. we are not afraid of you, and YOU.WILL.FALL!
This story is interesting, Chains is a very strange character a line from Game of Thrones goes quite well with this story "People learn to love their chains".
3004600 Ugh, Game of Thrones, the show where they repeatedly make you like a character, then kill them in a sadistic and brutal way. Blegh.
Congratulations Chains, you just became a House Slave, one of the most hated of all slave groups.
Very interesting thus far...
Right in the cultural preconceptions. Ow.
I had such a knee jerk reaction to that clause. That's just...
Wrong. And sick. And wrong. And...
Wrongsick.
obviously the relationship is building, and may i say, you do it beautifully!
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I think I'm gonna be sick... And read a bit more too.
3435900 You and me both
1368974 OMG. You sir know of the two most beautiful things in the is world. Warhammer 40k and Stargate SG-1
3002706 LIKE A BAWS
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Oddly, the fics you comment are usually good ones.
* Returns to reading *
Really good fanfic its really heartlifting.
1363355 it shall be done Milord
chains kinda reminds me of myself when i was little
4443506 Shy and obedient to a fault?
u wot mate?
There is one dialect/accent thing I can think of that could make this sentence work, but he hasn't used accents before and it doesn't have the punctuation for that anyway.
He made that private oath, was only the other day but he held nothing more sacred to himself.
It's still not proper English, but it will work unless you are willing to totally reword the whole sentence, which I recommend.
4823452 Even then though...
I mean, read it.
It's still pretty u wot m8?
this is such an interesting and original concept, love it.
The thought that you would have to be masochistic just to still be interesting is sad.
Yay slaves no yay for masochistic slaves who make twilight cry but are really just trying to help her.
Sorry fi y'all kill me for this but this story is actually good I'm surprised
This chapter made me feel ill. This 8-year old child is so fucked up in the head, that he is willing to mutilate himself to stay interesting? These fucking Ponies need to die. Twilight hasn't done anything wrong, aside from owning a thinking, feeling being as a slave, but a small portion of that could be chalked up to societal norms.