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I'm intrigued by this story hope to see more and great first chapter and wish for many more to come can't wait for more.
oh boy
This story definitely has an edge:D
Okay Celestia literally controls the freaking sun and by my calculation is way older than Muzan and the story implies that she's taught Twilight that we spelled she knows something's telling me that encounter would not go well for Muzan on paper either way great story I'm interested in hearing more
It would be funny if Muzan or any demon he creates can’t even get close to Celestia because of her connection to the sun. Literally making them no threat to her, but still a threat to those she cares about.
I feel it would be very simple to deal with the demons in Equestria. Simply, the Main 6, along with Spike and Yoriichi locate the demons and somehow lead them out to an open area. Toriichi will make sure that no demons get too close at the same time as they don’t get too far away. When the time is right, Twilight and Spike will signal too Celestia to immediatelly raise the sun and POOF, all the demon burn!
Please don’t exhaust yourself too much:D
Yes, what I was hoping for!
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thx, writing these stories is tiring -_-
Great story telling so far 👏
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Thx :)
Do any of the female Demon slayer characters appear in this story?
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you forget that the sun is not just some tool Celestia have free use upon, but rather a responsibility that she should be careful of, because literaly the whole World depens on it.
altering the night and day cycle like that and constantly do so would have it's consequences.
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no, just Yoriichi and his brother
Well this story definitely is hot I hope it doesn’t give me a sunburn:D
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Why?
Why doesn't Celestia just raise the Sun or doesn't she know that sunlight kills demons
Because it would mess up the balance of sun and moon. Plus there wouldn’t be a story if she did that, lol
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True and thanks for clearing that up
Well that's unfortunate
Why didn't you answer my question?
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to answer your question, no, none of the female characters make an appearance.
Well that chapter was a bit dark:D
This story is interesting but I honestly wished that he would have offered to teach Celestia Sun breathing or basically Celestia would have asked him to try to teach the other soldiers sun breathing
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Don't worry, I got the idea stored away for later ;)
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Thank you
Have not read the head but I doubt you can convince anyone here rainbow is going to end up betraying anyone. Singapore the same route what's his name did but if it does happen that would be quite interesting to see. I'm at the store we're not having death flags already
Is it bad that I wanted the exchange to instead go more like...
Rainbow: What the fuck is wrong with you? You walk in here pretending to care and force my hoof to spill, than when I do you laugh in my fucking face and when I call you out on it, you shrug it off with 'don't be silly'. It's not silly to me! I reveal something personal to a friend and instead of at least pretending to take it seriously and actually show you care, you just laugh!
Applejack: Hey now Rainbow I didn't....
Rainbow: Don't! Want! To hear! It! Now fuck off!
Yeah, Applejack could and should have handled it better or at least get properly called out for it, because laughing off her concerns even if they are silly isn't the way to do it.
interesting, most interesting.
I'm pretty sure that's a leap out of character for the moon brother. From what I remember reading, Sunbro's brother ignored Dayman early in their childhoods, and only became interested in him closer to the middle and end of their time in the same house.
1142708That'll be explained later ;)
This is amazing series. I let it gather up for a couple weeks and I come back and it feels good as I remember. The only thing I don't find believable about the story is moving hasn't killed enough families.
There are seven elements of harmonies but there's not one dead family
Why was this canceled?
Please we need a part 2
Now we need a sequel. Only if you finished this story:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/536120/blight-of-the-war-horse-reforged
Hi, i discovered this in a Crossover Group, definitely excited for part 2