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Ravenor


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Splitting off Ponyville into a vassal state... That should certainly prove interesting. We'll see what come of it.
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What? I didn't see anything else noteworthy.

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Twilight's taking the offer pretty well, all things considered. Imagine going from a typical boring day of long train rides and cock sucking, to suddenly having that bombshell dropped on you.

This is gonna be good!

A new Ravenor fic? Today is a good day.

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Agreed! I love the worlds he creates and the little details he adds.

Though I do wish they were a bit longer.

“I think it looks good too,” Fluttershy said softly from her own throne, her stomach round again with another pair of foals, “But isn’t Princess Lunas and Princess Celestia's bigger?”

She got pregnant? When?

Licking her lips, she lit her horn and brushed her mane back, “Thank you, lieutenant,” she said with a smile, “I really needed that.”
Captain Steel Cloud slipped off the couch and managed a salute, “M-my pleasure, Princess. A-all part of our duty.”

Oh dear. Might want to get the rank fixed there. Twilight may be working to maintain a good relationship with her guard captain, but that kind of flub won't help.

Licking her lips, Twilight smiled at him as she scooted up to sit, “Thank you, Sergeant. I needed that.”
“M-my pleasure, Princess,” Sergeant White Cloud said, trying to get his breath back. He was wearing the gold armor of the solar guard which Twilight thought fit quite well against his pure white feathers and coat.

Well, it is the guard's duty to serve the princess, isn't it?

Trotting off the train, Twilight checked briefly as she moved past a small mirror to make sure she didn’t have cum anywhere before she jumped down onto the platform.

Even if she did have cum: would she care to remove it?
Ponies might dismiss it as part of her regalia.

Twilight gasped and trembled, breaking the kiss and moving around, raising her rear and Celestia moved to pull her close, guiding her into another deep kiss as she thrust her golden regalia strapon into her students soaking wet pussy, pounding her hard from the start.

Maybe Zecora has a potion to give her the real thing, at least temporary.

Rarity licked her lips, “So you are our Princess properly now?” she asked, rubbing her cheek against Spike's cock where he sat on the armrest of her throne next to the map table.

:moustache:: "What? I may be Twilight's Number One Assistant, but that doesn't mean I can't help the other girls from time to time."

“Thank you,” Twilight said and smiled a bit wryly, “I just need to get used to having this strapon swaying around beneath me. Just feel so strange.”
“I think it looks good too,” Fluttershy said softly from her own throne, “But isn’t Princess Lunas and Princess Celestia's bigger?”
“Ah like the size,” Applejack said with a smile, giving Twilight a kiss on the cheek.
“You would,” Twilight said with a smile, “I’m the same size as your brother.”

:ajsmug:: "Exactly my point."

Spike roared, pulling back and flame flickered in his muzzle as he came all over her face and mane.
Rarity giggled, eyes closed.
As it died down, Rarity carefully opened one eye and then the other, streaks of white cum across her purple mane.
“Of course, sexy,” she said with a smile, “I’ll have some concepts for you to inspect at the end of the week,” before she started to slowly lick Spikes cock clean, not doing a thing to try to clean herself up.

:raritywink:: "That's the best way to keep your coat white and shiny. In fact, if Spike has time he really should visit Sweetie to give her a coating, too."


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Considering what the girls are doing all day it's actually surprising she is the only one pregnant.

Twilight loved blowjobs. They let her clear her head, focusing on just one thing. Just push everything else to the side.

Royal Guards: "The same goes for us! The best stress relief possible, helps a lot to stay focused during long shifts."

Twilight considered that for a long moment, playing with her pen as she thought. As nice as a nice cock was, mares were a lot of fun too. And quite frankly, a lot better at cuddling after.

You also don't have to worry about leaving the alone for too long.
If necessary they can keep each other busy without needing your intervention.


Good story so far!
I look forwards to see where it goes.
Some readers said those chapters are a bit short, but I personally like this style.

It's also good to see this whole story of the "Evil Cadance" being continued.

I loved the original story, and I'm so glad to see it getting a sequel. This is great so far, and I can't wait to see more!

“Good morning, my Princess,” he murmured against her neck, nuzzling softly, “I hope your wakeup was to your liking?”

