Licking her lips, she lit her horn and brushed her mane back, “Thank you, lieutenant,” she said with a smile, “I really needed that.”
Captain Steel Cloud slipped off the couch and managed a salute, “M-my pleasure, Princess. A-all part of our duty.”

Oh dear. Might want to get the rank fixed there. Twilight may be working to maintain a good relationship with her guard captain, but that kind of flub won't help.

Twilight loved blowjobs. They let her clear her head, focusing on just one thing. Just push everything else to the side.

Royal Guards: "The same goes for us! The best stress relief possible, helps a lot to stay focused during long shifts."

Twilight considered that for a long moment, playing with her pen as she thought. As nice as a nice cock was, mares were a lot of fun too. And quite frankly, a lot better at cuddling after.

You also don't have to worry about leaving the alone for too long.
If necessary they can keep each other busy without needing your intervention.

Good story so far!
I look forwards to see where it goes.
Some readers said those chapters are a bit short, but I personally like this style.

It's also good to see this whole story of the "Evil Cadance" being continued.

I loved the original story, and I'm so glad to see it getting a sequel. This is great so far, and I can't wait to see more!