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THE NIGHT SHALL LAST FOREVER.
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
It lives!
The sad thing is that it isn't inaccurate in some respects...
YAYAYYAYAYAYAYAYYAYYAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYA UPDAYTUH!
im so nerouscited it is back since i might not see another for a while
How much of the episodes are you going to write before we get to the liberation part? Just asking.
I know I've asked about this before and how you've already replied about how much screen time these redo chapters would cover. But my advice is you should either wrap this arc up fast, make the next series of events radically different, or just move in your own direction with completely new content. While I understand the necessity to have these redone episodes present to establish all the main characters and such, but it's pretty tedious to read. I'm reading so much in between the lines that I end up cutting out half of what you are writing because it has simply already been said. Not to mention this combined with the fact that you take your time with updating. Nothing wrong with that at all and you've been pretty upfront with the schedule, but regardless it still takes it's toll on the story.
Been waiting for this. I'm guessing real life kept you away for so long?
>>Dry monkey
Probably in another story, like this one could be mostly about story intro and character Dev, where's the next could jump further into the story. I've seen this pattern in a lot of the longer fanfictions.
Holy shit! I almost forgot about the story completely! It's been that long!
Glad to see you're still writing!
YEEEEESSSSSSSS NEW CHAPTER
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Goody Goody Goody update!!!!!!
the writter lives! fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2013/103/d/5/praise_the_sun__by_bozikis-d61je08.png
YES! I've been waitng for an update to this fic! I do hope the next update won't take so long, 'cause this is getting really interesting!
WHOO FIRST COMMENT!!!
Well it's nice to know that this story is still going and has not been cancelled or abandoned. I really enjoy all the drama between twilight and chains, I know I'm a horrible person, but I don't care. Can't wait to read what happens next.
Peace out
After posting this, the page reloaded and all the comments before mine appeared.......Applejack was not amused.
The next one is soon? How soon?!
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Hopefully a couple of hundred, seeing as it's the slave perspective that makes this story original.
It's alive!!
I want to see Chains get blasted by Nightmares magic and/or the elements of harmony and change him.
Yes yes yes! moar plea- now hold on, Nmm has never seen a human before!
... liar. Good thing it wasn't a Pinkie Promise.
I hope you dont leave us on this cliffhanger for too long, im so nervouscited
It lives?
WOOHOO!!!! I have been waiting for Nightmare Moon to make her appearance in this to see how she reacts to Chains.
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It better be soon mister that is if you can get it done soon
My god...
2861004 i want to ask will the humans will rebill like how the USA in our history did have a Civil war?
3132502 Rebill, eh?
Well, I suspect a collections agency will be involved.
Ugh, I don't know why this has so many likes. \
The writing style is bland, it's primarily a 'tell'-based narrative. The characters are very flat.
And now it's just regurgitating the show's first episode, which makes no sense given the slave-based society.
3132542 sorry i mean rebellen.
I hope a gourp of humans arm with guns becasue after all the civil war was over slave anyway
Still lookin' forward to NMM and Luna's reaction to her people enslaving another species. Should be interesting.
Yes! the Queen of the night is back rejoice
3132574 WAR BREAKS OUT!!!!!
There's no quotation marks at the beginning of the sentence.
3132548 Rebellion*
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REBELLION!!! It's spelled 'REBELLION'!!!
What do they teach them in these schools?
(Oh yeah, communism....)
3132671 DUDE i live in the USA but am Laos and i was born in the USA, in a shit ass town name fresno and CA
i get noting but D- and C at spelling
YEEEEEEES NEW CHAPTER :D now I'm going to go read it :3
EDIT:
GAAAAAAAAH CLIFFHANGERS *sigh* I will be ok with this cliffhanger as long as you don't me wait as long as last time for a chapter pweezes :3 this story is too awesome to wait that long for an update
3131887 good lord. That's a whole lot. What you're basically doing is going over all the episodes from season 1 to 3, but just adding Chains in there? Jeezus. That's gonna take alot of stamina.
Mai enternal nights go soi soi soi soi soi soi soi soi soi soi soi soi soi soi
Boop.
Will all be waiting, so take your time.
It's not we're going anywhere anytime soon.
If it turns out that NMM recruited a butt ton of humans promising them freedom; I called it.
3133138 sorry, but spoilers. No. She just got free like five seconds ago, hows she going to recruit and organize an army of humans?
Another necromant ressurecting stories : P
3132251 I'll bet she's going to be furious about the fact that humans are now slaves, even as NMM, not Luna.
Nightmare Moon, Part 25... (6 months from now) Oh hey, there going into the forest to stop the evil version of princess Luna!
Sorry, sorry, I really do like this story, that's the only reason I give you a hard time.
Luna either gonna be pissed at Celestia for what she did to humans, or be super racist maybe? Calling it right now... either one goes
We will be waiting
3132731 At least it's not as bad as a few other fics where everything is EXACTLY the SAME.
The little things make it much better. Chains getting hit by rainbow instead, the apology war with Fluttershy and the other humans at AJs farm.
Similar, but different enough to not be boring.