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Israel Yabuki


Canon x OC, that's my specialty, both in art and in MLP stories

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This is something Rarity would love.

Great first chapter can't wait to see what else is in store

awesome ww2 post story and la noire what not to love cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

No doubt, based on the video game LA Noire, one of my favorites.

Huh. Interesting start. Normally I’d probably avoid stories like this, but after reading this, I’m now interested in seeing more. Don’t take too long with the next chapter of this. I’m looking forward to the boys meeting Somnambula. Also, both the boys being in an open relationship with all 7 girls was a nice touch. Keep up the good work.

(In best 40s gangster accent) Things are 'bout to get real looney 'round these parts, see?

great chapter mate keep it up can't wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Very good work here. Nice world building for the 1940s, and the boys are starting to settle in. Very pleasant surprise that the first woman they meet is a young and very attractive Granny Smith, who knows how to use her big juicy “apples” to keep the boys in line. Can’t wait to see how things progress with Marie Ann. And what about that mystery singer at the club? Will we see her again? And then the big shoot out at the end will obviously have some grizzly consequences for our 2 heroes. Meanwhile in the present day, Sunset and the girls begin their plan to find their beloved boys. How will that go? Good work again pal. Hope the next chapter comes out sooner.

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symptom99 he makes some impressive art. His prices are fair, too

great awesome chapter mate keep it up worth the wait cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

sweet chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

I was just gonna say "Israel Yabuki" is a wild name for a pony but then I noticed it's your author name too :twilightoops:

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lol, well it is my stage name.

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