Huh. Interesting start. Normally I’d probably avoid stories like this, but after reading this, I’m now interested in seeing more. Don’t take too long with the next chapter of this. I’m looking forward to the boys meeting Somnambula. Also, both the boys being in an open relationship with all 7 girls was a nice touch. Keep up the good work.
This is something Rarity would love.
Great first chapter can't wait to see what else is in store
awesome ww2 post story and la noire what not to love cant wait for the next chapter
No doubt, based on the video game LA Noire, one of my favorites.
Huh. Interesting start. Normally I’d probably avoid stories like this, but after reading this, I’m now interested in seeing more. Don’t take too long with the next chapter of this. I’m looking forward to the boys meeting Somnambula. Also, both the boys being in an open relationship with all 7 girls was a nice touch. Keep up the good work.
(In best 40s gangster accent) Things are 'bout to get real looney 'round these parts, see?