:twilightsmile:: :heart: :heart: :heart:

Then there was the last part and Twilight lowered her head, letting peach fit her horn with a dual filigree ring, one close to the base, one close to the tip, the silver filigree following the spirals of her horn. Anytime she used her magic, it would make her horn tingle in pleasure. A symbol of her power and a constant reminder to use it well.

Cool idea!
I suspect she might start to look for excuses to cast spells, even if it's juts to levitate a nearby pebble.

Ah, the symbolism of the regalia. Always a rich source of cultural world building.

I adore all of the kissing and affection they have when greeting someone.

Alas, business before pleasure is important. Especially when the alternative is Applejack chewing out some poor, undeserving CPA.

Also, upcoming party! Should be plenty of perfectly normal activities to look forward to.

It's armor, Twilight. Protection has to take priority. This isn't some prurient fantasy where someone could get away with a chainmail bikini in an active war zone. :rainbowwild:

I love Twilight's relationships with the Apple siblings, very cute.

Covering along her back in segments, arching up to keep the hips and rear uncovered while stopping in a leather loop, keeping the tail raised. The tail tied in a high bob. She was wearing a helmet with protection along her nose and for her cheekbones.
Twilight eyed Rainbow, “That looks very similar to the solar guards armor,” she said and gleaned to Rarity, “Very practical.”

Better hope you'll never get attacked from behind...

Twilight frowned and ducked down a bit before she looked to Rarity, “It covers his sheath? Are you sure about that, he won’t be able to use his cock on duty.”

This is the normal armor according to the official show.
May make you think...
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Rarity smiled at Twilight, “So what do you think, Princess?”
“It’s perfect.”

I agree!
This also summarized my thought about this chapter.
Good work!

A lovely little capstone to the story. Just another day in Ponyville.

Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.

Every episode was meant to be 30 mins longer buty they had to get the rating down....

What a fun story! :heart:

I’ll send a letter asking Shining Armor to visit next heat season. Mac can give you foals while Shining gives me some.

Woah nelly, I really want to see that. :raritystarry:

Very good!

Wasn't Twilight supposed to get some piercings?

Man I hope there's more of these

Fever dream high in the quiet of the night
You know that I caught it
Bad, bad boy
Shiny toy with a price
You know that I bought it

Killing me slow, out the window
I'm always waiting for you to be waiting below
Devils roll the dice, angels roll their eyes
What doesn't kill me makes me want you more

And it's new, the shape of your body
It's blue, the feeling I've got
And it's ooh, whoa, oh
It's a cruel summer
It's cool, that's what I tell 'em
No rules in breakable heaven
But ooh, whoa oh
It's a cruel summer
With you

Hang your head low
In the glow of the vending machine
I'm not dying
You say that we'll just screw it up in these trying times
We're not trying

So cut the headlights, summer's a knife
I'm always waiting for you just to cut to the bone
Devils roll the dice, angels roll their eyes
And if I bleed, you'll be the last to know

Oh, it's new, the shape of your body
It's blue, the feeling I've got
And it's ooh, whoa, oh
It's a cruel summer
It's cool, that's what I tell 'em
No rules in breakable heaven
But ooh, whoa, oh
It's a cruel summer
With you

I'm drunk in the back of the car
And I cried like a baby coming home from the bar (oh)
Said, "I'm fine, " but it wasn't true
I don't wanna keep secrets just to keep you
And I snuck in through the garden gate
Every night that summer just to seal my fate (oh)
And I screamed for whatever it's worth
"I love you, " ain't that the worst thing you ever heard?
He looks up grinning like a devil

It's new, the shape of your body
It's blue, the feeling I've got
And it's ooh, whoa, oh
It's a cruel summer
It's cool, that's what I tell 'em
No rules, in breakable heaven
But ooh, whoa, oh
It's a cruel summer
With you

I'm drunk in the back of the car
And I cried like a baby coming home from the bar (oh)
Said, "I'm fine, " but it wasn't true
I don't wanna keep secrets just to keep you
And I snuck in through the garden gate
Every night that summer just to seal my fate (oh)
And I screamed for whatever it's worth
"I love you, " ain't that the worst thing you ever heard?

Comment posted by Dat_Random_Fur deleted Oct 22nd, 2023
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