After getting teleported against his will, an alicorn explores the Canterlot Castle to gather information in a disguise. Unfortunately, the disguise he took is very recognizable and infamous.
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Well, I am certainly interested where this is going! ^^
This sounds very interesting story that I hope makes me laugh?
Kind of thought he would kept the disguise for a while. But this is interesting story
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Sorry, I would love to keep it longer. However, I don't know how to make it longer. That's why I'm amazed at writers who can reach the 3,000 words in 1 chapter
Your alicorn count is wrong. You said there were 4 but you named 5.
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Indeed, it’s even more wild how there’s first chapters with 10,000 words
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Oops
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It's crazy but also respect for their dedication.
I find this very interesting
This is very interesting, he thought the year is 2029, and 1000 year without "her love" mean he last meet "her" in 1029, 586 years before 1615
I wonder if he meets his 500-year-old self running around in equestria
Imma be honest, I wasn't expecting much from the first chapter, but this one was funny and touching!! Looking forward to seeing what ley lines you follow next!
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I'm not expecting too much either. This is my very first time writing a story, and the birth of this story was caused by an idea that popped in my head.
However, thank you for the compliment
11555257
I started barely able to reach 1000 words when I first started writing. But that number increased over time.
I look forward to seeing where this story goes.
Oh boy, I'm loving this already!
Wish the show reveal that. I mean the show did showed life lessons but stopped doing that.
Update it quickly!😭
WOW this is a good story so far, and written quite engagingly too!
I wonder where his past self is at?
First of all, you earned a thumbs up and a follow because you have written an interesting story. As far as your english goes, it's not too bad. Sometime stories are hard to read and follow because of how choppy the english is. Your english is pretty good. There are some odd sentences, like the part where he makes eye contact with the chef, but over all, not bad at all.
Please do continue.
Monk
"Anon had never known a bat pony to shy away from carnage. They were cuter than kittens, and much more bloodthirsty." -HeideKnight
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At some part of the Canterlot Castle, enjoying the life of no work or duties of a Prince.
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Thank you so much!
I also agree the cuteness of the batponies. That's the reason for my profile pic.
Whenever there is a new chapter, but its been a long time between chapters, I often go back and reread the last couple. Just so I can remember the story. I don't know why I didn't catch it before, but You have a sentence where you say Blueblood never learned teleport and teleport is common. I don't think it should be common. While Twilight uses it all the time, she is a magical genius. I think you should keep teleport a rare spell and replace what he never bothered to learn something like a shield or stun spell. You can easily make the change without changing the story.
Just a minor thing I noticed.
Ok and I loved this story. Well done. Don't forget to change the story to "Complete"
Monk
"Yes, I will eat the Fear Turkey." -Illua
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You are actually right. I should have gone even nore basic like the simple shield spell instead of teleportation.
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Why tho? This feels overly paranoid.
From the reactions we can all guess that he look like Blueblood lmao.
It's descendants, not predecessors.
Story was nice. It is your first story, so I can excuse the flaws in them.
Awesome work! I hope we get to see a another story of Prince Blueblood. It's really great ^^