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Hydreigon_Omega


I'm a universe hopping, goofy, pony loving dragon.

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Rule number one never pissed off a demons

I enjoyed the retelling of the idea with a demon since I did enjoy a 'man in a mare's world'. Though please put your story through a spellcheck an example being the title. It should 'Duo of darkness' not 'dou of darkness'.

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Thank you, Sometime I am horrible at spelling

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I thought it was correct cause Dou meant both or all in Chinese.

Celestia and Luna use a spell to summon vessels to restore a lost gender to equistria, they didn't expect to get demons

I thought it was going to become this:
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If it wasn't for the fact that this site has only english stories (as far as i seen) i would have agreed with you.

Even if they summoned humans I'm sure they'd get some resistance. Well good jobs with the first chapter really can't wait to see what Meliodas and Zeldris does next

I didn't think I would like this as much as I do. But really, really like this. :pinkiehappy: Hope Meliodas and Zeldris can find some peace and acceptance in their situation.

I'm really liking this story. I hope Meliodas and Zeldris can get along with the Elements. :twilightsmile:

Those two Whore Princesses frickin deserve it! Plus, for their sake. The Mane Six DOESN'T want to do the same mistake like their "Princesses" did.

“Princesses.” A guard mare came up to them and bowed, “NEWS directly from ponyville.”

“Speak my subject.” Luna said

“There has been a murder in ponyville, the first murder in equestria for nearly 500 years.”

“How many are dead?” Celestia asked

“1 mare reduced to ash, and 3 more ARE wounded, all of which were found unconscious in a BANK they robbed.”

“Thank you for bringing this to our attention, return to your post.” Celestia said, dismissing the guard, “Luna, it pains me to no end to say this, but we are facing gods as our opponents. We can't just solve this problem just by blindly throwing the elements of harmony at them, but if the elements don't work on them, THEN equestria is doomed."

Besides some minor mistakes I have seen to help you fix this.


This entire part definitely infuriates me. Mainly at Celestia and Luna. Aren't they forgetting that those Mares that were killed/heavily injured are CRIMINALS!!!!

Robbing a Bank, and not to mention the worst part of having to ALMOST Killing Pinkie Pie ( ONE of the most important Ponies for Equestria's Protection.), and the poor Mrs. Cake's Foals in the fire?!


But luckily, Meliodas and Zeldris save their lives, and even rebuild the bakery. But sadly, EVEN after all of that happening. Celestia and Luna somehow ignore that important part. And only FRICKIN care about the CRIMINAL Mares Lives???!!!

Wow! They are definitely SUPER Racist/Xenophobic, probably Sexist, and SO Selfish to care for their "precious" Little Ponies. Rather than seeing the bigger picture. 🙄


IF the Two Demon Demi-God Brothers found a Sex Slaving Trafficking Ring. And then save the poor Slaves, and TORTURING/KILLING the Heartless Slavers.

BUT, when Celestia and Luna show up. That they were angry at the Brothers for killing the Slavers. RATHER than not praising them for saving the slaves, and getting rid of the Heartless Flith ( The Slavers ) from this earth.


I would really want the Two Brothers be SUPER Pissed at them, and just say "F*** It!". By BEATING and ALMOST KILLING the absolute Shit out of those "Princesses" Dumbass IDIOTS!!!!!!

Maybe BREAKING/RIPPING their Horns and Wings off for good measure.


Consequences over their Death be DAMN!!!!!!

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Thx for the spell check, so now I will match your rant with my own mini rant:

First of all, The guard did not report on the burning bakery because, for ponies, it is impossible to reverse time in such a way that only a specific part of the land has had its time reversed.
Secondly, If Celestia and Luna had heard about the bakery burning down, whether it was true or not, they would've made sure that pinkie pie was okay along with the cake family.
And thirdly, I think I am doing a good job about painting them in a evil light so far, don't you think so.

P.s. your rant gave me a good Idea to include something in the upcoming chapters.
P.P.s The criminals will get the fair share of punishment in between chapter

Hey this is really good I hope to see more chapters soon

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Pound for pound, primates are by far one of the stronger mammals, the gorilla is the strongest mammal pound for pound as they can lift ten times their body weight. Far as I know no other mammal can boast the same feat, humans are around 4-10 times weaker than a silverback, so while we are a lesser threat head on, our intellect makes us VASTLY more dangerous to fight. Humans are damn near masters of combat in all its forms, compared to the ponies(it is commonly said that Equestria has had close to a thousand years of peace), so in that department they suck worse than the worlds sourest lemon. Unarmed we aren't that much of a threat to something like a pony, but a human is RARELY truly unarmed. We often carry things that can EASILY be used as a weapon.

Who wrote Man In A Mare's World?

"It is simple really. Take a look around you." Meliodas said gesturing to the crowd, "If what you said were true, then killing you would have caused both the sun and moon to stop moving, taking thousands of innocent lives. Not to mention you two are responsible for summoning both me and my brother here."

Actually, it's WAY more than just a thousand lives. This is a world ending catastrophe after all. Try over millions to even Billions of innocent lives.


Unless you're making Ponykind to have a very small population than humanity?

If you want to read the story, this story is inspired by, then click this link.

Story isn't on fimfic anymore.

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