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I think that's supposed to be here...?
hmm weell if i thinck right he can be a warrior or somethin in that stuff so great chapter
i hope see more some time soon or i'll brake into your house and steal all your waffles and they are good ones Hehe
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It lives. XD Muhaha.
Just kidding. Keep up the good work.
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Jokes on you, I'M OUT OF WAFFLES!!!
I was just going to bed and checking the site for the last time for today, suddenly you post. Fucking timing :D
I do hope the next chapter comes soon because you are a really good writer and I am heavily invested in this story.
Hell, I was reading this before you put on FIMfiction, hope it turns out well.
Good show! You could certainly feel suspense during the chapter. I don't know where the new guy is going, but I like it!
hey hey welcome back dude
Oh Oh this is the beginning of a glorious revolution to liberate the human race so show the pony race that enough is enough !
For The Human freedom!
For Cake!
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I've waited a long time for this
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i found it in 2 seconds o,o
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Found it, its in the tenth line.
"rules are meant to be broken...like buildings...or people" >:3
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I forgot I actually put a comma in there BRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD
( if you understand the reference then you're awsome)
After so long, at LONG last we get free humans that aren't slaves. A welcome change of pace. But the premise of this story's still offensive and insulting to the spirit of the show, no matter how much you try to pretty it up and justify it.
3435246 Found it HAHAHAHAHAAHAHHAAHHAHA what do I win?
For a second there, I thought it was Tarzan.
Fun fact: Humans are top-tier when it comes to endurance. If you need to know what kind of advantages he has in a fight, equines in peak condition get exhausted rapidly - comparable to a moderately out of shape human.
This is why people relied on runners instead of horses for carrying urgent messages long distance.
Good idea separating chains from the group, nice way to make your own story while getting rid of the monotonous dialogue. As for the speculation on who this guy is I'll pass, too little info to make any judgement calls without looking like a fool.
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Found it in 2 seconds. lol
Hurray for Ctrl+F
3435421 you know that there can hlep the humans fight back.
But anyway what you think about the fight for freedom?
3435274 hey i just like to ask what you think will happen if a human with a full auto ak47 come to the captaiol and how you think the ponies ( or gread ) will take to them having a weapon they never seen before?
3435126 What are "Waffles"?
3435429 hey dude i'ver been ask people this alot so here gose.
What you think if a smell gourp ( like around 30 ) have full auto ak47 with them and one end up in the captail you know cantlot and what you think the ponies aka the gruad will feel after showing the power of that tiny thing of a weapon
Its back! Yesyesyesyesyesyes!
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Well, theoretically, it being a weapon they've never seen before, they wouldn't know it was a weapon at first look. So if he was just carrying it around, he'd get some odd looks. But if he started shooting ponies, well, I'm sure a clever guard would be able to whip up a shield spell or something. Now as for whether that shield can stop bullets, we could get into a debate forever about, but if you're interested in writing a fanfic involving some asshole shooting cute little ponies, that's your business.
3435599 becasue if a human come to this world where human are slave and his all for an open mind set.
I was think about how the ponie will act to to him after telling human are slave and i tell you he will be piss to hell.
But if my may ask how you think the ponie will act after seeing like 20 of there top guard taken down by one human
Yeah, ponies enslaving humans?
Far-fetched as tits, even for a story.
This is an interesting concept i'll give it that.
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Horrified, confused, disillusioned, etc.
But luckily so long as I remain author of this story, no firearms will exist in the setting. It would kinda flip the story on its head. You're welcome to do as you wish with whatever stories you plan though.
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And that's the beauty of fanfiction.
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ak74+heavy upgraded in84 and in 89 and in 94 and in 01 and 07last time... normal ammo can go throught 10mm good steel like a no challenge, but 90 degree and 50metr shooting range... so make your bets
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Sure, but magic has a tendency to be as powerful as it conveniently needs to be for the narrative of a story. That's the problem with trying to find an answer for metaphysical things. But thanks for teaching us all a little bit about ballistics ^^
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I'm sure my spot in Pony Hell is being prepared nicely.
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Anyway I've just read first chapter and lol hard. It's good writing and all that jazz, but pony overlords? Humanity in slavery like a whole race? So much out of charecter but if people eating this... meh have your time
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Well, give the rest of it a read, and then perhaps come to a different conclusion.
I DEMAND MORE OF THIS DELICIOUS ACTION! MOREAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
i.imgur.com/Pubjkwu.gif
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Yay!
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In all due respect to the hardships of Africans in American History, thats actually a very small part of the history of slavery. One doesnt have to be a certain race to be a slave.
I'm just saying that its kinda missing the point to say that it would be exactly like Earth if the slaves happened to be Black. It already is very much like Earth's History in respect to slaves.
I wish there was more, but am happy with that I got! Cant wait for your next chapter.
and to anyone who says Pony's wouldn't take slaves or such, I asked you to first look at spike, then the Unicorn Nobility in Canterlot, just saying it seems to be something that was possible.
Gentle breeze guide your path, a warm smile welcome your return.
3435679 hey you think an ak can fire 270 win hunting rounds?
3435708 There is more to the ocean then the water dear friend.
3435815 Hey it's not my fault that i can't speak until i was 7 yrs old and can't read to save myself back than and only got like what D- or C- at best in high school ( btw i was out in last yr ) that it take a ass long time to spell things right or to make it sound right in the head.
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Thats, not quite it. There is slavery in more rural parts of Equestria, its just where the setting has been mostly is in the high society of Canterlot. Understand the different reasons one may wish to own a slave.
Either a cheap source of labor, or in the case of the extremely wealthy, a status symbol, like owning a really expensive car or house or rare piece of art.
There are other reasons, but those are the big ones.
I look forward to seeing why Celestia enslaved the ponies, and why she regrets it.