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HELLLLLLLLLSSSSSSSSSSS YEEEEEESSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hurray!!! they're together again!
Excellent! Keep it up!
Loved the chapter, but I CAN'T STAND chains near constant stuttering when someone says anything to him.
Makes me wonder what Luna is thinking about this whole "human slaves" situation.
NO, NOT THE HEART!!!! IT ONLY BRINGS A GIANT SHITSTORM TO YOUR LIFE!!!!!
When Discord gets out, well I wonderwhat he and Luna will have to say about the human slaves. :discordsmirk:
More Dark Pony Brotherhood!!! Down with Chains
I wonder if we're gonna see Bandage again. He seems to be a pretty interesting guy.
Yes! Finally! Awesomeness... Just awesomeness
Huh. I half-expected the Elements of Harmony to hit Celestia instead of NMM, because slavery. And Luna is much calmer than I figured. I thought she'd be pissed at Celestia and ready to start a civil war.
VIVA LA REVOLUTION! HUMANITY ALWAYS PREVAILS!
3527289 fuck it,If the new lunar republic abolishes the slavery thing,they have my vote,and if need be,My blade
3527289 All in good time, yeah? You don't just spring into action right away, it takes time to take in the situation. Hopefully, the Lunar Republic will rise on the side of Humanity, or a giant Human Rebellion against the Monarchy. DOWN WITH THE SOLAR TYRANT!
I'm STILL waiting for him to bring frogs and locust and part a sea somewhere...
I like this, Can't wait for more!
3527307 YEAH!!! Just keep the Nightmare Moon Moon, the retarded timberwolf outta this.
That ending...Dawwww
Kinda interesting how Luna seems to openly express what I think Celestia feels on the inside about slavery (or, at the very least, towards chains). Still not sure if Celestia is okay with slaves or if she wants slavery abolished, but so far I'm betting she does not. The only reasons I could think of that she didn't get rid of it already is she'd lose so much support of the nobles, or I'm wrong and she's okay with it.
Still doesn't explain why she let this be a thing in the first place, unless the original legislature or w/e was in the interest of preserving the race through careful containment; seeing as the ponies see them fighting and would probably think their just animals that need detained. Or maybe Celestia was just a jerk in old times and she slowly mellowed, who knows, I'm rambling.
I am torn by this story.
I love it, I really do.
However, every update, I remember that Tragedy tag you have.
I despise tragic endings. Absolutely despise them. Considering the content of this story, I can only assume that this ending is going to be extremely tragic.
It is with much regret, that I just cannot continue reading this.
(You still get my thumbs up though)
3527233 wondering if he knows zecora...
3527671 Tragedy takes many shapes and in many forms, there is bitter sweet and sour, there is more but I have yet to taste them. let us keep a deep breath and remember tragedy may not always be the ending and could be somewhere else in the story.
On a another note friend, he could use that tag to bring every moment of injury and pain much more dramatic reaction. we don't know if that's truly what it is or not, LET US FIND OUT!
Gentle breeze guide your path, and a warm smile welcome your return.
I can only think of the absolute shitstorm and following equine extermination that would happen if the Imperium found this.
Luna against human slaves. It makes sense.
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I am not a Warhammer guy and I felt the same way. Exterminatus....... After evacuation that is. Whelp. Onwards to the season 4 meetup!
I was honestly half expecting his arm to be blown off after his arms got magic shot and the story becoming really complex as Chains is actually Bandage but Bandage is from the future!
My imagination is weird.
I can feel the Revolution coming on.
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That would have been interesting, but no, Bandage has different color eyes so I couldn't have fit that in anyways. Bandage has his own backstory which will be explained.
3527823 Or the World Eaters, imagine giant chaos space marines running around Ponyville screaming BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!
3527823
To paraphrase the very mortal dying words of some poor, foolish Eldar,
"This world isn't theirs; it's oursssssss..."
3528146>>3527966>>3528019 I would love to see the Vlyka Fenryka, the Wolves of Fenris, wreaking havoc. I have a particular beef with slavery.
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I doubt I'll bother going into great detail in the story, but I figure its something like this, depending on the slave and the particular area they're born into, they'll be trained a certain way, usually from an extremely young age, like around 5. Beaten for the slightest provocation, taught that they are inferior to pony kind as a whole. Of course this wont work on all humans, but particularly troublesome ones would likely be disposed of outright. The smart ones obey, but also plan.
