Most pegasi enjoy simple lives in peaceful towns. Happy families, many friends, and the bliss of soaring freely through open skies.
What if one pegasus filly was robbed of her home? Her family? Her own wings?
Join Roseluck in her final moments as a pegasus, before her life in Ponyville, while she recollects key moments of her life with her old friend Rainbow Dash.
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I thought the mods were banning for this?
1341115 I didn't mod. I was here when it got posted.
Craaaapppp.... Sad tag, but it's about Roseluck...... *le sigh*
I guess I'll put it in read it later, no way that I want to read this at night.
This is pretty great. I'll continue reading...
:D
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He meant that he thought the moderators of the website were not allowing comments like 'first'.
Mod has multiple meanings.
1341267 Oh. I didn't know. Should I delete it?
Though i liked Wingbury Academy far more mostly due to length, this one is going on the shelf. It certainly hits home for a rather specific group of people in this world, well done sir.
I'd bet I wasn't the only one who cheered out loud when the "Doctor" got his.
Brought myself around to reading this, I did like it. It is very well done, and I would especially like to see a follow up. DashxRoseluck friend shipping... Or heck shipping, even.
Amazing.
Seattle's Angels brought me here. I enjoyed this, thanks for writing.
I actually read Wingbury Academy a while ago, out of curiosity and the endorsements it had on the SFG thread over in /fic/. As much as it's fashionable to look down on 2nd person shipping, and as much as shipping really isn't a genre I read very much, I enjoyed that story a fair bit as well (largely because it had so much more than just romance). You have a very streamlined, readable prose style that never gets bogged down or caught on barbs of overdescription. Your multi-threaded plotting – both here and in Wingbury – also helps to keep the momentum going and maintain the reader's interest.
Although you've certainly got an interesting character here with Rosewing (glad I read Wingbury), Dr Zealheart, I felt, strained believability. He felt like the unholy combination of moustache-twirling cartoon villain and a psyhcopathic horror film antagonist, which didn't entirely gel with the other more grounded, realistically multifaceted characters. Still, he served his purpose and made for some tense scenes.
In short, these two stories of yours aren't the sorts I would normally read, but I'm glad I did anyway. Keep writing!
I liked the story a lot!
But I really want to know what happens afterward
Please continue!
This is great, truly not something I was expecting. Now, only one question remains: What does her cutie mark stand for?
Now this certainly looks like a different take on Roseluck. I'm definitely interested in reading this and I look forward to doing so.
This certainly gave Rosewing/Roseluck more depth.
Could you possibly expand even more on Wingbury Academy's universe? Or would that be too much?