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Moproblems Moharmoney


Because Rainbow Lasers Solve Everything

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When the world was old Gaea Everfree roamed, but now...now things are different. The sun has truly set, and with it comes the darkness.


My entry to the Sunset Shimmer x EG MLP villains shippers group competition, Former Relationships.

With many thanks to my long suffering pre-readers and editors, Trellia and Krack-Fic Kai

Featured on 7/3/2023, thank you all so much.

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Comments ( 11 )

It was unsettling watching Gloriosa's chromelanin fade and shift in texture.

Magically sensitive pigment proteins have such fascinating behavior, don't they?

Great stuff. And I get the feeling that Star Swirl might not even remember Gaea if asked about her. I'm not entirely sure who the Silver Witch is, but you did a magnificent job of capturing the alien perspective of a nature avatar with no need or desire to resemble a human consciousness... save for one almost-human in particular. Thank you for it, and best of luck in the judging.

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I'm sadly two days late for the judging, though I'd appreciate their thoughts none the less. I also forgot to credit you for the Chromelanin, which I'll do post-haste in my blog!

Thanks for reading though : )

Very nice, sad but nice

i cannot help but lament her. If one truly acts within their nature, and cannot break from it, then they are not truly evil. Gaea was not truly evil. I hope she one day finds a new light, a new form in the world. She deserves another chance.

a little all over the place and i dont get some things, but mostly, i love it. i need more of this romance.

a little confusing because it is not disclosed if the 'horses' were there before the 'man' or the 'horses' traveled to the world of the 'man' before they advanced but it was really nice

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Some of the implications will be extrapolated on in future fics.

FUCK YOUUUUU STARSWIRL

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"Line up, line up folks! One of a kind OH-FISHAL 'Beat up Starswirl' Bats on offer today!"

"Not that I have any qualms with such a terrific product, oh brother of mine, but what does differ these fine examples of wood work from the humble base ball bat?"

"Ah dear brother, this is why I take the lead on sales pitches. It's all about the show, the feel, the razamataz!"

"It's nothing is it."

"Very astute Flim, you're on fine form today."

This was both somber and tragic: not justifying the villain's actions while treating them like an animal that can't control their instincts.

Also, the opening lines prove you have the soul of a poet.

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Thank you kindly, I've dabbled with poetry in the past. I really should get back into it.

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