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I was talking about Tyranids.
Dawn of War 2 began with a fight between Space Marines and Eldar.
"This world is ours!" says the Space Marine Captain while standing over the dying Eldar Farseer.
"No," the Farseer points upward, "this world is theirs."
Then you see a twisting, shifting swarm of something so massive it's beginning to blot out the entire sky.
Kufufufufu~ That was well worth the wait. Any idea when the next one will be? Oh well, I wish you the best of luck with your stories and life etc. Until then Comrade (Friend?). I feel as if i am forgetting something but oh well. Kufufufufu~
F1utt3rShI~
(Daemon Spade)
3528406 Haven't played DoW II yet.
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All I know is that if Celestia convinces her that it's "For the best," or that she "Had no choice," Imma find the closest living thing and pop its head off like a bottlecap.
I think the reason i couldn't enjoy this story was not the enslavement issues going on but, lack of any ressistance from humans with some success being shown. I mean the most we have so far is the guy named bandage, and even though he is badass, he doesn't care about it anymore. I mean what happened to fighting spirit of humanity?
P:S= Come to think of t, it could be because we followed Chains so far who is meek and weak with zero racial identity. There might be some humans we haven't seen yet and i might be very wrong in my earlier assesments... Meh... There was a romance tag after all...
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I hope it is violent. Revolution can't be civilized after all. Either you succeed or die.
3527208
I expect him to take side with humans but it is up to author i suppose.
3527106
Depends on how far into the past slavery goes. If slavery started after her banishment, i expect her to be appalled and throw a fit along with a "What the HELL, Celestia?" moment, otherwise nothing which is more likely as i don't think author has any wish to show Celestia as incompotent.
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Well also remember in this story we were still in midevial times. The humans were probally slaughtered in the revolt by the slaver unicorns, pegasi, and earth ponies, Celestia?, and any other species that they allied with. I'm pretty sure that humans can't use magic either so their only route left is guerilla warfare. Though as I said before, between Luna and Discord the humans might get some serious support as well from the other abolishonists. So I think you should stick around to see.
3527304And my axe!
what i really want to know is just where the fuck you are taking this.
if you are going for the way of logic of how the slaves where freed politically and ponies and humans live in harmony then hoo-lee sheet are in for a long story or a fuck ton of time-scips because it will take AT LEAST 10 year to destroy the slave culture and about 50 years for any sort of harmony to take place.
but i will not see the end of this story.
i give up.
this story, or rather it's universe, makes me sick. i truly feel nauseous of this disgusting, unmoral and horrible concept and i have reached a conclusion
i don't like this story. as well written as it is, it just makes me to fucking sick to read.
best of luck, i'm abandoning the thread
3529346
I thank you for giving it a shot.
I'm really glad that this was not another regurgitated episode. Truly, your authorship is much better when you are writing original material.
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There's a pretty good chance the author is misusing the tragedy tag. Most authors can't seem to figure out that what makes a tragedy is how the story ends. There's also the fact that he's misusing the dark tag. I would think that 40k words in we would be able to tell if there was a dark theme here, but there simply isn't one here. Sure you could say that slavery is justification, but a single aspect does not characterize a story, and the slave in this case is generally happy.
3529346
Or just one massive time skip at the end for an epilogue.
While I feel that your verbiage was unnecessarily harsh, I can certainly respect your decision not to read a story that revolves around a topic you find distasteful.
3529554 I agree, and honestly, that is what I am hoping for.
Grammar can use work in this chapter. Un-capitalised letters everywhere. ...and a couple misspellings, but capitalising, or lack thereof, is the biggest problem.
He really needs a better name than Chains. I mean I know ponies like to name things on... well things, but really Twilight? Chains? Insult to injury much.
Anyone else feel the romance is a bit iffy and stiff? Pun entirely intended, I regret nothing. Seems entirely forced to my cynical eyes, the way she talks about it. Otherwise, I'm glad you're done CTRL+C/CTRL+V'ing the show.
what i want to see is..
A. a six-man squad from killing floor
B. a bunch of specimens who get murdered by them
C.the squad trying to integrate into the society
(if you don't know what these things are search up killing floor in YouTube and click on the rooster-teeth video)
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I think i will, at least in hopes to see more of the bandage.
P.S= All you said is true but i stil would have expected humans to hold out on their own. I mean griffons don't have magic, neither minataurs, zebras etc.