Don't mind me, just a dreamer.
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It's mentor day at school, and Silvestream is the most excited out of anyone. And when she discovers that her mentor is going to be Maud Pie, she's ecstatic, even despite her friends saying she shouldn't be.
Written as an entry for the 2023 May Pairings Contest
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Very sweet story :)
I love that Maud has found someone who looks up to her. And it makes perfect sense that's it's Silverstream. I think it's a shame that she never hung out with Pinkie Pie in the show.
There are just a few too many little spelling and grammar errors for me to get into this. They're minor, but they add up and get distracting. I wish I could be more specific, but there are too many. Sorry I can't be more helpful.
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Sorry about that, I'm working on it but my grammar is not the best.
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